Kalon #1200 — Design Your Own [winner!] by Karmel

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Kalon #1200 — Design Your Own [winner!]

Postby Karmel » Mon Sep 11, 2017 7:34 am

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On an early morning escapade you stumble groggily into the library, most likely seeking out information for a project you're working on, but instead you come across a large hardcover book left opened on a table. No one else is in sight and it looks like it was merely left there by the last reader. Yet something about the book calls to you. As you walk forward you notice it's old and fragile, the cover fraying and the papers withered from time. Looking around to verify you're the only one there, you sit down and start to read the passages laid out before you.

There's an old tale about an ancient battle that shook the stars. It spanned a millennia and caused many rifts throughout the known universe. The main combatants, those who started the war in the first place, moved against each other as two forces. The Cyborgs and the Aliens. One sought technological advances that would bring their people to new heights and be able to thrive on more planets by altering their atmospheres. The other believed in harboring the natural state of the universe and safe keeping the planets and their species to grow steadily with purpose. Perhaps some within the ranks felt otherwise and just longed for taste of battle. Nevertheless over the years these opinions turned to conflict, and from diplomatic failures that conflict sparked the beginning to an end. Only one side would come out victorious, and from the fighting arose a hero.

It sounded interesting enough so you decide to flip to the next pages only to find them... well, mostly blank. The only sentence found was in big bold letters on the center of the page reading: "Create Your Hero"

Beyond that page were notes that looked like they were written in by others. It appears people had taken the empty pages to finish the story with their own interpretations of a hero. Some good of heart and others more like villains. As you read through the various writing of others you feel compelled to add your own ending. Beside you is an old fashioned quill which you're almost certain wasn't there when you sit down. Yet you pick it up, turn to the next empty page, and start writing.


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Kalon #1200

Hello and welcome to the next milestone adopt of the species! I am so honored to be here with you all today in sharing in yet another momentous occasion. For this adopt we've decided we wanted to let the community pick what they want in a Design Your Own competition. This means that we'll be providing the blank lines for you to make the Legendary Kalon of your dreams. However, you must pick from one of the two featured themes and follow the guidelines provided. Most importantly this competition will not be judged based on the design, but rather the character itself through the story/personality/etc. you show us.

Below is a set of official transparent lines for the Kalon species. The design must be made from/similar this base.
(if for some reason you can't draw with the base message me about a compromise)
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[ stash link with png and psd files ]


Theme

Cyborg or Alien
(you can only pick one!)


Design Guidelines

— Maximum of 3 Legendary Traits; Unlimited Rare + Under

— You can either make it yourself or it can be made by someone else.

— Feel free to interpret your chosen theme in either a standard or unique way.

— Make sure to have a list of traits somewhere in your form!



Competition

— Write about the Kalon's story, personality, history, and more to give a well defined character.
Who are they? What views do they have on the war? Do they fight or provide other assistance? Who wins in the end?
These are the kinds of questions you should be thinking about when writing your form. Create your hero.

—You can define 'hero' however you choose. They don't necessarily have to be good, or bad, or neutral. They can be whoever you want them too. They could fail in the end and be more of a martyr. Maybe only history remembers them as a false hero because after all... history is told by the victors. Feel free to get creative with your interpretation.

— Unlimited words and art available.

— The form can be a separate thread/offsite

Code: Select all
[b]Username:[/b]
[b]Name:[/b]
[b]Gender:[/b]
[b]Theme:[/b] (cyborg or alien?)
[b]Design:[/b] (finished kalon concept)
[b]Your Hero:[/b] (story/personality/everything go wild)

Note: You do not have to use this skeleton form, just make sure you answer all questions involved.



End Date

November 10th, 2017 at 5:00pm PST
[ check current PST here! ]

Please submit all questions regarding the competition to Karmel. Do not post them here please.
Have fun and good luck! <3


F.A.Q. Section found in second post here!

(p.s. sorry this took so long to get up, my computer deleted everything I had written previously on it so I had to restart)


Cover was made by the incredible julibee !
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F.A.Q.

Postby Karmel » Sat Sep 16, 2017 1:59 pm

Frequently Asked Questions


Q. What would "____" be considered trait wise? Can I do "____" for my Legendary trait?
A. Message me personally for any and all trait related questions!


Q. What if I can't use the base provided?
A.
Please message me so that we can see about coming up with a compromise.


Q. Can I make the design on Oekaki itself?
A.
Yes, you may do this using the Artist Search lines. However do not post the finished product! This is crucial. Simply use a screenshot of the design when you're done.


Q. What do you define as an alien?
A. You're free to interpret that as you please, however usually it's something foreign and mystical. I will not hold you to any certain standard of the world alien.


Q. What do you define as a cyborg?
A. Basically the same as the alien question with free interpretation, but I will hold you to the fact that cyborgs always include both mechanical and organic parts.


Q. What if I can't design or write that well?
A. This competition will be judged on the character. If you show us a good character that's all that matters. Things like the writing and art are there to help you show off this character for true understanding.


Q. Can I use the design I made if I don't win?
A. Absolutely! If you have the appropriate MYO slot for it you're more than welcome to use the design you built here. Removing or adding traits from it to match the slot is fine too. You can also take the design out of species, since it's your design you'll be free to use it elsewhere if you don't win so long as everything Kalon is gone from the design (if you have it commissioned or anything where you don't make it yourself you must ask the artist too). As it's not a true Kalon without an MYO slot or the win it's fine to "transfer" it in case of a loss.


Q. Will there be runner ups for this competition?
A. That will entirely depend on the entries, but should we find that multiple people deserve a win RUs will be given out.


Q. Can I commission the design/have someone else make it?
A. Definitely, you're not obligated to make it yourself.


Q. What do you mean by creating your hero?
A. The Kalon is the 'hero' of the story. You write about and design them.
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Re: Kalon #1200 — Design Your Own [OPEN]

Postby kaatlove » Sat Sep 16, 2017 1:59 pm

mark!
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Postby Bright Horizons » Sat Sep 16, 2017 2:00 pm

Congrats!!
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Re: Kalon #1200 — Design Your Own [OPEN]

Postby starshine, » Sat Sep 16, 2017 2:02 pm

    res with alien
    she is the lost queen of an alien realm on a distant planet, but ended up in the kingdom of kihania on earth
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Re: Kalon #1200 — Design Your Own [OPEN]

Postby miku » Sat Sep 16, 2017 2:02 pm

Dropping out
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Re: Kalon #1200 — Design Your Own [OPEN]

Postby Epiale » Sat Sep 16, 2017 2:02 pm



.°. : • ★ • : .°.

On an early morning escapade you stumble groggily into the library, most likely seeking out information for a project you're working on, but instead you come across a large hardcover book left opened on a table. No one else is in sight and it looks like it was merely left there by the last reader. Yet something about the book calls to you. As you walk forward you notice it's old and fragile, the cover fraying and the papers withered from time. Looking around to verify you're the only one there, you sit down and start to read the passages laid out before you.

There's an old tale about an ancient battle that shook the stars. It spanned a millennia and caused many rifts throughout the known universe. The main combatants, those who started the war in the first place, moved against each other as two forces. The Cyborgs and the Aliens. One sought technological advances that would bring their people to new heights and be able to thrive on more planets by altering their atmospheres. The other believed in harboring the natural state of the universe and safe keeping the planets and their species to grow steadily with purpose. Perhaps some within the ranks felt otherwise and just longed for taste of battle. Nevertheless over the years these opinions turned to conflict, and from diplomatic failures that conflict sparked the beginning to an end. Only one side would come out victorious, and from the fighting arose a hero.


It sounded interesting enough so you decide to flip to the next pages only to find them... well, mostly blank. The only sentence found was in big bold letters on the center of the page reading: "Create Your Hero"

Beyond that page were notes that looked like they were written in by others. It appears people had taken the empty pages to finish the story with their own interpretations of a hero. Some good of heart and others more like villains. As you read through the various writing of others you feel compelled to add your own ending. Beside you is an old fashioned quill which you're almost certain wasn't there when you sit down. Yet you pick it up, turn to the next empty page, and start writing...

• ★ •

The longer the words flow out, the more you come to realize you are not in control. Your hand writes words you never thought, names you do not recognize, ideas you didn't think. You find yourself sketching a creature you're unfamiliar with, places you've never seen. Your hand moves of its own accord, possessed, and you find yourself simply along for the ride, watching as a story unfolds before you.

It's different from the other, scattered pieces in the tome. No great warriors, or acclaimed spies. No monumental battles, or suns being blown into nothingness. Just an alien, two-headed, and long-limbed, but... normal. A very normal alien, who changed the tides of a war that had raged for a millennium by having the courage to carry on when all other heroes had failed.

• ★ •

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• ★ •

The Story of Left and Right, Unexpected Heros of the Kalaxion Galaxy

°.°: • ★ • : °.°

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Re: Kalon #1200 — Design Your Own [OPEN]

Postby Lillybear » Sat Sep 16, 2017 2:03 pm

Mark!
lilly she/her
mostly gone from cs,
but feel free to message
me on discord (lilly.bear)
about anything!
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Re: Kalon #1200 — Design Your Own [OPEN]

Postby apprentice_ » Sat Sep 16, 2017 2:06 pm

    mark to watch prolly arihtiht but who says i wont try and die
    guess who decided to do it

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