Re: Khimaira Friesians #76

Postby chemical. » Thu Sep 01, 2016 4:43 pm

    paradise has been very busy lately, just be patient, this will be judged whenever they have time <3.
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Re: Khimaira Friesians #76

Postby Bunny!! » Sat Sep 03, 2016 7:17 am

ᴄʜᴇᴍɪᴄᴀʟ wrote:
    paradise has been very busy lately, just be patient, this will be judged whenever they have time <3.


Okay thank you! :3
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Re: Khimaira Friesians #76

Postby paradise, » Sat Sep 03, 2016 7:21 am

      sorry about that guys ^^;

      i will be extending this until the 4th to give others time who want/need to finish their entries. c:
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Re: Khimaira Friesians #76

Postby Bunny!! » Sat Sep 03, 2016 7:37 am

paradise, wrote:
      sorry about that guys ^^;

      i will be extending this until the 4th to give others time who want/need to finish their entries. c:


Okay thank you! ;3
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Re: Khimaira Friesians #76

Postby NeriHyuga » Mon Oct 10, 2016 1:13 am

don't forget to judge this ^^
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Re: Khimaira Friesians #76

Postby paradise, » Thu Nov 24, 2016 5:37 am

Lilly Your Bff wrote:Owner: Lilly Your Bff
Show Name: War And Peace
Barn Name: Olympian
Gender: Stallion
Age: 5
Halter Color: dark brown
Bead Color: light brown
Relationship with his Sister:
(Takes place when she was a filly and he is a colt their wild names are Cole and Lilly but was changed to their barn names;; Olympian and Raelynn)
Cole opened his eyes slowly when his sister nuged him awake. He glared at her once finnaly realizing what was going on. She giggled and got up trotting off. He snorted, he stood up stretching his legs out and chasing after her "your so dead!" he called out angrily. She just giggled and continued to run. He chased her into the woods before realizing he could no longer see his sister. He looked around, "Lilly? This isn't funny!" he yelled. He snorted and dashed to the left to find nothing, "Lilly!? Where are you?" he called out. Cole galloped back the right then to the north. He finnaly saw her, she was laying on the ground crying. He jumped over a log and went up to her "Lilly!? What happened!?" He said, she looked at her leg in pain, their was a rope, tied to it tightly. He looked to where the rope lead and it was tied to a near by tree. "go get help" she pleaded. He nodded and galloped back to the herd to see them being pulled by ropes around there neck into trucks, he looked to his mom who was roped by her neck as well, she bucked and they roped her front legs, she bucked again and they roped her back ones. They pulled her to the ground, she looked at him "Run! Take your sister and run!" she yelled.

He whinnied and ran back towards his sister with tears streaming down his face. She looked at him with worried eyes. "what happened!?" she demanded, he took a deep breath before muttering the word "humans.." she gasped and started crying again. He laid beside her "its okay, everything will be alright." he said reassuring her. She laid her head down on his leg and he put his head over her neck. He knew the humans would find her and him next because he couldn't get the rope off. He swore to himself that no matter what the humans did he would escape, with his sister and herd. They laid their for half an hour before he heard a twig snap and turned to see a girl, she smiled sweetly. His sister shook like a leaf from fear and he stood in front of her showing his teeth. He stommped his hoof, the human took a step back so he would calm. She took a few carrots out a bag she had and tossed them over gently to the colt. He bent down to sniff them but kept an eye on the woman. After a moment of sniffing he ate one, he gave the other to his sister. He glared at the woman and she giggled slightly "don't look at me like that" she said. He snorted in response and got closer to his sister.

The woman had sat their for a while coaxing them and getting closer. Finnaly she was close enough to touch the filly and cut her loose. Once released Lilly stood to her feet, blood was dripping from her leg, the rope had been so ruff and tight that it had given her a horrible rope burn. The human was luckily a vet and carried supplies every time she went into the woods. She gently rapped Lilly's leg. Soon both the foals began to trust her, knowing they had no one to help them they decided to follow the human at all costs. When she stood from the ground they watched anxiously and when she started walking they followed close behind. She smiled and let them follow her to her car, she opened the door and tossed some carrots in the back seat.

She watched as they curiously got in and laid in the seat. She closed the door gently and got in the drivers seat. She drove them to her house and let them out in a large paddock. Little did they know that's were they would be spending most of their time. Over the years they where tamed and ridden, taught for competition and companionship, and always stayed together. They where both given proper barn names, he was to be called Olympian and she to be called Raelynn.

One dark stormy night they where sleeping in their stalls when Olympian awoke to the smell of something unusual. He snorted and pawed at the ground. He saw a man ride in the stable with a mare, he watched closely as the man jumped off and looked into Raelynn's stall. The man unlocked the stall quietly and roped Raelynn by the neck, she whinnied from fright. The made that was with him backed away looking slightly sad. Olympian had to help his sister, he neighed loudly and pushed at the stall door. After many attempts to push it open he turned and kicked it open, but it was to late.. They where gone. He snorted and stomped his hoof on the concrete in distress.

Suddenly he felt a rope thrown around his neck and tightened. He bucjed frantically and let out a loud neigh while on his back legs. He landed loudly on the floor with his front legs then kicked with his back ones, he wasn't going down without a fight. He bucked and pulled away from the man and snorted as he did so. He was about to pull the rope from the mans hand when a gun shot fired and he froze. He saw another man walk in, he had a scruffy, long beard and a proud smirk on his face. He muttered something close to the words 'this ones a prize' and he helped the man pull Olympian toward the trailer that held his sister. Olympian knowing it was better to not struggle walked with his head low, he willingly walked into the trailer.


Wip)


      sorry for the long wait guys, congrats. c:
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