Viscet #871 - winner! by SilverSamurai

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Viscet #871 - winner!

Postby SilverSamurai » Thu Aug 04, 2016 6:33 am

Username;; T h e M a r t i a n
Name;; Nukpana
Gender;; Male




I love centipeetle and her episode hhh
Look! A viscet UFA and not a custom!


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Minor mane edit (hair) // uncommon
Lion mane // uncommon


This will be a story based competition. Word limit of 2,000 for the whole form, and extras are allowed. However, if you decide to add text in a picture, exc. it will be counted towards the 2k limit. Prettying up is fine, but the story should hold the personality and everything I should know about the viscet!

On a side note: yes, I'm jumping aboard the SU design train with Strudel (her gem design contest). No, you don't have to know the series to adopt this viscet. Also, this viscet should not reference the series or centipeetle in your form. Thanks.

This will end in 2 weeks, on August 17th! Below is a basic form outline, but feel free to add to it. Good luck everyone!


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Re: Viscet #871 - ufa!

Postby bellini » Thu Aug 04, 2016 6:36 am

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:: Nukpana :: The Evil Spirit ::

Postby T h e M a r t i a n » Thu Aug 04, 2016 7:05 am

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Nickname;;
Hades, Demon, or Satan
Some have called him 'Insane', 'Murderer', or 'Soul less'
Story;;

Part One ;; The Loss of Key

"Key. Come on!" The white maned viscet snapped in an angry tone, his impatience growing by the second. "If we don't hurry they will catch us!" He snapped again. "Hush, Nuke. I can't concentrate with your snapping at me." Key said as Nukpana paced back and forth in front of the door of the small jewelry store. Key was busy trying to break into the small case that was locked rather tightly. Nukpana was on lookout duty. Little did he know that this wouldn't be a routine robbery.

"Gotcha!" Key said, and snatched the beautiful diamond necklace, and threw it in the bag with the rest of the jewels. "And we are out of here." Nukpana said, and the two moved back up into their small escape route up to the roof. Nukpana sent Key up first, still keeping watch to make sure no bystanders or witnesses were present. No one at this late hour. And Key had disarmed the cameras for the next few minutes.

Something was wrong. Nukpana could feel it. His mane prickled, and the vision flashed before his eyes. His ears pinned back against his head, and he froze for a bit. He then flung himself up the ladder, and leapt onto the roof from the eighth step. "Key!" He cried, dashing for the fire escape that led down the building. "Key!" He called into the alley, where his voice echoed.

"Run, Hades! Get out of here!"

Nukpana paused, before continuing down the fire escape. The scream echoed in the alley below him. Tears stunt his eyes as he knew it was key. This wasn't the authorities. No. But who? He saw the grey and white viscet in the vision, but he had never seem the viscet before today.

His paws thudded against the ground as he landed in the alleyway. Raising his head, he saw the awful sight. Tears now freely flowed from his eyes. He spotted the grey and white viscet standing over the dying Key.

"Had a lovely scream, didn't he?" the viscet cooed in a dark voice. He tilted his head, a wicked grin splitting his muzzle.

"I am going to end you." Nukpana said, his voice quivering in pure anger. His muscles twitched in anticipation, ready to lunge forwards, and end this viscet.

"I am counting on it.."


Part Two ;; The Beginning of The End

Nukpana went in a downward spiral. He stopped his thievery, and headed down a path of savagery. He would attack lonesome souls, who dared enter his land or cross his path. Anger, a boiling hatred for the killer of his partner had blinded him, fooled him. He would harm poor, unfourtunate souls. Why, one was about to be harmed now.

"My, my. What do we have here?" The white maned viscet cooed, his body blanketed by the shadow of the towering building to his hind. He cackled as the viscet froze in its tracks.

"What ever is the matter? Oh please don't be scared..." He said in a mocking voice, taunting the young viscet, before appearing at its front, dragging a paw under its chin. "My, you are a lovely dove, aren't you, love?" He cackled, the female frozen as the male taunted her.

Her multicolored coat glistened in the pale moonlight, showing off her dazzling beauty. She pinned her ears flat against her head, warning the brute to back up. He chuckled. "What is your name, my dear?" He asked.

"Duchess." She snapped, upper lip curling softly. Nukpana smirked. "A fiery one, aren't you?" He said, before making a quick move. "We can't have much of that, can we?" He asked with a taunting smirk as he pinned her. She clawed at his arms and legs, leaving marks that would heal in little time.

"You have made a costly mistake, my dear." He said, as she squirmed beneath his paws. She sent her claws taking up his cheeks, only infuriating the male further. He snarled.

"I am only returning the favor..." he said.

Nukpana was now cleaning off his claws, the water stained red. No. He hadn't killed her. But, he left enough marks for her to run back and spread the word about the Evil Spirit. Maybe he could terrorize that vile creature that dared harm him. He snarled at the thought of the viscet.

He was on a mission. He would spread the word enough about his still being alive, enough maybe to scare the cowardly viscet who harmed him to perhaps do somethinf outrageously stupid. Maybe he would find him then, and have his revenge. Until then, he was stuck in a rut. He couldn't move, he couldn't advance towards his victory. It was like one long chess match. Every time he thought he was close, there was always some way for his opponent to escape.

He growled in frustration, and slid up the fire escape of the abandoned building. He climbed through the open window, and leapt down onto the floor. It was an old factory. What they had made, he didn't know. All that was left was a few machines unknown to him, and a bunch of boxes. He moved up to the office area, which was his sleeping area.

He laid down on the mat he had our, and rolled a metal ball under his paw as he got lost amid his own trains of thought. He rolled onto his back, rolling the back between his forepaws. He was scheming, trying to think of some way to get to Vide. He knew he name of his oppressor after having done some research. He found a small trail the viscet had left.

As Nukpana lay there thinking, something hit him. Well, two things. He had dropped the metal ball on his chest, causing the real gasp. He rolled to his side, rubbing his wounded chest. Nukpana flattened his ears. He roared in anger at the very thought.

Vide was still terrorizing him. Vide had begun to transform Nukpana into another Vide to ruin and corrupt others lives. He snarled, rolling onto his belly. What would Key think of him? His body shuddered, and he began to weep. Why? How?

Nukpana was continuing down, and like a whirlpool, he was taking everyone around him down with him.

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- Vide is the antagonist. Thanks to imakilljotwannabe!

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Re: Viscet #871 - ufa!

Postby gp5 » Thu Aug 04, 2016 7:13 am

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Story;;
Res with being a ghost, and being known as 'Candle jack.'
Carries a candle, and rope around with him, and kidnaps innocent viscets. If you say Candle Jack outloud, he'll come and whisk you away. c':
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Re: Viscet #871 - ufa!

Postby cvpidxpng » Thu Aug 04, 2016 7:38 am

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Re: Viscet #871 - ufa!

Postby WolfwithWings38 » Thu Aug 04, 2016 7:39 am

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Name;; The name's Soul and I'm male
Story;;
Chapter one The Soulless
Wow, I can't believe I'M HELPING YOU actually it's not really helping you! I'm the bait Yes that's correct you're the bait and you will be or they'res gonna be trouble heading up your way fast before you can even blink. Are we almost there? Shut your whining! It's up 2 miles ahead from us it's not that long now until I get what I deserve!
Chapter Two The Soulless Meets The Soulless
they both get out of the car We're here YES! Now, Charlie I need you to be the bait when I give you the sign, the sign is me hawking like a bird, got that? Yes, sir, yes sir! secretly waits to call him an idiot Ugh, YOU IDIOT! Anyways time to go inside....... Okay go hide yourself so you can be hidden, I'll go steal this masterpiece! sneaks around and breaks hidden cameras, then finds the huge piece of gold, which is actually the only thing that'll give you huge money in that joint, oh the irony puts shiny thing in the red beaming light that'll get you to the police, or simply known as the laser and fails so he grabs it quickly RUN CHARLIE RUN Okay, do you have it? HMMMM MAYBE THE VERY LOUD ALARM GOING OFF MEANS I DON'T HAVE IT! OF COURSE I DO, IDIOT! Not so fast boys! They both gasp
Chapter 3 Or not.......
You know you have to give you're old granny a kiss! Grandma! I can't or else you'll go to jail with us! Ohhhh, come on! You know I've been to jail many times! Fine! quickly kisses his grandma Now......... who's your boyfriend you have there? Charlie laughs hysterically YEAH SOUL, WHO'S YOUR- SHUT UP CHARLIE! And Grandma! I don't have a boyfriend or girlfriend I'm not into that stuff! Ohhh fine don't have an experience that'll change your life forever and don't have kids and don't get- they both run away while Soul's grandma flies away into her house like god would if he wasn't managing his angles up in heaven And that's my story on how I stole the golden giant egg that looks like a cat!
Likes: Stealing, doing crimes, Halloween, scary stuff, making people think the obvious when in reality it's a prank and then laughing at there face, being in charge, interrupting people, and being mean, and likes making people feel bad, except his grandma or his family he doesn't that much friends, but the friends he does has as well. He treats them kindly is what I mean!
Dislikes: Being interrupted, doing the right thing, following the rules/laws, not making trouble, and people who don't listen to him/and mocking him.
THAT'S ALL I HAVE GO TO AN OTHER FORUM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Re: Viscet #871 - ufa!

Postby corgiboy » Thu Aug 04, 2016 8:02 am

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Alucard wrote:many have heard me, but no one has seen me,and I will not speak back until spoken to....who am I?

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~A sepector of the forest
~tricks vicets many viclings into following him to make them his own childeren of the forest
~enjoys sleeping among the tree branches
~avoides other viscet contact
~when he talks he talk in riddles or rhymes
~uses his green fur to blend in with the forest
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Re: Viscet #871 - ufa!

Postby -Shaded- » Thu Aug 04, 2016 8:47 am

Dropping! Martian can use my art <3

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-cookie cat. He's a pet for your tummy. Cookie ca-- I mean lived in the tropic jungle
-Attacked by a glowing yellow viscet
-The viscet Levitated senti to a ledge. Looted his house
-DROP
-Lost his memories
-Let his mane grow out
-became one with the jungle again.
-one night he saw a yellow light
-Dramatic flashback
-follows
-A high pitched sound erupts
-Fell on the ground covering ears.
-Viscet cam and helped him.
-He goes unstable but ___ stays and helps him become stable again.

--- STORY START---

The Humid Sun Beated down on the tropical area, a sanctuary where humans can't touch. This is a place where all kinds of animals thrive with an abundance of food and shelter. Many different kinds of species like the Viscet live in harmony away from humanity, Until----
*pl shh pl shh* The dark colored viscetling picked his berries without a care in the world. This is Alicai, the outcast of the tribe for having a green mouth like marking on the sides of his face. As he does his regular routine, a big life changer is right around the corner...-
*ALICAI's POV*
I picked my berries, eating the occasional blueberry. I was content -------
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Re: Viscet #871 - ufa!

Postby *-wolfs-* » Thu Aug 04, 2016 9:13 am

*noms on animal crackers and almost chokes on one (darn lions!!)* Woah beautiful baby here Silver! Marking to watch, early early congrats to the winner!!

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Re: Viscet #871 - ufa!

Postby mellow yellow. » Thu Aug 04, 2016 3:11 pm

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He lived by many names; the Loyal, the Fallen, the Viscet, the Honorable. All he wanted to be called was his true name; Variks. He felt that he didn't deserve any titles for what he had done over the years. All he had done over his ten years of service to his queen was capture a few criminals, and keep them in his prison, as well as a few field missions. He had only done one noteworthy thing. He and another viscet had taken down a long time threat to the queen; Skolas, Kell of Kells.

The day started like any other, give his subordinates their missions for the day, give the ones who had finished their missions their rewards and give them new ones to complete, then look over a mission the queen had sent him. Strangely, it was a tactile mission. Most missions were given on a holographic message, but this one was on a piece of paper, not often seen. He decided to take this to his home to read.

Unrolling the piece of paper, Variks began to read the mission. His eyes widened when he saw that it was from the queen; he knew that this was to be followed without question. He would be on a mission to find out what had been going on within the “house of wolves”, and more specifically what had happened to Skolas. He would be given a partner, who would meet him on sight.

Not knowing who this partner was, and not really caring, he accepted the mission. He opened his hologram, taking a picture of the paper and sending it to the queen, hoping it would suffice. (Surprisingly, it did. What a nice queen she is.) Afterwards he hurried towards where the House of Wolves resided; supposedly it was an abandoned rocket-yard in Russia, which they had transformed into their base. He waited on the snowy forest surrounding the rocket-yard for his partner to arrive.

An hour passed before he was alerted by nearby footsteps. He quickly raised his weapon; a staff with a split ellipse in the top, which shoots lightning when needed. He quickly aimed it towards where he heard the footsteps and saw another viscet. It was one of his subordinates. He knew this one well. Her name was Akuma. She had finished many missions for him and had started making conversation with him between missions, wanting to get to know him. Despite his best efforts to not make relationships with anyone below his level, Akuma had started to grow on him a bit, not that he would ever say that out loud.

He lowered the weapon quietly. “Oh, it is only you. Hello, Akuma.” Variks said as the purple viscet sauntered over with a smirk on her face, her signature scythe secured to her back with a belt hidden under a black cloak, not that black would do her any good out here.

“Hello, o’ Honorable one~! How may I be of service today? Oh, that’s right! I was sent to be your partner by the queen, wasn’t I?” So she was the one the queen was speaking of. I should have known. Variks thought for a moment before nodding to Akuma.

“Yes. The queen assigned us to be partners on this mission. We need to go into the rocket-yard and find out what happened to the Kell of Kells. Let us begin, yes?” He asked, but before getting a response from Akuma, he ran towards the rocket-yard. Akuma just groaned and ran after him.

They both started taking out the humanesque enemies in the front yard quickly, getting to the main base within about ten minutes and a few minor cuts and abrasions. Variks lead Akuma to the room where the map said Skolas was located carefully. They saw him in front of a large group of his followers.

Skolas was actually a lot larger in person, being as large as a house and strong enough to lift one up with all four of his arms quite easily. He held two lard swords in his lower arms and he spoke to his “house of wolves” about taking over the other “houses” nearby.

A house was a group of the creatures known as Fallen. They write either robotic or human like. The human ones had four arms and sword weapons. The robot ones were shaped like squares and had two fan like jets on the back corners for flight. Some of the fallen could even turn invisible. The houses were made to bring the fallen together and keeps them from fighting, but it had obviously failed.

Variks looked to Akuma. “Let us end Skolas, yes?” He growled, grabbing his staff quickly, as well as a grenade. Akuma nodded to him and ran in, starting with the small enemies so Variks could focus on Skolas.

Variks jumped from the ledge of the top floor they were on, landing onto a pipe and quickly throwing the grenade onto Skolas as it exploded. The grenades he carried were special, as they summoned lightning storms when they exploded. He climbed down from off the pipe and ran towards Skolas, who was trying to fight off Akuma, but soon noticed him and started slashing his swords at him. Variks started to jump away quickly, making freshened clicking sounds and shooting his lighting at him quickly, trying to kill him. Akuma had taken out the last of the enemies and was now slashing at his legs, making him start to stumble. Variks made his final shot on him, hearing him call out that they would pay for his death before he fell over onto the ground. A few of the queen’s ships came down from a hole in the ceiling to take the body, presumably to give it to the queen.

Variks looked to Akuma again. “It is over, yes? We have won…?” Akuma sighed and put away her scythe.

“Yeah. I guess so.”

(996 words)

Credits wrote:The name Variks is based off of Variks the Loyal from Destiny, as well as Skolas, Kell of Kells, House of wolves, and the Fallen.
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