by doktor monty » Mon Jan 23, 2017 1:39 pm
xx aLRIGHT!
So if you know me, I tend to not go for large, impress me esc contests that really push people and make them stressed. I like doing things that make everyone's time really chill, and just so that they have a good time!
So for this contest, I'd like a story.
Now I realized this was a little similar to the other contest, so I'm putting a little twist on it! You see, I love using a movie's soundtrack for writing stories and developing characters, and I'd like to see how other people fair with this method.
What I'm saying is, pick out a movie, and use it's soundtrack to inspire a story about this kalon kit!
And just like the other contest, you can go do as much as you want, but the more you write the longer it will take to judge- blah blah blah
whatever, right?
edit: you can have the same soundtrack as someone else!
edit 2: amount of writing does not equal quality! Make what you write pristine and easy to read!
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username;
kalon name;
movie soundtrack you used (link or title);
inspired story;
you can always go over the little skeleton of the form above (meaning extras), but I'm honestly just looking for some nice, calming music and something equally comforting to read.
END DATE IS IN A MONTH
2/22/17
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by peppermintkenny » Mon Jan 23, 2017 1:42 pm

username; Ame,
kalon name; Wisp
movie soundtrack you used (link or title); Zootopia's full soundtrack.
inspired story;
Wisp was moving to a whole new city, And was determined to make it fast. Her hometown was terrible with nasty and disgusting people. Once she moved to her home town, She met so many new friends and found the path she wanted to take in life. Wisp had a few bumps and ridges in the new town she lived in but overall it was a complete success. She absolutely loved living there. Wisp snuck around the police department being very stealthy as her paws made a loud clicking noise. She walked down the hallway of the office to find someone standing still. Two guards who grabbed her quickly questioning her. She nudged them off running out of the building, being chased by many. She hopped over a log sliding into a ditch and soon hopping out to make her way to safety. Soon Wisp was in the big part of the town which included a popular crowd of kalons rushing past her with very professional looks on their faces. She soon arrived to a wheat and flower filled meadow which included a small gasp of wind. She calmly walked through the tall wheat as she smiled at the sun that set in the distance. She layed down back flat shutting her eyes and letting her dreams take her into a different world. A nice and peaceful one at that, With no drama and everyone lived happily. She smiled as she slept that night knowing that she was safe and alright. Wisp woke up on a breezy morning and skipping across the streets smiling at other kalons. She met a quite sly kalon that snuck around, His name was Kai. He slid behind other kalons to hide himself from others with a huge grin on his face. Wisp followed him suspiciously as he walked into as shop. Once she followed him in, He was trying to convince others that he had no money and needed some for his in need " Not really daughter " Wisteria. Wisp returned to her small apartment questioning whether she wanted to live in the town anymore. She layed on her bed with her eyes shut thinking about staying or going back to her home town. She didn't have much to live off of in her old town soon she decided to stay in the town. Wisp woke up early in the morning walking outside her apartment to find a robber that looked to be like and old friend of hers, Howl. She dashed after him as he ran with a bag full of lute and gadgets. She caught up to him jumping on him. He gagged and threw the bag of possessions waiting for his buddy to soon swoop it up and run off with it. Wisteria hopped off Howl running towards his friend. She grabbed the items and bringing them both to the police department and returning the items. She felt accomplished that day. Wisp walked away knowing she did something right. Wisp finally met up with Kai, they chatted and she questioned him about why he was faking that he had a daughter as Wisteria walked over with an unimpressed look smudged across her face. Kai explained to her that he needed money to pay off and hustle to Wisteria since Wisteria couldn't exactly pay her house's rent. Of course, That was a lie too. Kai used all the money for himself only paying half to wisteria. He walked around skimming his paw across the top of the stack of money with a greedy smile. Wisp was angry at Kai, Raged actually. Wisp followed Kai sneakly around as she took photos and recorded videos of proof for how greedy he was. Kai took Wisp to an ancient " god father " named Matt. They were looking for someone, So Matt gladly guided them and gave them the files to the person. He looked at them sternly exclaiming, " Find the kalon your looking for and when you do... give them this. " He said as he handed them a flash drive. Kai snuck around with wisp following behind him as they were looking for the kalon. They lurked inside a caged area staring at in captive kalons that looked like they were going crazy. One of them busted out of their cage. Wisp and Kai ran as fast as their legs could take them as they slide down a pipe falling into a giant lake. Wisp gasped for air as Kai helped her out and ran with her once more. The kalon was chasing them with a crazed look on it's face. They jumped over a steep long gap and landed skidding across the ground. Wisp screamed as the kalon jumped for them. Kai grabbed her as they skid down a dirty deep ditch. Wisp spit out water and dirt as she gagged. Kai pat her back with a sorry look on his face. He looked at her, " I'm so sorry for lying.. " He said coughing. '' I-i'ts ok... " She said with a light smile on her face. Kai hugged wisp tightly. Wisp started tearing up as tears bursted out of her eyes. She hugged him tighter. They both got up. Kai grabbed wisp propping her up on his shoulder. She looked at him. " Thank you. " She smiled before it turned darker and later in the night. The next morning, Wisteria woke up realizing she slept on Kai's shoulder for the whole night down in the ditch. She stood up tapping Kai on the shoulder. " C'mon sleepy head we have work to do. " She smiled. Kai woke up rubbing his eye. She helped him up as she soon stepped out of the ditch with him. She ran out and held his hand. He shook his head exclaiming, " Woah their Wisp! Slow down " He chuckled. She smiled and ran to the police station to check in on everything. No one was there. She had a confused look on her face as the chief popped up behind them as he let out a low grunt. She turned around along with Kai. " H-hi chief.. " She stuttered in her words nervously. " Get to work. Now. " He said sternly. Kai looked at him. " Lay off on her a little bit chief " Strict. " He said furiously. "You don't tell me what i can or can not do. " He looked at Kai grabbing him by the shirt. Wisp ran over grabbing Kai and apologizing. She walked into a small meeting room with only a few kalons with tired faces. They banging on the tables when the chief walked in. He announced, " Now listen up! We have cases to solve and places to be? Am i right? " Everyone in the room nodded including Wisp and Kai. " I expect everyone to get their work done immediately! " He shouted. He threw a file on the desk where Wisp and Kai sat looking at them. " Parking duty. " He snorted. " Again? " Wisp looked down at the file. " Don't question me ms. " He looked at Wisp as his eyes narrowed. She stood up her tail slowly coming to a stop of wagging. She walked out with Kai and got in her small slow car and Kai sat on the top. " Don't fall off. " Wisp looked up and out of the car at Kai. " I won't. " Kai grinned. She drove to a car that had needed a ticket as she placed the ticket on the car marking it on her small device. She started to get in the mood of ticketing the cars. She stepped her foot on the pedal of the slow mobile. Though it still went pretty fast. She marked mostly every car that needed a ticket checking her small device that read, 400 tickets given. Wisp was moving to a whole new city, And was determined to make it fast. Her hometown was terrible with nasty and disgusting people. Once she moved to her home town, She met so many new friends and found the path she wanted to take in life. Wisp had a few bumps and ridges in the new town she lived in but overall it was a complete success. She absolutely loved living there. Wisp snuck around the police department being very stealthy as her paws made a loud clicking noise. She walked down the hallway of the office to find someone standing still. Two guards who grabbed her quickly questioning her. She nudged them off running out of the building, being chased by many. She hopped over a log sliding into a ditch and soon hopping out to make her way to safety. Soon Wisp was in the big part of the town which included a popular crowd of kalons rushing past her with very professional looks on their faces. She soon arrived to a wheat and flower filled meadow which included a small gasp of wind. She calmly walked through the tall wheat as she smiled at the sun that set in the distance. She layed down back flat shutting her eyes and letting her dreams take her into a different world. A nice and peaceful one at that, With no drama and everyone lived happily. She smiled as she slept that night knowing that she was safe and alright. Wisteria woke up on a breezy morning and skipping across the streets smiling at other kalons. She met a quite sly kalon that snuck around, His name was Kai. He slid behind other kalons to hide himself from others with a huge grin on his face. Wisp followed him suspiciously as he walked into as shop. Once she followed him in, He was trying to convince others that he had no money and needed some for his in need " Not really daughter " Wisteria. Wisp returned to her small apartment questioning whether she wanted to live in the town anymore. She layed on her bed with her eyes shut thinking about staying or going back to her home town. She didn't have much to live off of in her old town soon she decided to stay in the town. Wisp woke up early in the morning walking outside her apartment to find a robber that looked to be like and old friend of hers, Howl. She dashed after him as he ran with a bag full of lute and gadgets. She caught up to him jumping on him. He gagged and threw the bag of possessions waiting for his buddy to soon swoop it up and run off with it. Wisteria hopped off Howl running towards his friend. She grabbed the items and bringing them both to the police department and returning the items. She felt accomplished that day. Wisp walked away knowing she did something right. Wisp finally met up with Kai, they chatted and she questioned him about why he was faking that he had a daughter as Wisteria walked over with an unimpressed look smudged across her face. Kai explained to her that he needed money to pay off and hustle to Wisteria since Wisteria couldn't exactly pay her house's rent. Of course, That was a lie too. Kai used all the money for himself only paying half to wisteria. He walked around skimming his paw across the top of the stack of money with a greedy smile. Wisp was angry at Kai, Raged actually. Wisp followed Kai sneakly around as she took photos and recorded videos of proof for how greedy he was. Kai took Wisp to an ancient " god father " named Matt. They were looking for someone, So Matt gladly guided them and gave them the files to the person. He looked at them sternly exclaiming, " Find the kalon your looking for and when you do... give them this. " He said as he handed them a flash drive. Kai snuck around with wisp following behind him as they were looking for the kalon. They lurked inside a caged area staring at in captive kalons that looked like they were going crazy. One of them busted out of their cage. Wisp and Kai ran as fast as their legs could take them as they slide down a pipe falling into a giant lake. Wisp gasped for air as Kai helped her out and ran with her once more. The kalon was chasing them with a crazed look on it's face. They jumped over a steep long gap and landed skidding across the ground. Wisp screamed as the kalon jumped for them. Kai grabbed her as they skid down a dirty deep ditch. Wisp spit out water and dirt as she gagged. Kai pat her back with a sorry look on his face. He looked at her, " I'm so sorry for lying.. " He said coughing. '' I-i'ts ok... " She said with a light smile on her face. Kai hugged wisp tightly. Wisp started tearing up as tears bursted out of her eyes. She hugged him tighter. They both got up. Kai grabbed wisp propping her up on his shoulder. She looked at him. " Thank you. " She smiled before it turned darker and later in the night. The next morning, Wisteria woke up realizing she slept on Kai's shoulder for the whole night down in the ditch. She stood up tapping Kai on the shoulder. " C'mon sleepy head we have work to do. " She smiled. Kai woke up rubbing his eye. She helped him up as she soon stepped out of the ditch with him. She ran out and held his hand. He shook his head exclaiming, " Woah their Wisp! Slow down " He chuckled. She smiled and ran to the police station to check in on everything. No one was there. She had a confused look on her face as the chief popped up behind them as he let out a low grunt. She turned around along with Kai. " H-hi chief.. " She stuttered in her words nervously. " Get to work. Now. " He said sternly. Kai looked at him. " Lay off on her a little bit chief " Strict. " He said furiously. "You don't tell me what i can or can not do. " He looked at Kai grabbing him by the shirt. Wisp ran over grabbing Kai and apologizing. She walked into a small meeting room with only a few kalons with tired faces. They banging on the tables when the chief walked in. He announced, " Now listen up! We have cases to solve and places to be? Am i right? " Everyone in the room nodded including Wisp and Kai. " I expect everyone to get their work done immediately! " He shouted. He threw a file on the desk where Wisp and Kai sat looking at them. " Parking duty. " He snorted. " Again? " Wisp looked down at the file. " Don't question me ms. " He looked at Wisp as his eyes narrowed. She stood up her tail slowly coming to a stop of wagging. She walked out with Kai and got in her small slow car and Kai sat on the top. " Don't fall off. " Wisp looked up and out of the car at Kai. " I won't. " Kai grinned. She drove to a car that had needed a ticket as she placed the ticket on the car marking it on her small device. She started to get in the mood of ticketing the cars. She stepped her foot on the pedal of the slow mobile. Though it still went pretty fast. She marked mostly every car that needed a ticket checking her small device that read, 400 tickets given. Wisp was moving to a whole new city, And was determined to make it fast. Her hometown was terrible with nasty and disgusting people. Once she moved to her home town, She met so many new friends and found the path she wanted to take in life. Wisp had a few bumps and ridges in the new town she lived in but overall it was a complete success. She absolutely loved living there. Wisp snuck around the police department being very stealthy as her paws made a loud clicking noise. She walked down the hallway of the office to find someone standing still. Two guards who grabbed her quickly questioning her. She nudged them off running out of the building, being chased by many. She hopped over a log sliding into a ditch and soon hopping out to make her way to safety. Soon Wisp was in the big part of the town which included a popular crowd of kalons rushing past her with very professional looks on their faces. She soon arrived to a wheat and flower filled meadow which included a small gasp of wind. She calmly walked through the tall wheat as she smiled at the sun that set in the distance. She layed down back flat shutting her eyes and letting her dreams take her into a different world. A nice and peaceful one at that, With no drama and everyone lived happily. She smiled as she slept that night knowing that she was safe and alright. Wisteria woke up on a breezy morning and skipping across the streets smiling at other kalons. She met a quite sly kalon that snuck around, His name was Kai. He slid behind other kalons to hide himself from others with a huge grin on his face. Wisp followed him suspiciously as he walked into as shop. Once she followed him in, He was trying to convince others that he had no money and needed some for his in need " Not really daughter " Wisteria. Wisp returned to her small apartment questioning whether she wanted to live in the town anymore. She layed on her bed with her eyes shut thinking about staying or going back to her home town. She didn't have much to live off of in her old town soon she decided to stay in the town. Wisp woke up early in the morning walking outside her apartment to find a robber that looked to be like and old friend of hers, Howl. She dashed after him as he ran with a bag full of lute and gadgets. She caught up to him jumping on him. He gagged and threw the bag of possessions waiting for his buddy to soon swoop it up and run off with it. Wisteria hopped off Howl running towards his friend. She grabbed the items and bringing them both to the police department and returning the items. She felt accomplished that day. Wisp walked away knowing she did something right. Wisp finally met up with Kai, they chatted and she questioned him about why he was faking that he had a daughter as Wisteria walked over with an unimpressed look smudged across her face. Kai explained to her that he needed money to pay off and hustle to Wisteria since Wisteria couldn't exactly pay her house's rent. Of course, That was a lie too. Kai used all the money for himself only paying half to wisteria. He walked around skimming his paw across the top of the stack of money with a greedy smile. Wisp was angry at Kai, Raged actually. Wisp followed Kai sneakly around as she took photos and recorded videos of proof for how greedy he was. Kai took Wisp to an ancient " god father " named Matt. They were looking for someone, So Matt gladly guided them and gave them the files to the person. He looked at them sternly exclaiming, " Find the kalon your looking for and when you do... give them this. " He said as he handed them a flash drive. Kai snuck around with wisp following behind him as they were looking for the kalon. They lurked inside a caged area staring at in captive kalons that looked like they were going crazy. One of them busted out of their cage. Wisp and Kai ran as fast as their legs could take them as they slide down a pipe falling into a giant lake. Wisp gasped for air as Kai helped her out and ran with her once more. The kalon was chasing them with a crazed look on it's face. They jumped over a steep long gap and landed skidding across the ground. Wisp screamed as the kalon jumped for them. Kai grabbed her as they skid down a dirty deep ditch. Wisp spit out water and dirt as she gagged. Kai pat her back with a sorry look on his face. He looked at her, " I'm so sorry for lying.. " He said coughing. '' I-i'ts ok... " She said with a light smile on her face. Kai hugged wisp tightly. Wisp started tearing up as tears bursted out of her eyes. She hugged him tighter. They both got up. Kai grabbed wisp propping her up on his shoulder. She looked at him. " Thank you. " She smiled before it turned darker and later in the night. The next morning, Wisteria woke up realizing she slept on Kai's shoulder for the whole night down in the ditch. She stood up tapping Kai on the shoulder. " C'mon sleepy head we have work to do. " She smiled. Kai woke up rubbing his eye. She helped him up as she soon stepped out of the ditch with him. She ran out and held his hand. He shook his head exclaiming, " Woah their Wisp! Slow down " He chuckled. She smiled and ran to the police station to check in on everything. No one was there. She had a confused look on her face as the chief popped up behind them as he let out a low grunt. She turned around along with Kai. " H-hi chief.. " She stuttered in her words nervously. " Get to work. Now. " He said sternly. Kai looked at him. " Lay off on her a little bit chief " Strict. " He said furiously. "You don't tell me what i can or can not do. " He looked at Kai grabbing him by the shirt. Wisp ran over grabbing Kai and apologizing. She walked into a small meeting room with only a few kalons with tired faces. They banging on the tables when the chief walked in. He announced, " Now listen up! We have cases to solve and places to be? Am i right? " Everyone in the room nodded including Wisp and Kai. " I expect everyone to get their work done immediately! " He shouted. He threw a file on the desk where Wisp and Kai sat looking at them. " Parking duty. " He snorted. " Again? " Wisp looked down at the file. " Don't question me ms. " He looked at Wisp as his eyes narrowed. She stood up her tail slowly coming to a stop of wagging. She walked out with Kai and got in her small slow car and Kai sat on the top. " Don't fall off. " Wisp looked up and out of the car at Kai. " I won't. " Kai grinned. She drove to a car that had needed a ticket as she placed the ticket on the car marking it on her small device. She started to get in the mood of ticketing the cars. She stepped her foot on the pedal of the slow mobile. Though it still went pretty fast. She marked mostly every car that needed a ticket checking her small device that read, 400 tickets given. Kai hopped off Wisps small car as he followed her into a local store. They walked through the store and grabbed supplies. " Hey strawberry, " (( Which was a nickname Kai called Wisp )) " Yeah? " Wisp replied. " Do you see that guy? " He said pointing to a suspiciously looking kalon. " Howl.. " Wisp said in shock. " How'd he get out of jail? " Kai looked confused as they walked towards him and his partners. Howl flung around with a gun. " Hold up there! " He grinned. " Woah there buddy. " Kai said as he looked down at wisp. Wisp grabbed out her badge showing him that she was a worker for the Kalon police department or the KPD. Howl stepped back, " Your the one the caught me last time! " He said turning around and running. Wisp ran after him, As fast as her small legs could take her. She hopped over toys and shelves until she eventually caught up to him hopping on howl. He grunted, " Not again! " She took his weapon and cuffed him once more. Kai ran besides Wisp and helped her take him to the KPD. Once they got Howl locked up once more with his buddies, They decided to take another check around the town and scope for villians. Once they finished looking around the area and saw nothing, They moved to another area. Wisp skipped across a bridge with it partly breaking. Her leg was stuck with a long drop to go if she were to fall. Kai lightly stepped on the bridge grasping wisps paw and pulling her up. She let out a gasp as the bridge started falling beneath them. After the bridge indecent they calmed down and settled in Wisps apartment. It was the end. They lived there lives peacefully and happy. ( 4,148/??? ) 
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