Re: Abandoned Batch #857 - Nightmare Eyes

Postby jolteon » Sun Apr 02, 2017 11:41 am

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username; jolteon, trying out for SelimPride.
name; Starburst
gender; female
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"I don't paint dreams or nightmares, I paint my own reality."
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Personality-
Starburst is a very quiet and caring viscet. She can sometimes have trouble conversing with other viscets- words can get the best of her sometimes, so she stays quiet most of the time. The viscling loves to lend a helping hand to a being in need, as she is very smart for her young age, she can come up with a solution on a whim.

If you do manage to get her to speak, you can expect some sort of crabby comeback to come out of Starburst's mouth. She honestly can't help it, she just reacts on impulse. It's costed her many friendships in the past, and she is sort of looked down upon by the adult viscets in her community, because of her nasty attitude.

Even though her attitude can be snarkish at times, it quickly shuts down when she notices someone in need of help. Starburst becomes very concerned for that being, and wants to make sure their problem is solved before she leaves. The viscling really wishes others were more willing to seek out for her help, but they most likely think that her bad attitude overpowers her kindness. (192/300)

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Short Story-
Silence. It can be both a good and bad thing for Starburst. Years of being alone can sometimes make the silence unbearable before she has to break it, but on the other hand it can help her relax when she's stressed out.

Today, silence is a good thing.

The viscling is currently curled up under the shade of a tree, book in hand. The viscling loves to read. She especially likes informative books, as she strives to get smarter.

She hums in content. Yes, today is a good day-

CRASH.

Starburst yelped in surprise and looked around. She got up and ran in the direction she heard the loud sound come from.

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Getting closer, the viscling could smell smoke and fuel burning, and could hear the curses of a male viscet. Pulling away a couple of bushes, she found exactly what she was sensing.

An airplane was laying there, banged up and smoking. Two viscets were inspecting the damage, they seemed to be the ones who were in the plane. 'Great. Oh god, this is fantastic', she heard the darker viscet complain.

The viscling decided to reveal herself. She walked up behind the two viscets and spoke up.

"Hey, do you need any help with... that?" She pipes up.

They both turned around in alarm. "Jesus, what is a kid doing in a forest like this? Go home." The darker viscet said. Starburst felt her temper flare, but decided to keep it down for the sake of helping them out.

"Do you need help with that or not? I'm sure that staring at it won't fix it," She backfires. The other viscet standing there let out a laugh.

"Yeah, okay. Sea, I'm gonna head back to base to get some help, since it's not far and all. See ya!" The viscet runs off into the bushes,
leaving the remaining two alone.

"Great. I'm stuck with a kid who thinks they can fix a plane," An exasperated look on his face, he looks down at the viscling. "Alright, you think you can do something? Go ahead." 'Sea' kicks a toolbox over to Starburst.

The viscling smirks mischievously. What that viscet didn't know was that she has read a plethora of books on airplanes. She quite likes them, actually. She grabs the screwdriver, and gets to work.

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Wiping the grime off of her brow, she drops the tool that was in her grasp. The male viscet looks at her, unimpressed.

"That should do it. Try cranking it up," she says. He snorts, gets in the plane, and cranks it.

It turns on successfully, with no weird rattling or anything. 'Sea' whips his head back to the viscling, eyes wide in surprise.

"What in the world... I guess Zvan went to go get help for nothing," He mumbles. "She probably won't be back anyway." He gets out of the plane and faces the viscling.

"Thanks I guess. Didn't think you could do that," He looks somewhere other than Starburst's eyes. The viscling smiles. (500/500)

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"And then the earth, the world, the planet,
the galaxy, and the entire solar system went crazy."

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Credits-
500 words: 500/500
song
gif
1 extra - writing: 192/300 (or 220/300 if the quotes count as well)
1 extra - art
Seamus owned by me (jolteon)
Zvan owned by mareep

for extra confirmation, if i do manage to win this viscet will be going to SelimPride!
winner may keep my art!
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Re: Abandoned Batch #857 - Nightmare Eyes

Postby cyberdragon725 » Tue Apr 11, 2017 1:41 pm

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Re: Abandoned Batch #857 - Nightmare Eyes

Postby cyberdragon725 » Tue Apr 11, 2017 1:45 pm

Oh gee, I never closed this. XD Officially closed for judging!
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Re: Abandoned Batch #857 - Nightmare Eyes

Postby cyberdragon725 » Thu Apr 13, 2017 2:36 pm

Oh man, you guys seriously made this one tough comp to judge. In the end, there were two forms that I really found some competition between. After some serious consideration on my part, I finally feel that I broke them apart pretty well and found a comfortable winner. Congratulations, Jolteon! I found the art was astounding and the short story you gave really gave a good read on the little one's character. That being said, I'd like to offer an RU to trans! I loved the personality you gave and that song is one of my favorites. XD Please pm me and let me know if you're interested!
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✁ Make adopts
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Re: Abandoned Batch #857 - Nightmare Eyes

Postby fromage » Thu Apr 13, 2017 2:56 pm

HEY! congrats, Jolteon/Selim on winning the babe!!

congrats to you too, trans, for the RU! excited to see what it'll be! cx
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Re: Abandoned Batch #857 - Nightmare Eyes

Postby trans » Thu Apr 13, 2017 3:07 pm

      congrats!!! your form was super cool and the song was really nice! ;0;
      and tysm!!!!!! i pm'd you already, but thank u again! <3
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Re: Abandoned Batch #857 - Nightmare Eyes

Postby funderful;; » Thu Apr 13, 2017 3:33 pm

super-huge congrats you two! <3
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Re: Abandoned Batch #857 - Nightmare Eyes

Postby Kokichi_Ouma » Thu Apr 13, 2017 3:38 pm

Ooo yes thank you! <3
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Re: Abandoned Batch #857 - Nightmare Eyes

Postby jolteon » Sat Apr 15, 2017 11:13 am

THANK YOU SO SO MUCH <33 this viscet will definitely be in good hands!
congrats to you as well trans, your form was gorgeous! the RU is wonderful as well! <3
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