Username: Tealea
Name: Musa
Gender: Male
Writing:
It was the summer and my mother and I were walking to the beach so I could go swimming with my friends. On our way to the beach were all these cute little shops. Before I continue, I should mention that I love strawberries. Displayed out in the front of one of the shops was a small glass strawberry. I ran over and noticed it was the last one. I knew my mother probably couldn't afford it, as money was tight so I just stared at the lovely strawberry in awe. My mother walked over to me, "Honey, you know..." I sighed and nodded "I know". The day went by fast, my mom left and next thing I knew it was time to go home. As my friends and I passed the shop, I noticed the glass strawberry was gone. When I got home I noticed my mother had a small box. She opened the box and there it was, the glass strawberry. My eyes began to water and I hugged her so tightly, thanking her every second for this precious gift. My mother worked that whole day to make enough to afford that strawberry. She was an amazing mother. [200]
Name: Musa
Gender: Male
Writing:
It was the summer and my mother and I were walking to the beach so I could go swimming with my friends. On our way to the beach were all these cute little shops. Before I continue, I should mention that I love strawberries. Displayed out in the front of one of the shops was a small glass strawberry. I ran over and noticed it was the last one. I knew my mother probably couldn't afford it, as money was tight so I just stared at the lovely strawberry in awe. My mother walked over to me, "Honey, you know..." I sighed and nodded "I know". The day went by fast, my mom left and next thing I knew it was time to go home. As my friends and I passed the shop, I noticed the glass strawberry was gone. When I got home I noticed my mother had a small box. She opened the box and there it was, the glass strawberry. My eyes began to water and I hugged her so tightly, thanking her every second for this precious gift. My mother worked that whole day to make enough to afford that strawberry. She was an amazing mother. [200]