Batch #1552 by lex

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Batch #1552

Postby lex » Tue Jan 16, 2018 7:04 am

thank you for being patient on this one ^^ i hope you like it!!


Owner: memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=638027
Name: Onyx
Gender: Male
Gender for breeding purposes: DFAB
Owned as of: 02.15.2018
Paid: N/A
Post: viewtopic.php?p=115635475#p115635475


    Lay Day: --
    Hatch Day: --
    Mature Day: 15/01/2018


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Mutations wrote:Complex Horns (YES) - Inherited - Rare
Minor Mane Mutation (NO) - Not Inherited - Uncommon
Feathered Paws (NO) - Not Inherited - Roaming Event Rare
Double Coat (NO) - Not Inherited - Event Rare
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Re: Batch #1552

Postby Vixen Luo » Tue Jan 16, 2018 8:15 am

    I love this lil dude
    You did a fantastic job on the horns! <3 <3
    please stop asking me to give you my viscets. thank you!
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Re: Batch #1552

Postby finifugal ✨ » Tue Jan 16, 2018 1:04 pm

ohhhh this babe is so cute!!!! lex you did amazing!!! i love how you combined the parents,,,those colors n patterns are so good,,, and those horns are so well drawn :0 holy heck i love this lil kiddo...
i'd love to snatch this baby up, but i told myself this kiddo would be going ufa, so ufa it will be!!

this will be a prompt based comp, though i've got a couple you can choose from!
prompt 1; They were a stranger in a very strange land.
prompt 2; They had to work together, so they were going to have to learn to get along.
prompt 3; The fire was getting closer.
you can, of course, change the wording a little bit, but the meaning of the prompt shouldn't change! you've got 1000 words total for the prompt.
you'll also get 2 extras, one writing and one art! the writing can be up to 600 words, and about anything that you'd like! the art can be anything you'd like, though if it's a comic it should not be more than 4 panels. any words included in the art will not count against any limits!
the end date will be 2/5/18, so you should have plenty of time, though i might be open to extensions when the time comes!
i've got a skeleton form here, though you don't have to follow it exactly!
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Extras; (600 words writing + 1 art)

good luck y'all! if you have any questions, don't hesitate to pm me! ^^
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Re: Batch #1552

Postby Snuggle_Bean » Thu Jan 18, 2018 8:53 am

Mark Maybe ^^

Username;Skyler1515
Name; Deuce
Gender; Male
Gender for breeding purposes; Male
Prompt; (max 1000 words) Prompt 3
Extras; (600 words writing + 1 art)
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Re: Batch #1552

Postby Spirit23Wolf » Sun Jan 21, 2018 11:21 am

Username; Spirit23wolf
Name; Kronos
Gender; Male
Gender for breeding purposes; Male
Prompt; The fire was getting closer
Extras; (600 words writing + 1 art)
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Pet's name: Everest (Thank You KIONO)
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Re: Batch #1552

Postby dzo » Thu Jan 25, 2018 2:41 pm

Username;; ~Prophecy~
Name;; Onyx
Gender;; Male
GFBP;; DFAB
Prompt;; (max 1000 words)
Who would have thought that a group of bullies would lead to one of thr most important discoveries in one viscet's life. It all started when Onyx went to his first day of school.

“Isn’t that a boyyyyyyy’s name!” A mean group of visclings laughed at her. But she wasn’t bothered by her name being a “boys” name. It wasn’t even that she was tough skinned and able to take hits, but moreso the fact that she actually preferred to have a more “boyish” name.

As she grew up and started questioning her sexuality and gender, she used the feelings the bullies gave her to guide her on her way. It was a fairly bumpy road, until things finally smoothed out- she figured out she no longer wanted to be a she, but instead a he.

But the world was a judgemental place, and he thought that if he expressed himself he would be rejected by everyone he loved, so he decided to live alone. That wasn’t a big change though, he wanted to live a solitary life anyway. He wasn’t ever much for talking to others, but instead enjoyed living his own life not being caught up in everyone else’s drama. With the help of some construction workers, he built himself a large treehouse a little while way off in the forest near his hometown. He lived a happy life until one small thing led to everything going wrong.

Over anything he could pick, Onyx’s favorite thing about the forest was the silence. The occasional rustle of leaves, a branch shaking or a strong gust of wind. That was music to his ears. He could go to bed hearing nothing, silence.
Clear of thoughts, peace.
Listening to the swaying trees.
It was peaceful living alone in the quiet forest that he called home.

Onyx’s treehouse was perfectly calculated.
High enough to not disturb nature,
Low enough to safely get down and to not be a hassle to the birds.
Big enough to be comfortable in,
Small enough to be held in only a few trees with only minor tree casualties.

It was wonderful.
The entire forest was wonderful.
The silence was wonderful.
Especially at night.

Of course, it is hard to enjoy the peace when you only hear one thing when trying to sleep.
And that one thing isn't silence.
It is screaming.
Screaming coming from all directions.
From animals.
From innocent animals.
The crackling of burning leaves.
The thump of branches and entire trees.
Falling down.

Burning.
Everything burning.

The most vivid thing had to have been not even 30 feet away.
First it was a crack of a branch.
Then the rustle and crunch of hooves stumbling through burning leaves.
Then a loud snap.
And then a whoosh.
And then a scream from a young buck.
A scream that pierced the fearful night.
A scream that echoed.
And still echoes in his mind.
That one was the worst to hear.
Especially since he knew that young buck.

It wasn't really his fault, though he did start the fire.
It was only a small, harmless bonfire to burn a pile of leaves.
But he didn't realize how dry it really was outside.
How windy it really was.
The fire was quickly out of his control.
Every second fire was getting closer to destroying everything he loved.
All his animal friends, his peaceful home, everything.
And when it did destroy everything, he knew he was responsible for lives of many forest animals.
He says he was a killer, that it is best to stay away.
He now lives elsewhere, a place he can't do much harm.
Onyx says he should have been one of the fatalities, coming out unscathed.

Silence is rare for him anymore.
All he can hear is the screams; the burning.

So when he gets it, silence is still his favorite, even though he knows he doesn't deserve it.
//prompt 3; The fire was getting closer.//
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Re: Batch #1552

Postby Macyduke » Fri Feb 02, 2018 8:19 am

Username; Macyduke
Name: Rett
Gender; Male
Gender for breeding purposes; Male
Prompt #1;

His cloak billowed behind him as he dashed onward. His heartbeat pounded softly in his ears, he'd trained over a year and a half to be were he was, but still didn't feel he was ready. Ahead of him a heavier pair feet blazed the trail ahead. They were quieter than his, and unsurprisingly much better at moving with a constant speed. As comforting as it was to have a second pair of paws with him, he couldn't help but feel uneasy with the cet they belonged to. He was annoyed by how closely she was practically forcing him to fallow her by running ahead. His feet felt like they were ablaze, his heart burned, but he would not stop. If she outran him, there was a fair chance he wouldn't see her until their mentor returned.
It was best to keep a low profile while patrolling within the trees of the woods, but if he didn't get her to stop short soon, she'd loose him. "Nora wait!" He barked. She stumbled slightly as she turned towards what they could only guess to be the center of the woods, and rapidly began to pick up speed. He opened his jaws to yell about how she wouldn't be able to avoid him forever but closed them again upon realizing that she could. "Nor please!" He begged. "We need to talk." Airway burning, the brown cet rapidly began to slow down. There was so much he wanted to say to her-or at least need to. All of which he couldn't while in this condition. He slowed to a halt, deciding that if she was so determined to avoid him, that she was willing to risk getting lost in unfamiliar territory just to avoid him. "Please," He huffed, fully aware that she could no longer hear him. "I'm not going to fallow you anymore." Rett fell to his knees, too wary to continue on after his former companion. He stayed there for a few minutes, trying to tune out the sound of his heart beating in his ears so that he could hopefully hear the pink cet he'd been so desperate to catch up to moments before, and as an added bones, get the oxygen he so desperately needed without feeding the fire which burned in his throat.
Lifting his head he surveyed his surroundings. He was surprised by how little he recognized. The trees were different and yet… all the same. The trees he'd grown to fear as a child seemed to loom higher than they usually did above him, and a sinking fear began to take its toll. "Nora?" He asked hoarsely, his voice barely louder than a whisper, hoping she'd reappear just in time to bring him back from the crippling fear of his childhood. His thoughts drifted back to the monstrosity Berk had lead away from the heart of their small town, skillfully fighting it in a small opening nearby with nothing more than his claws, and the venom he was born with. Rett recalled the creature's thin but sturdy frame, it's large claws and gnarly teeth sullied with garbage, it's grey fur coated in grime and wrinkled with anger. It's head was adorned with many horns, some of which trailed down it's neck and onto it's upper back, all of which appeared short, stubby, and above all bony. The beast transitioned easily from four legs to two, it's massive burly arms didn't look ideal for digging but the dirt that covered them said otherwise, it's large paws almost hand-like in appearance looked like it could crush a viscet skull with ease. It's unnaturally long torso was covered in shaggy fur, which appeared to be thinning near it's stomach ended at his overwhelming hunches with a ended in a pair of hooves that almost seemed small in comparison to it's leg mussels-which all together seemed shorter than it's front legs. Behind it an unkept tail seemed to be a small but raggy mix between an average sized skunk's and a horse.
Rett jumped, suddenly feeling as though he was being watched. The image of the creature his mentor had tussled with became larger, dawned in shadow, and covered in red- towering far above all other thoughts in his mind. It was watching him, he was sure of it, although he wasn't certain why it hadn't torn him to pieces yet. He shook slightly terrified at the thought of the creature, hoping beyond hope that Berk had returned and had somehow managed to stumble accross him. Doubt clouded the outer rim of his thoughts, he would not be so lucky. Instinctively unsheathing the blade on his belt, he brandished it before him threateningly. His ears swiveled from side to side in search of a noise that would lead him to the source of the eyes he felt burning into him. If he turned back now, he knew he'd be able to retrace his steps, lead the creature back into what little of the forest he knew. He swallowed hard, knowing that if he were to do just that, he'd need to backtrack quickly before the creature pounced, quite possibly disorientating him in a fight. He shook his head, if it was feral, it would have attacked him the moment it saw him gasping for breath, and even if it wasn't- if it had something more malicious in mind, he would not leave her out on her own. Getting to his feet, Rett surveyed his surroundings, warily dusting off his pants as he did so. Nothing seemed to be out of the ordinary, but the feeling that he was being watched told him otherwise. Giving his surroundings one last scan, the brown viscet started off in the direction his companion had last been heading. Examining the foliage carefully, he picked up her trail and fallowed it, marking the trees he passed with his a blade as he went, hoping it would keep him from getting lost in the strange new land.
(1000/1000)

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Little bit of context/backstory/Rett kicks off a war?

Rett was a sheepboy when he was young, who was tasked to watch the heard while they were grazing due to an increase of coyote sightings. He took his job very seriously, but couldn't help but doze off for a little while in a particularly warm ray of sunlight. When he opened his eyes he saw another viscetling out in the field. He got to his feet and yelled to the white and black viscetling (Rick) and asked what they were doing. "My sister (Jackie ) wants to pet one of the foals but can't jump the fence." the other answered. Rett immediately told the other cet to stop what he was doing and when the other began to waddle faster towards the fence, gave chase. When Rett began to gain on him, the other dropped the lamb and nearly dropped down to all fours running from him. The intruder had some trouble jumping the fence, and that's where he caught up to him. To Rett's surprise, there was another viscet waiting for their companion on the other side of the fence. She helped the white and black cet to his feet and took off after him, but Rett, who'd had quite a bit of experience hopping fences, jumped the fence and managed to grab a hold of the brow viscetling's tail. She squeaked in fear, he heard what he could only guess to be her brother, mutter a few words, and without much warning his face was suddenly on fire.
With time his wound healed and his fur grew back over the burn, but the attack had already taken it's toll on the town, who had been generally afraid of the woods to begin with- most of which had heard that a dangerous wizard resided somewhere with in the trees, accompanied by brute beasts with a thirst for blood. It's noteworthy to add here that Rett's future mentor, who would only be open to training a few protishay's every few years to help him defend the small town against the creatures who lived in the forest nearby-spreed the most of the more recent roomers about the beings which resided within the trees. (Which was mostly just a way to work himself, an outcast for his monstrous size and appearance, into society as an acceptable member of the town he wished to be apart of since he was a child.) As a means of getting back at the wizard for burning a sheepboy for stopping him from stealing a lamb, the towns people set the woods ablaze- unknowingly starting somewhat of a war with the forest spirits which resided within it's sacred grounds.

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Re: Batch #1552

Postby finifugal ✨ » Mon Feb 05, 2018 2:04 am

this ends tomorrow, though i’m open to extensions if needed!
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Re: Batch #1552

Postby finifugal ✨ » Tue Feb 06, 2018 3:30 pm

okay, so since i’ve gotten a request for an extension, this comp will be extended for a week! the new end date is 2/12/18, or next monday!!! hopefully i won’t be as busy next week as i am this week, as well!!
i love all the forms so far though ;w; y’all are all such creative/great writers
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Re: Batch #1552

Postby finifugal ✨ » Thu Feb 15, 2018 10:11 am

oop, sorry for being late, i’ve had a busy week!!
but, after reading through the forms, i’ve decided that Macyduke is the winner!!
even though there were only two forms, it was still a hard decision - I really did love both onyx and rett!
onyx felt like a well-written character, and honestly i really felt for him at the end, after the fire - your writing really conveyed his feelings well!!
rett also felt like a well-written character - from the bits of personality that you weaved into the story, i really found myself liking him. i also really love the world that you established, full of magic and monsters - it’s so very creative!!!
thank you both so much for entering, and congrats on your new ‘cet, Macy!!!
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