Re: vaiki #257 -- day 4

Postby suneater » Sun Sep 18, 2016 10:20 am

ROUND 4

a ton of people got out last round,,, i'm so sorry aaaaa

this time, it'll be a bit of a writing contest! I'll pick 2 people who will advance to the next round.

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username //
link to round 1 post //
link to round 2 post //
link to round 3 post //

why are they hiding? (500 word limit) //


The answers to last rounds questions, for any who are curious--

1 - thunderstorms
2 - glitter
3 - cats
4 - soft serve
5 - angel food cake
6 - strawberries
7 - math
8 - soda


the following people made it to round 4

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Takura.
Lady Raincloud
lunar llama.


this round will end on september 21st, at 6 PM cst
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Re: vaiki #257 -- day 4

Postby clouds-move-on » Sun Sep 18, 2016 10:23 am

username // ☁Lady Raincloud☁
link to round 1 post // viewtopic.php?p=102063664#p102063664
link to round 2 post // viewtopic.php?p=102090412#p102090412
link to round 3 post // viewtopic.php?p=102112613#p102112613

why are they hiding? (500 word limit) //
"Once upon a time." Said the voice of a vaiki from behind the curtain. "There was a handsome young vaiki who knew he was charming and good looking, but always was frightened of being seen as vain, or, alternatively, being adored because he was so fine."

A sigh follows. Evidently this vaiki felt much about the story.

"So one day, when he discovered that the girl he loved did not like him at all for himself, but just because he was popular, rich and good looking, the vaiki was distraught. He, angered, left her promptly and went to visit his best friend, who was blind, for advice... one who could judge him rightly and not by his popularity or good looks."

"So his friend said 'you must have others you meet judge thee as I judge thee'. And old him to cover his face and hide in shadows when meeting new people."

"Henceforth, I- eerrr I mean the vaiki his himself with long cloaks, masks, and in the dark of the nights, or shadows of the trees. He gradually became shier from others, and, rather than make true friends as he had hope, other began to shun him for being too odd, or "proud" due to his newly found introverted behavior. Thus, the vaiki became angry at others..."

"The vaiki no longer wanted to make friends! He began to collect all that was wrong in friendships in his mind, and became very bitter... Yet in his heart he wanted a family and friends again, but insisted that they would never see his face until they liked him for who he was. As he became harsher, this became harder..."

"... And now... Listener... I want to know. Would you like m- I mean this vaiki for who he is, even if he's not quite as... nice as he was? Would you help him recover confidence and trust in others... that is, i-if you met him?"
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Re: vaiki #257 -- day 4

Postby mal du pays » Sun Sep 18, 2016 10:50 am

username // Takura
link to round 1 post // Blup
link to round 2 post // Blop
link to round 3 post // Blep

why are they hiding? (500 word limit) //
Oh no. Oh no no no.

“Mrs. Gabriella’s garden… Oh no…” Perennial gave a small whine and stared behind her, looking to the poor, trampled flowers behind her. She’d just been on her morning run, when she had to divert as something - probably a dog - ran after her. She’d darted into the grass, and ran into the garden without checking where she was going.

An overwhelming feeling of guilt began to wash over her, and her legs trembled. How was she gonna tell her? Was she even gonna tell her? Perennial debated before scampering back to her house. She couldn’t handle this situation emotionally, and she buried herself in her blankets and spare clothes. She began to tear up, whining and crying into the blanket, shivering.

She’d try to come out about it.. Just when she could find the words for it.
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Re: vaiki #257 -- day 4

Postby lunar llama. » Thu Sep 22, 2016 4:54 am

username // lunar llama.
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Re: vaiki #257 -- day 4

Postby suneater » Thu Sep 22, 2016 11:36 am

closed for judging!!
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Re: vaiki #257 -- winner!!

Postby suneater » Sat Sep 24, 2016 9:52 am

and we have a winner!!

after thinking it over for a little while, I've decided the winner for vaiki 297!

congrats to....

Takura. !!
your form was absolutely adorable, congrats on Perennial!!
if you'd like me to uncover her, just let me know, otherwise I'll keep her covered and let you uncover her for yourself if you'd like
also, it's your choice if she's a dwarf or a child vaiki! either way is fine :'0

but wait! we aren't done yet.
I'd like to offer a RU to Lady Raincloud!!
while your form was intriguing and written quite nicely, I was pulled towards Takura.'s form ever so slightly.
I still felt that you deserved something though, and it was super hard to choose between your forms.
Please PM me with a palette and I'll start designing ASAP!

Thank you all for entering, and good luck in other competitions!
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Re: vaiki #257 -- winner!!

Postby clouds-move-on » Sat Sep 24, 2016 10:04 am

Congrats! ouo And thank you so o much for my runner up, I'll get the pallet to you straight away!
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Re: vaiki #257 -- winner!!

Postby mal du pays » Sat Sep 24, 2016 11:55 am

aaa thank you !! i already adore her oml,
congrats on the ru as well, raincloud oDo if you want maybe they could be friends with perennial when they're made? :0c
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Re: vaiki #257 -- winner!!

Postby lunar llama. » Sun Sep 25, 2016 11:34 am

congrats you guys!! <3
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