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Stars #489

Postby Guest » Wed Oct 07, 2020 10:10 am

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Tell me about a scar they have, and how they got it!
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Name: Briarstripe
Gender: Male
Rank: Deputy
Clan: Thistleclan
Description: Chocolate classic tabby with low white and blue eyes
Age: 43 moons
Edits: Scar (nr)
Owner: Lex.
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Postby Lex. » Wed Oct 07, 2020 10:16 am

Username: Lex.
Cat Name: Briarstripe
Gender: Male
Rank: Deputy
Clan: (cc)
Age: 43 Moons
Prompt:

I love the storywriting prompts c':

Briarpaw had been an apprentice for 6 moons. He was doing great in her training, and was a tough and diligent warrior to be. He made sure to correct all of the many mistakes he has made throughout his life which has proved him to be resistant and courageous. By the time he was in her 7th and last moon of apprenticeship, something happened. What happened you ask? Well, here is the story.

*Chirp Chirp*
The birds were singing their song of the morning. It was a bright and sunny day, and it was also in fact the day that Briarpaw was going to be made a warrior! He awoke from the sound of a bustling camp. Everyone was in a great mood, and the day was going swell so far. Briarpaw, still a bit drowsy from his deep sleep, stretched halfway out of the apprentices den. He then yawned, and went to go eat something from the fresh-kill pile. His clanmates greeted him as he walked by, giving him coy smiles, knowing we was going to be a full warrior soon. Being the modest cat he is, he shyed away and gave his clanmates sweet smiles, thanking them for their support. As he approached the fresh kill pile, his mentor greeting him. "Hello, Briarpaw! I assume the day has found you well so far?" Briarpaw nodded. "Yes, it has! It's nice to see that everyone believes in me." he said shyly, pawing at the ground whilst he spoke. "That's great. Why don't we share this squirrel, and go hunting?" his mentor said, beckoning at a plump squirrel. Briarpaw then eagerly nodded, and then shared that squirrel with his mentor.
As they finished eating, they got up and went out to the forest. It was a beautiful day in greenleaf, it had just rained a lot the previous night, and the plants were already looking even more green. Their paws made dents in the soft ground as they went along, sniffing for prey to hunt. There was nothing near the stream, so they decided to head towards the Woodpecker tree. The name comes from the cute little woodpecker that lives there. The tree, slightly tilted was awfully quiet. Usually on a day like this, the woodpecker would be pecking away, looking for the bugs that reside in the tree. "It's awfully quiet today." Briarpaw inquired. His mentor grunted an agreement. "I'll go and check." Briarpaw jumped in front of them. "Could I go check?" His mentor stepped back and allowed him to climb the tree. If he was lucky, he would find a robins nest, or maybe a sparrow. He made his way to the first set of branched. Careful not to fall, he peered around the tree in search of any feathered food. Not finding anything, he started his descent. However, on his way down, he noticed something. The tree began to wobble. Panicking, he began trembling.
"Get down from there!" His mentor screeched. He bunched his legs and leaped. The tree wasn't far behind. Falling with him, it caught up to him. One of the branches scratched from his eyes to the base of his tail, attacking his underbelly. Hitting the ground just a taillength away from the tree, everything went black.

Briarpaw awoke in the medicine den, with a couple of cats hovered over him. One being a large white tom, the deputy, and his mentor. Briarpaw, shocked jumped back, but then winced at the pain. The medicine cat, a small ginger she cat hissed at the 2 toms. "Enough! Get out of here, he is seriously wounded and needs rest." Both the toms gave her a surprise look. The deputy furrowed his brow and left. His mentor brushed his tail against Briarpaw's flank and walked out. The small she cat went over to his nest. "Hi, little one. How are you feeling?" Briarpaw, biting back back grunted in response. The she-cat gave a worried look then went and retrieved some herbs from the wall. She came back a bit later with a green paste. She applied it to her paw and placed it on his scar. The scar started over his eye, down his chest, on his belly, and to the base of his tail. "Crazy wound you got, huh. Thank starclan you are live, you could've been killed out there, 'paw." Briarpaw shivered and thought to himslef, "How foolish. I could've died. And for what? A squirrel? Tch." As if reading his thoughs, the she-cat told him, "Don't worry. It's not your fault. The rain loosened up the tree, we should've checked like we usually do. Just sit tight, ok?"
An old black tom stood near the entrance of the den. "Mosswing." he called out. She turned to look at him. He beckoned her to follow him with her tail. They both stood outside of the den, talking. She then came back in. "Come, follow me. You can stand right? Be careful." He nodded, and followed her out into the clearing. Everyone was gathered under the gnarled roots of a willow tree, while the leader, the same black tom from before sat atop the roots.
"Thistleclan. I call upon you today wo welcome a new warrior." Briarpaw watched, in shock, but also awe.
"Briarpaw. Do you promise to uphold the clan code, and always do what is best for the clan?"
Briarpaw sat and upright as he could. "Yes, Darkstar."
"Then by the power invested in me, you are know to be known as Briarstripe. The clan thanks you for the bravery and courage you showed a few sunrises ago, and hope that you will continue to learn and grow."
He touched noses with the new warrior, and the clan cheered.
All around were familiar faces, cheering him on. He was appreciated, and that is all that he could ask for. And he has a sweet scar to prove it.

-fin-
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Re: Stars #489

Postby KestrelTheFirecat » Wed Oct 07, 2020 1:47 pm

Username: KestrelTheFirecat
Cat Name: Echoshade
Gender: female
Rank: deputy
Clan: (Please link) Forum/viewtopic.php?f=103&t=4437901
Age: (1 year or above) 17 moons
Prompt: echoshade has her scar form a fox that she battled while she was a kittypet and she was proud about her defeating a fox on her own. Her scar looks like a jagged stripe down her front right leg
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Re: Stars #489

Postby chickensmoothie.com » Wed Oct 07, 2020 5:01 pm

Username: ~nyte shade~
Cat Name: Cliffsong
Gender: Female
Rank: Deputy
Clan: (Please link) e
Age: (1 year or above) 42 moons
Prompt:

Cliffsong has a large, deep scar on her left front paw. She tries to hide it out of embarrassment. She joined the clan as a kittypet, and having to spend a moon in the medicine cat's den because a boulder crushed your paw while you were watching a butterfly did not leave a great impression. She has since found her place in her clan, but she shies away from the topic when anyone asks about it. She makes a good deputy, wise and advising as she is older than her leader.
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Re: Stars #489

Postby .Lyrebird » Wed Oct 07, 2020 6:22 pm

Username: .Lyrebird
Cat Name: James > Minktooth
Gender: Tom
Rank: Deputy
Clan: Fallsclan
Age: Twenty-four moons
Prompt: The scar itself is two slashes through the heart marking on his shoulder: click.
    What normally would have been a peaceful, if not hungry, night's sleep was shredded and wrecked by something - or someone - crashing through the forest, snapping each twig and rustling every leaf until James' fur stood on end and when he lifted his head, he noticed each of his claws had gouged holes in the earth beneath him. Ugh. Irritated, the dark-furred tom stood and pushed through the little thicket of bushes he'd housed himself in for the last few moons to head towards the noise. He'd originally intended to be quiet about it, unlike his intruder, but sleep deprivation made even the most agile of cats clumsy and a large branch snapped under his weight, which in turn made the other creatures noises go silent.

    Mouse-dung! James froze and waited, and waited a while more, and no more noises came to him so he dropped low and started forward again in the direction he'd last heard something. It seemed like forever before anything happened, and all he got was a whiff of scent, a strange cat, a house pet; nothing that would cause him any issue. So he resumed his stroll through his territory at a leisurely gait. The scent was steady for a while, until it wasn't, and it started to cross over itself and double back like a knotted snake.

    He'd been about to call it a night when suddenly a dark shape was pouncing at him out of a bed of shadow and claws sunk deep into his shoulder, throwing him off balance and sending him down to the ground with a surprised growl. Teeth found his neck and the claws in his shoulder only sunk deeper so he stilled, swallowing before attempting to diffuse the situation. "Ah-hah, hi, hello. You must be the pet I smell- ah!" At the word pet, the claws and teeth gripped even harder and he laughed nervously. "Sorry! Sorry, the cat I smelled earlier. Please, I mean you no harm, I can help you- you're hungry right? I know where to get food! Let me up, let's introduce ourselves, and get a warm meal, yeah?"

    Thankfully, his words seemed to work, as the stranger let up and stepped away from him. James sat up and chuckled again, rolling his shoulder and looked over to see the damage with a wince. That would definitely leave a scar. "Thank you. I am James, and I live here." Getting a good look at his attacker, he could tell it was a she-cat, mottled orange and black with bright yellow eyes. She stayed on her paws, skinny and on edge.

    "I'm Bamb- Doecry. My name is Doecry. I am the destined leader of Fallsclan and this is to be my territory - I am NOT a pet. Let's get that food and clean that shoulder up."
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Re: Stars #489

Postby Guest » Sun Oct 11, 2020 4:00 am

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Postby Guest » Sun Oct 11, 2020 4:54 am

Lex. wrote:Username: Lex.
Cat Name: Briarstripe
Gender: Male
Rank: Deputy
Clan: (cc)
Age: 43 Moons
Prompt:

I love the storywriting prompts c':

Briarpaw had been an apprentice for 6 moons. He was doing great in her training, and was a tough and diligent warrior to be. He made sure to correct all of the many mistakes he has made throughout his life which has proved him to be resistant and courageous. By the time he was in her 7th and last moon of apprenticeship, something happened. What happened you ask? Well, here is the story.

*Chirp Chirp*
The birds were singing their song of the morning. It was a bright and sunny day, and it was also in fact the day that Briarpaw was going to be made a warrior! He awoke from the sound of a bustling camp. Everyone was in a great mood, and the day was going swell so far. Briarpaw, still a bit drowsy from his deep sleep, stretched halfway out of the apprentices den. He then yawned, and went to go eat something from the fresh-kill pile. His clanmates greeted him as he walked by, giving him coy smiles, knowing we was going to be a full warrior soon. Being the modest cat he is, he shyed away and gave his clanmates sweet smiles, thanking them for their support. As he approached the fresh kill pile, his mentor greeting him. "Hello, Briarpaw! I assume the day has found you well so far?" Briarpaw nodded. "Yes, it has! It's nice to see that everyone believes in me." he said shyly, pawing at the ground whilst he spoke. "That's great. Why don't we share this squirrel, and go hunting?" his mentor said, beckoning at a plump squirrel. Briarpaw then eagerly nodded, and then shared that squirrel with his mentor.
As they finished eating, they got up and went out to the forest. It was a beautiful day in greenleaf, it had just rained a lot the previous night, and the plants were already looking even more green. Their paws made dents in the soft ground as they went along, sniffing for prey to hunt. There was nothing near the stream, so they decided to head towards the Woodpecker tree. The name comes from the cute little woodpecker that lives there. The tree, slightly tilted was awfully quiet. Usually on a day like this, the woodpecker would be pecking away, looking for the bugs that reside in the tree. "It's awfully quiet today." Briarpaw inquired. His mentor grunted an agreement. "I'll go and check." Briarpaw jumped in front of them. "Could I go check?" His mentor stepped back and allowed him to climb the tree. If he was lucky, he would find a robins nest, or maybe a sparrow. He made his way to the first set of branched. Careful not to fall, he peered around the tree in search of any feathered food. Not finding anything, he started his descent. However, on his way down, he noticed something. The tree began to wobble. Panicking, he began trembling.
"Get down from there!" His mentor screeched. He bunched his legs and leaped. The tree wasn't far behind. Falling with him, it caught up to him. One of the branches scratched from his eyes to the base of his tail, attacking his underbelly. Hitting the ground just a taillength away from the tree, everything went black.

Briarpaw awoke in the medicine den, with a couple of cats hovered over him. One being a large white tom, the deputy, and his mentor. Briarpaw, shocked jumped back, but then winced at the pain. The medicine cat, a small ginger she cat hissed at the 2 toms. "Enough! Get out of here, he is seriously wounded and needs rest." Both the toms gave her a surprise look. The deputy furrowed his brow and left. His mentor brushed his tail against Briarpaw's flank and walked out. The small she cat went over to his nest. "Hi, little one. How are you feeling?" Briarpaw, biting back back grunted in response. The she-cat gave a worried look then went and retrieved some herbs from the wall. She came back a bit later with a green paste. She applied it to her paw and placed it on his scar. The scar started over his eye, down his chest, on his belly, and to the base of his tail. "Crazy wound you got, huh. Thank starclan you are live, you could've been killed out there, 'paw." Briarpaw shivered and thought to himslef, "How foolish. I could've died. And for what? A squirrel? Tch." As if reading his thoughs, the she-cat told him, "Don't worry. It's not your fault. The rain loosened up the tree, we should've checked like we usually do. Just sit tight, ok?"
An old black tom stood near the entrance of the den. "Mosswing." he called out. She turned to look at him. He beckoned her to follow him with her tail. They both stood outside of the den, talking. She then came back in. "Come, follow me. You can stand right? Be careful." He nodded, and followed her out into the clearing. Everyone was gathered under the gnarled roots of a willow tree, while the leader, the same black tom from before sat atop the roots.
"Thistleclan. I call upon you today wo welcome a new warrior." Briarpaw watched, in shock, but also awe.
"Briarpaw. Do you promise to uphold the clan code, and always do what is best for the clan?"
Briarpaw sat and upright as he could. "Yes, Darkstar."
"Then by the power invested in me, you are know to be known as Briarstripe. The clan thanks you for the bravery and courage you showed a few sunrises ago, and hope that you will continue to learn and grow."
He touched noses with the new warrior, and the clan cheered.
All around were familiar faces, cheering him on. He was appreciated, and that is all that he could ask for. And he has a sweet scar to prove it.

-fin-


Congrats Lex! It was really hard to chose, but in the end I chose this one cause I think it's super cute with lil' Briarpaw, and also for how well it was written! All of the entries were great, thanks to everyone who participated! His scar will be added as soon as possible. <3
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