[Vraska the Unseen]

2 DAYS BEFORE THIS COMP CLOSES. IF NO FORMS ARE COMPLETE BY THEN HE GOES WITH MUMMY.

I want this little poisoned blizzard to go to a loving home guys!

[CCrow]

Ahhh trying to get everything done with school and homework + the added affect of confusing myself with what I'm writing xD

[Vraska the Unseen]

CLOSED

[Vraska the Unseen]

Ah, Crimson, do me a favor and make your font a bit bigger please? Hard for me to read it on my laptop.

[CCrow]

Oh course! Sorry bout that c':

Also, I finished the armor but I won't add the finished version until the competition is over ^^

[Vraska the Unseen]

You may add it, you guys have until tomorrow to put finishing touches on your forums.

[CCrow]

Ahh alright, ty!

Edit* I hope you don't mind I fixed that small part on my form titled "ice snake" a bit late. Somehow I didn't realize that when they said the ice element could manipulate water, they meant they could turn water into ice xD I didn't add or fix anything else though ^^

[Vraska the Unseen]

OFFICIALLY CLOSED FOR JUDGING.

[Eriecht]

Vraska and I have talked it over for a while, discussing how each form was developed and how the personalities were portrayed within them.
Both of you, Queen and Crimson, put a ton of effort into your forms, I know! However, there can be only one winner, which means we judges had to pick apart your forms and be as nit-picky as possible.

Queen Chrysalis, your form was quite interesting, as you went away from the evil vibe this family gave off. I wasn't expecting it, for sure, and neither was Vraska! I found it entertaining over all.
TheCrimsonAge, you stayed traditional and still managed to be original. It also contained a lot of powerful writing with loads of personality.

Crimson, I must pronounce you the winner of this competition! Nemilos is yours!
The reason Vraska and I decided on this was because we liked how you managed to tell a sort of story with every bit of your form, from the armor design to the relationships to your actual stories! Overall, I think you just developed the character in much more depth.

However, I believe the form QueenChrysalis had should not go unmentioned. You had a lot of cute stuff, and made me feel as though this cub was a fuzzy little time bomb in some parts! I think if you take more time to develop what you have, you should have no issue at all winning in a future competition.

[Queen Vivane]

Thanks for the mention. I never force characters to be evil because their families are, it kind of rubs me the wrong way.