[Glispa]

The mark that is most commonly positioned on the primals lower shoulders are the mark of the pack of Hach Winik, meaning the pack of true people. The mark isn't something the sima is born with, it's something carved into their skin to show of their rank and place in the pack. As an novice the sima bears the mark of the closed eye, to show their weakness and lack of understanding for the turnings of the world, they then as a warrior bears the mark of the guarded eye to show of their strength yet remaining lack of understanding. Then those few to make it to an Alpha's position gets to bear the mark of the eye of clarity to show of their found understanding of the world around them. These are however not the only type of marks found amongst the pack, some individuals adds on additional parts to their already existing mark to show of the more specific ranks and skills of theirs whilst those who has lost their jewel or rank amongst the pack gets their mark crossed out. It's also very common to see primals of the pack fully or partially covered in different marks other than the mark of the pack as this type of arts is looked upon the same as the arts known today as tattooing

Third primal made by me and this one is an outcast from the pack of Hach Winik and thus bearing the crossed out mark of the pack along with the crossed out warrior rank for their loss of their warrior jewel

To win this one you have to tell me the story behind them losing both their warrior rank as well as their place in the pack

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Ends on the 27:th of June

Hisn name is Ettore Orva and he's owned by The Pirate Dragon

[Ｍｉｓｓｉｎｇ✖]

Username: The Missing Kurloz
Sima name:Hok'ee is a Native American Navajo name meaning "abandoned."
Sima gender: Male
Pack name: Hach Winik
Backstory: Hok'ee lost his ranks by braking to many of the rules that were set in stone for the chief of the Hach Winik Pack to keep up with. He had drawn his last breath in the clan by picking a fight with neighboring pack for no reason to do so. with that he was exile out and lost his place in the pack to be called trusted ,and renamed the "abandoned". He may be a good fighter , but no fighter should stop following the rules just cause their higher in the pack.

Hok'ee didn't break so many rules he could of been next in line to be chief or even second in command of the pack.

[abandoned-account123]

ideas, don't steal
- saw a pup in need of help
- was being attacked by some wild animal/drifting down river
- helped pup
- banned because the pup was of a enemy pack

[The Pirate Dragon]

- Username -
The Pirate Dragon
- Sima Name -
Ettore Orva
Ettore means "Loyal," it's the name he gave himself that he goes by
Orva means "courageous" and it is the name he was born with
- Sima Gender -
Male
- Pack Name -
Hach Winik
- Backstory -
(I've been really sick and haven't been able to complete it, but I'll give you a summary)
Ettore hates to flee and has too much pride. In a fight for territory against another pack, Ettore and some of the other warriors go with their chief to settle the dispute but find themselves utterly outnumbered and defenseless. To prevent annihilation and injury, the chief surrenders the land and allows the enemy pack to take it. Ettore loathes this and insists to the enemy group that they will continue to fight until the very end for their pack and their name. However, aware of impending loss, the chief insists surrender and orders Ettore to step back and return to the pack.
When the group retreats, the Chief has a talk with Ettore and tells him that he needs to understand what they did at that battle and why. As a prideful warrior, he believes that retreating is the sign of cowardice and insists that they did the wrong thing at the border and should have attacked back no matter what. Frustrated, the chief orders him to go and think about what that would have done to the pack but also orders him to stay with the rest of the pack.
When finished with his talk with the chief, Ettore runs off to challenge the enemy pack again on his own and insists that he will only lose in battle, not in conversation. He is attacked by the enemies as he desired but was greatly injured and his left horn got chipped. He ran back to the pack to beg for help but the chief refused it to him in consequence of disobeying a direct order and he was cast out of the pack to be known as an vagrant. Eventually, he ran from the pack and insisted to live on his own, away from cowards who must live together to survive.

[Dismal.]

Res! c:

[Glispa]

- Username -
The Pirate Dragon
- Sima Name -
Ettore Orva
Ettore means "Loyal," it's the name he gave himself that he goes by
Orva means "courageous" and it is the name he was born with
- Sima Gender -
Male
- Pack Name -
Hach Winik
- Backstory -
(I've been really sick and haven't been able to complete it, but I'll give you a summary)
Ettore hates to flee and has too much pride. In a fight for territory against another pack, Ettore and some of the other warriors go with their chief to settle the dispute but find themselves utterly outnumbered and defenseless. To prevent annihilation and injury, the chief surrenders the land and allows the enemy pack to take it. Ettore loathes this and insists to the enemy group that they will continue to fight until the very end for their pack and their name. However, aware of impending loss, the chief insists surrender and orders Ettore to step back and return to the pack.
When the group retreats, the Chief has a talk with Ettore and tells him that he needs to understand what they did at that battle and why. As a prideful warrior, he believes that retreating is the sign of cowardice and insists that they did the wrong thing at the border and should have attacked back no matter what. Frustrated, the chief orders him to go and think about what that would have done to the pack but also orders him to stay with the rest of the pack.
When finished with his talk with the chief, Ettore runs off to challenge the enemy pack again on his own and insists that he will only lose in battle, not in conversation. He is attacked by the enemies as he desired but was greatly injured and his left horn got chipped. He ran back to the pack to beg for help but the chief refused it to him in consequence of disobeying a direct order and he was cast out of the pack to be known as an vagrant. Eventually, he ran from the pack and insisted to live on his own, away from cowards who must live together to survive.

Congrats and take good care of this little guy ^^

[The Pirate Dragon]

Ah, thank you! I'll make sure he's taken care of

[The Pirate Dragon]

He's been gifted to -WillowKist

[koegami]

owned by me!