DAM: Palomino Extended Blanket by Alley96

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DAM: Palomino Extended Blanket

Postby Alley96 » Wed Oct 17, 2012 1:15 pm

<3
To get this one, make up a poem about him/her. Ends in 3-5 days.

Owner: ~Bast~
Horse Name: Cosette
Height: 14.2hh
Gender: Mare
Rarity: Uncommon
Poem: (Told from her point of view.)

Feel the roll and the step and the thud and the beat,
carrying you over land to the place where land and sky meet.
The whistle of wind that sounds through your mind,
the twisting and bending and turning of time.

Don't slow your canter, don't stutter your feet,
just keep racing faster to find what you seek.

It's on the horizon, like the pot of gold;
you chase and track, but never will hold.
And what's that you're seeking,
That you never will reach?
What's so important about that sight
to capture your heart and hold it so tight?

Don't slow your canter, don't stutter your feet,
just keep racing faster to find what you seek.

Your golden coat glows in the heat of the sun,
as your long legs flash faster in a race to be won.
But the prize is still further, just out of reach-
A still pool of liquid
On this waterless beach.

Don't slow your canter, don't stutter your feet,
just keep racing faster to find what you seek.

And further and faster, the roll and the beat,
you seem to shine bright in the desert's heat.
Your keen eyes strain forward
through thick hazy air,
and look for a flash to prove the water's still there.

Don't slow your canter, don't stutter your feet,
just keep racing faster to find what you seek.

But the sun now is fading and so is your strength.
The rays slip away and take with them the heat.
And the swirling airs still,
the mirage goes away.
Only your memory ever could stay.

Slow now your canter, your stuttering feet,
just keep clinging harder to the hope that you seek.

The moon is a kinder mistress by far,
she cools your coat and clears your heart.
Her soft light will guide you through this dark.
And there is the flash of water to drink
On the dark surface the moon's light
Seems to wink.

Slow now your canter, your stuttering feet,
You've found the mirage that held all that you seek.
Last edited by Alley96 on Mon Oct 22, 2012 11:03 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: DAM: Palomino Extended Blanket

Postby BlueEyedKite » Wed Oct 17, 2012 1:41 pm

beeeeautiful c: but I just haz one question! I noticed the rarity is only uncommon, but I was under the impression that long manes would always be rare? :0
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Re: DAM: Palomino Extended Blanket

Postby Alley96 » Wed Oct 17, 2012 1:43 pm

BlueEyedKite wrote:beeeeautiful c: but I just haz one question! I noticed the rarity is only uncommon, but I was under the impression that long manes would always be rare? :0

Nope, they arent always rare
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Re: DAM: Palomino Extended Blanket

Postby dogshrimp » Wed Oct 17, 2012 1:49 pm

Owner:
loveTHATwolf
Horse Name:
Sephora
Height:
14.2hh
Gender:
mare
Rarity:
Uncommon
Poem:
((okay, I'm no poet and this will probably make you wish that you hadn't let me post. But, I'm still taking my chances.))

In the dark of day
and the light of night
only one stands

in a coat of sand
and mane of cream
lies a mare of beauty

Everlasting in her gaze
perishing in her sadness
immortality only offered to those whom she favors

Sephora awakens.....
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Re: DAM: Palomino Extended Blanket

Postby Flowerdust » Wed Oct 17, 2012 1:50 pm

Owner: Flowerdust
Horse Name: Caltha.. it means "golden flower"
Height: 14.2hh
Gender: female
Rarity: Uncommon
Poem:
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Re: DAM: Palomino Extended Blanket

Postby ɾïṿεṉḋεll » Wed Oct 17, 2012 1:52 pm

Owner: rivendell
Horse Name: Daybreak
Height: 14.2hh
Gender: Mare
Rarity: Uncommon
Poem:
Who would've thought that
this was outside of impossable?
racing around the stars,
chasing the firey sun up the sky,
commanding it to start a new day

don't you dare give up
the stars burn for you,
don't you dare give up
left the sun to fall to earth
and you shall rise in her place

buring with the same passion
desire
will
might
beauty
power
uncontrolable rage
and the most tender love

a beat of hooves
a beat of a heart
a beat of a world,
and a soul

and a new day turns
a fresh start and world
born again every swift turn
trapped in a rolling dance
a waltz, a tango, a tossing
wave of new life

all brought by one
one creature who was more than
uncommon, she was
unique
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Re: DAM: Palomino Extended Blanket

Postby ChristainAnimalLover » Wed Oct 17, 2012 2:03 pm

Widthdrawing...Too many better forms...(I'm not a poem writter)

Owner: ChristainAnimalLover
Horse Name: Golden Rose
Height: 14.2hh
Gender: Female
Rarity: Uncommon
Poem: WIP
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Re: DAM: Palomino Extended Blanket

Postby ~punkstache » Wed Oct 17, 2012 2:05 pm

Owner: ~punkstache
Horse Name: Korona (Corona: the plasma 'atmosphere' of the sun)
Height: 14.2hh
Gender: Stallion/Male
Rarity: Uncommon
Poem: (haiku poem)
One firey steed,
Racing swift through the dessert,
Streaking like the sun.
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Re: DAM: Palomino Extended Blanket

Postby Arabian. » Wed Oct 17, 2012 2:11 pm

He's gorgeous Alley <3

Owner: Arabian
Horse Name: Falak; name simply meaning "star" in Arabic. I thought it suited his bright, golden-yellow coat color.
Height: 14.2hh
Gender: Stallion
Rarity: Uncommon
Poem:
Instead of a regular, 12+ line rhyming poem, I thought I'd do something different and a little more interesting. I'm going to do a Diamante ^^


Falak
Golden, Bright
Flashing, Sparkling, Fighting
Mustang, Wild, Desert, Sand
Galloping, Whinnying, Playing
Free, Beautiful
Desert Appaloosa Mustang







Now.. to explain what a Diamante is.. in case you do not know. The poem is about two things, for exmaple; a pencil and a pen. The 1st line is just one noun. The 2nd line is describing the first with adjectives. The 3rd line is three 'ing words that describe (or talk about/explain) the 1st line. The first two nouns of line 4 describe line 1, the last two nouns describe the noun of line 7. Then it goes backwards; line 5 are three 'ing words describing line 7, and then line 6 are two adjectives describing the noun in line 7. It's confusing... I know.

I chose "golden and bright" because that's just what I think of and see when I look at him.
"Flasing, sparkling" for the same reason. But "fighting" because his personality is going to be tough (but also loving and caring ^^)
All the rest is pretty self-explanatory. :D
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Re: DAM: Palomino Extended Blanket

Postby Shark--Vomit » Wed Oct 17, 2012 2:20 pm

Owner:Frost Wolf
Horse Name:Golden Sun
Height: 14.2hh
Gender: Female
Rarity: Uncommon
Poem: um........
A wild herd is running by,
With a stallion in the lead,
Thrusting their arched necks into the sky,
And cantering at amazing speed.
A herd of canyon horeses,
A wild and beautiful pack,
Their poundingfeet forces,
The crumbling rocks to crack.
After watching them for hours,
A great surprise I did gain,
For standing under a mare,
Was a filly with a curly mane!
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