by néktar » Mon Feb 20, 2017 5:28 pm
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comic lost arm in dads workshop, dad created his arm
grey scale??
p I enters work shop (young)
p II looks around, finds toys on shelf above tool table
p III climbs on table w/ large saw and tools
p IV dad walks in sees son and yells
p V slips and hits on switch and tries to get off
p VI gets stuck and arm is lost
p VII few years later, created arm laying on table after fathers funeral
p VIII sees it and smiles thanks dad
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by cocoa » Mon Feb 20, 2017 6:26 pm
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Name: Octavia Vyner
Shine: XX (the placement on the tail is as shown in the comic)
Comic:Lyrics are in orange, taken from the song
Dark Necessities by Red Hot Chili Peppers. I recommend listening to the whole thing as you look at the comic :o Lyric transcript
here.
I will include the handwritten text that is in the comic below the pages in print as it can be difficult to read xD
I am Octavia Vyner. (This is me.)
And (all the things I’ve done) what I’ve become
I’ve been hoping you’d return to me from whichever land you wandered to
I built an empire for you
(BEWARE shadow queen of Vekar [Empire] O. Vyner)
“Look at this rowdy child! We shouldn’t have had her to begin with.”
“So? It was an accident. I too only wanted a quiet life in Uyaepitor. We should have left the Vekar Empire years ago.”
“Where are you going?”
They didn’t say a word.
But - it was not strange for children to be left in the Vekar Empire.
After all, the Vekar Empire was one of the most dangerous kingdoms.
“Everyone wants power. Your parents will return if you have it.”
I was quick to believe, to latch onto hope.
So I took power the only way I knew how to.
Many people hated me and feared me once I had gained power. And I paid.
But I didn’t care.
To me, it was something I had to do.
(I built an arm with one and used magic to connect it to my body)
I now had power. I called out to my parents…. [Do you want it now?]
They didn’t want it.
I waited for them. But I was not strong enough.
I began to take in lost animals to fill the void in my heart.
(At times, they feared me.) ***
It feels like a rebellion. (but a good one, so unlike that snake’s and I)
People judged me. “What is this violent, unconventional kalon doing?”
(Some days, I felt like I could hear their thoughts.)*** = Disclaimer. They did not fear her because she was an animal abuser - she cares for her animals well enough - but because of her dangerous track record as a quasi-dictator.
- Look! The Towering Mountains that the Vekar Empire sits at the base of...
Beyond them, the Kingdom That Has Been Lost for a thousand years ---
THE KINGDOM OF AEGNIS
(((<-- ancient cosmic Guardian keeping people from Aegnis))
(maybe they are there. Surely they should have caught word of me by now..
and that’s the only place they wouldn’t have heard of me.)
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