[jolteon]

Owner: ShimmerSolarPets
Name: Mizuki
Gender: Female
Gender for breeding: Female
owned as of 10/18

OMG i love this babe so much ;w; i was trying to go for a royal japanese sort-of look and added a couple of my favorite design elements and ahh i came up with this viscet that i hope you guys like as well! i wanted to get them out before i started working on customs c:

for this comp, you are allowed up to 1000 words plus 2 art pieces to do whatever you please with! the words can be divided into sections, or used in one big story. no comics/animations for the art please!

feel free to pretty up, here's the skeleton form!-

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Name: Mizuki
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mutations:
minor mane edit - UC
Antlers (complex horns) - rare

End date is september 15th @ 11:59PM!

[fromage]

dropping out ;o; gl to whoever wins this gorgeous 'cet!!

[~Teya~]

Ahh<3 What a pretty cet!!

[Snuggle_Bean]

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Journey rarely take the direct approach to what she wants, but eventually she gets what she is after. She is better judged by she does and not what she says. When she is asked to help, her first response might be no, but in the end, she always come through. She can often be hard on the outside, but soft on the inside. The hard shell she shows to the world is only there to protect herself from being hurt. Journey is very intuitive, almost to the point of being psychic. She is able to spot even the smallest change in an other's behavior, so it is hard to deceive her. She is very insightful and has a very good memory. The combination of these two skills plus her excellent observation skills makes her very aware
of the ulterior motives of others, it also helps her when she is on duty to serve and protect. Journey often seems very moody, cranky, and unpredictable, but at the end of the day she is a lovable girl. Because of her sensitivity, she can be seen as over-emotional and Very iffy, almost to the point of being distant. She tends to be possessive of those she has in her world. She can shut people out if she feels uncomfortable and "going into her shell" is seen as being introverted. If she feels the need to, she will retreat to her own emotional shell to keep others out. Journey don't need a lot of attention due to her unpredictable character and her life history, but if you give her the support she need, she will offer you her undying loyalty and love. Once you have won her trust, nothing anyone else can say will sway her against you.

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Journey has came from a long line of viscets, but she does not even though. When she was a egg her parents got kicked out of the kingdom that she was told when she was young but her bloodline goes way back, which will tell in the story bellow.

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It all began when journey was just an egg. Her parents where banned from the Jap kingdom, but an evil overlord who took over. Journey was born about 5 months after they left. She has no idea the kingdom existed, all she knew is what her parents told her and that they traveled everywhere. As time passed journey grew older and her parents also did, they unfortunately could not make it the rest of the travel and they later passed. Journey decided she wanted to travel to the nearest kingdom and protect Journey decided she wanted to travel to the nearest kingdom and wanted to try out for the royal warriors. Although the kingdom she was about the enter was the kingdom her parents where banned from. Journey traveled for 2 weeks looking for the kingdom until she followed fellow viscets to the kingdom.
Journey looked around she was amazed at how beautiful it was. Journey wanted to look around but she knew why she was there and her mission was to complete it. Journey made her way to the entrance of the warriors camp. She bowed to the instructor and out the corner of her eye she seen the king of the jap kingdom. Journey walked passed him. The king paused and looked at her. "Miss you look very familiar do i know you from somewhere", she scratched his head looking at her.
"No sir i dont think i recall, i actually just came here to try out for the royal warriors." She smiled.
"I sware you look very familiar, but its okay you may go on." He said bowing. Journey bowed and walked into the room. Every viscet in the room glided through the air and landed on there feet, kicking and swinging there swords.
She smiled as she knew this was the one warriors she wanted to join. She set her bag down and grabbed her sword. She followed all the directions the instructors instructions. As they went through the course. Journey was the most successful one out of them all. At the end of the day, journey got the news that she Will be a royal warrior. Journey was super excited that she got to be on the team. Over time juniper saved,rescued, and helped many viscets in need. After some time she also opened her self a royal dress shop. She designs and sells royal dresses during the day. She loved the life of living in the Jap kingdom. But it all changed one day when juniper was on duty. She was to scout the castle. She never actually been in the castle. She was so excited. Juniper walked through the gates with he sword on her back behind her. She looked around as she got to the door.
Journey then grabbed the gold ring and knocked on the door. A nicely dressed, very tall viscet answer the door and greeted journey in. Journey looked around and was so amazed at hoe big and beautiful it was full of roses and petals black and red with white walls and gold lining. It almost remind her of her parents. As journey was finishing up her scouting. She found a hallway that was blocked off, and knowing journey she was very curious so she decided to investigate. She walked into the hallway and looked at all great viscets who had became the queen or king of the kingdom and journey then stoped dead in her tracks and looked at 2 portraits. The 2 photos where of her parents. She was shook. She, her her parents where royality but hiw they where travelers. She had so many questions. But little time before someone catches her. She ran out of the hallway and out the castle without saying bye to the previous king. THE STORY WILL CONTINUE IF WON, JUST RAN OUT OF WORD LIMIT ;-;

Coding,Art, And Design By Me
979 Words In All

GOSH WAS TORN BETWEEN TWO OF YOUR DESIGNS THIS MONTH BUT I WILL DEF TRY FOR THIS ONE INSTEAD!!!

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she is an Japanese warrior at night and a royal clothes designer by day.her fam. got kicked out of there town when she was still an egg and couple years later she was born and they traveled. her family got to old to continued and they passed on later, she had to carrie on and learn to protect her self so she came back to the kingdom and lived in the village, but they did not know that the little viscet was the fam. child they kicked out. she entered the royal warriors, she wanted to protect. as she grew she was the best of the best warrior and loved her job. but little does she know what lies and things she saw that actually belong to her. AHH SO MUCH WIP!!!!

[dzo]

that hair is so pretty, and those horns are beautiful!!! the red underbelly is adorable too! I'm probably just going to be watching though, there were so many beautiful viscets made this month!

[Vixen Luo]

m-maybe;;

[~Ash Wolf~]

Yes <3

[Thebattleangel]

Username:
.Skye.

Name:
ロイヤル/Roiyaru
Roi (only to her sister)
(meaning Royal)

Gender:
Female

Story:
Distant screams on repeat, havoc all around me, the smell of smoke filling my nose and eventually making its way to my lungs, everything was a blur, I had been separated from my family, I was petrified, I was in too much shock to move an inch from where I was, something was running at me from a distance, I couldn't make out what it was at first, but as it neared I could see who it was clearly, it was my sister.

"Roi, are you ok?",
she said shaking,
"Im fine",
I replied looking around, everything we had was engulfed in flames, every den we had destroyed before us, the screams becoming more and more distant as we were both looking for a way to escape, but we were surrounded by flames, thankfully the flames weren't deathly close to us, but I could tell Clara was really worried, her eyes were darting around frantically,
"Where's mum and dad?",
I said at last, she just stared at me, horror filling her eyes each elapsed second, she didn't have to say anything for me to understand. The fire was slowly rising, ambers getting closer and closer to us, Clara hugged me, she was shaking bad, she knew she couldn't do anything to save herself or both of us, tears dripping down her face, her shaking getting worse and worse every minute, fear was slowly consuming her, I tried as best I could to comfort her but I was seemingly unsuccessful. She set her tail down soflty I watched as it lowered, the purple on the tip of her tail glew brighter as it absorbed one portion of the fire, creating a clear entrance for us both to escape, I was stunned.

I nudged my sister softly then forcefully, she opened her eyes and blinked a few times to adjust her vision,
"What is it Roi?",
Clara said as she wiped her eyes, I pointed in the direction of the entrance she had created, she was completely puzzled,
"H-how?",
she said amazed, I pointed at her tail which seemed to grow slightly bigger aswell as glowing bright, she tilted her head looking at it, she stood up, I followed her lead, she was very cautious going through the entrance, making sure not one spark touched me, the air on the other side was much more thin and cold, Clara sighed, it was a really heartfelt sigh, I could tell she was just as upset as I was loosing our parents who we loved really dearly. She lifted me up onto her back gently,
"Hold on",
Clara said taking a deep breath as she gazed at the horizon, at least I was guessing, it was too dark to see anything,
"Where are we going sis?",
"Far, far, far away from here Roi",
"But we could still save them, there has to still be a chance!",
"Roi, face it, theyre gone",
she said with an incredible amount of hurt in her voice, I kept my mouth shut as she started to run.

Time really seemed to drag on, me nor Clara had spoken a single word since we left, she was lost in her thoughts, she just kept walking forward, hoping to find something, anything, the silence was really unbearable, I was worried about her although I was younger, I would try open my mouth but the words never came out, Clara's head suddenly poked up her ears raised high,
"What is it Clara?",
"Something or someone Roi, I do not know what it is",
"Maybe we should go check it out?",
"I was thinking the same thing, it seems dangerous",
her ear twitched,
"But maybe its other viscets?",
"Hmm",
she was trying to focus, on what I couldn't make out, she steadily moved forward, I moved my gaze to where hers was, I saw it, a faint flash of red in the distance.

Clara approached the flash, the one singular creature turned to three, one multi colored, seeming to be male, another with ram like horns with a mix of brown in the pelt, seeming to be female, the third had tabby cat like markings mix with multi colors, also a female, they looked like they were hunting, the male looked like he was the leader of some sort of pack, we approached them warily, the brown pelted one approached us,
"What are you doing here?!",
she snarled, alerting the male,
"Calm down Cyn, im sure they have an explanation",
the male said calming her down,
"Our den was engulfed in flames and our parents...",
Claras voice trailed off, the other female approached us then,
"Oh im terribly sorry",
she said as she approached, the male stood proudly,
"I am Phoenix, this is Cynder and Aphrodite",
Phoenix said pointing to the females,
"A pleasure to meet you, I am Clara Lilium and this is my younger sister, Roiyaru",
Aphrodite came to my sisters side, she looked at me,
"Wow, your sister is adorable",
I smiled brightly,
Phoenix turned to face Clara,
"How did you escape the fire?, it would have been huge to engulf your whole den",
"Indeed sir, it was, we escaped by my tail somehow",
she replied lifting her tail, it was still glowing,
"Thats incredible",
Aphrodite said in awe, returning to his side,
"How'd you do it",
Cynder said curiously,
"That, I so not know miss, it just kind of happened",
"Thats kind of strange isnt it Phoenix?",
she said looking at him,
"Indeed, well your welcome to stay with us",
"We dont mean to intrude",
my sister said awkwardly,
"Its fine, we have plenty of room and oh, sorry if the people in our pack are a bit nosey",
we all laughed, me and Clara followed their lead.

The den was quite large as it had to home 9, now 11 viscets,
"Everyone calm down",
Phoenix said approaching the entrance to their den,
"This is Clara and her younger sister Roiyaru, they will be staying with us for however long they choose",
everyone came toward us and sat down,
"Now",
Cynder said,
"Clara and Roiyaru, this is Bleu, Foxy, Bella, Valentine and Drax, welcome to our pack".

2 arts:
The two princesses
The fire

[ShimmerSolarPets]

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Mizuki is just what you'd expect from an empress: poised, graceful, and lady-like. She has an extensive and sophisticated vocabulary. However, Mizuki is quite aloof, mainly due to her disease causing her not to be able to socialize. A core part of Mizuki, however, is her cold and manipulative nature. Mizuki is a very convincing liar, able to lie without any guilt or remorse. She is quite the extremist, willing to go to great lengths just to ensure the prosperity of her kingdom. She deceives and manipulates others easily, from using charm, tricks, and even coercing others through blackmail. She is not above forming shady alliances, swindling the rights to rule a kingdom from rulers, or even murder. Everything she does, however, is for the benefit of her subjects. Another core part of Mizuki is her luck. Her fortune is borderline supernatural. She seems to have a knack of beating the odds, no matter how murky they look. However, her luck often backfires, too, granting her what she wants and still bringing misfortune at the same time. To the outside eye, Mizuki is a tyrant, but to the subjects of Chiori, she's hailed a hero.
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Everybody always said Mizuki was a lucky Viscet. In fact, everyone considered her to have an abnormal amount of luck. It was as plain as the golden antlers on her head. It was a well-known superstition in her kingdom that a Viscet born with golden antlers would have an extraordinary amount of luck.

Though, with the way things were going, Mizuki didn't find herself particularly lucky at all.

Her body ached all over. Her head throbbed with pain as her vision swam in and out of focus. The young princess shivered as she sat near the window, her eyes staring blankly at the world outside. Then, came a cough. Another cough. Soon, she had one of her coughing fits. Reaching out to grab some medicine, she accidentally knocked over her precious porcelain vase.

CRASH!

Bits of porcelain flew in all directions. Mizuki groaned inwardly. Some luck she had. Ever since the day she hatched, she'd been inflicted with a rare disease with an unknown cure. All the best doctors in the area had said that it was a terminal illness. She would only live for a few days. Yet, days became months, and months became years. Mizuki kept surpassing her predicted lifespan each and every time. People would whisper, "Those antlers are really proof of her luck!" Yet, Mizuki couldn't figure out why everyone thought she was so lucky. Was it because she lived way beyond her life expectancy with the so-called terminal illness? She couldn't see how that was lucky. Every day was a fresh new torture, and she felt pain almost all the time. Was living in this pitiful condition really more fortunate than if she'd just died when she was a mere hatchling? The princess swallowed her medicine, the coughing fit starting to vanish. That's when the door burst open.

"Are you okay, Your Highness?" one of her servants asked.
"We heard a crash! Did something happen?"
"No, don't worry," Mizuki said, her tone even. "Would you please clean up this mess?" She waved a paw at the porcelain shards all over the floor. Her servants bowed. "Yes, Your Highness." They rushed out of the room. Mizuki's shoulders relaxed as she leaned back against the chair. Her vacant yellow eyes continued observing the outside. The castle gardens were beautiful, as always. She saw the royal gardener tending to the flowers with such meticulous care. Yet, beyond the palace walls, there laid dilapidated houses and malnourished peasants. The princess frowned. "That blasted kingdom," Mizuki murmured to herself. "Robbing our natural resources like that. If only my parents weren't so weak..." A vile taste filled Mizuki's mouth at the thought. Her parents, king and queen of Chiori. Weaklings. Mizuki had lost nearly all respect for them a long time ago. Seeing those tyrannous rulers coerce her parents like that, it was disgusting to watch her parents give in so easily to them. If Mizuki had been the queen, she wouldn't have done the same. No, she would stand up and tell those rulers who's in charge of her own kingdom.

Alas, all she could do right now was to pressure her parents into being more assertive. Mizuki stood up, steadying herself by leaning on her desk. The pain had subsided considerably, and she could think more clearly. Donning her royal outfit, she exited her room and made her way to the throne room. She entered and bowed. "Father, Mother, I have a request to make," she said.
"What is it, Mizuki?" the king asked.
Mizuki explained the situation. "With all due respect," she said, putting as much fake politeness into those words. "I think it's time we fought back."
Just as she expected, they refused. After a long argument, Mizuki was forced to retreat. Bowing out of the room, bitter thoughts began to fill her mind. "Such weaklings," she muttered as soon as she was out of the room. "Chiori needs a better ruler." And as soon as those words left her mouth, a strange rumble shook the castle. Mizuki's ears rang as the sound of something collapsing rang across the castle. She shut her eyes, trying to clear that incessant ringing inside her ears. She opened them and looked back. A jolt ran through her.

The throne room had collapsed. Mizuki scrambled up to her paws and ran inside to see what happened. The sight that laid before her was forever burnt into her mind. "No..." Mizuki muttered, her eyes wide with horror. "I didn't... mean to..."

The entirety of the castle staff rushed to the scene, and stopped short when they saw what had happened. A horrified silence swept across them all.

Chiori had just lost its rulers. Mizuki would soon get what she wished for, but she had just paid a terrible price.
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[Sün]

Username: TenguInari
Name: Hana
Gender: Female

xxxxxx “The Koi Boy,” Hana quietly whispered to herself. The viscet was peeking out one of the pillars that helped support the temple’s roof. She hid there and watched a koi patterned viscet enter the temple with his mother. Hana would always see them come by at least every weekend. But lately, they have been only visiting the temple at least twice a month, three times at best. There was something about the koi viscet that drew Hana’s interest.
xxxxxx Hana quickly composed herself after the koi viscet and his mother were out of sight and went back to work before one of the monks caught her off duty. She wasn’t looking forward to getting another stern lecture from the head of the temple. Hana took in a deep breath and let it out slowly before she headed into the temple to serve the visitors. Once she had entered the building, she scanned to see how many visitors there were for the day. Only five? she thought to herself. It was unusual to have this little at the temple, but at least it meant that Hana could serve these viscets without the need to rush.
xxxxxx The girl greeted everyone before she headed towards a small table that held the treats that she was to serve visitors. One by one she walked back and forth, giving each viscet a small tray that held a cup of green tea and a sweet treat to compliment the bitterness of the tea. When she finally gave a tray to the koi boy, Hana had placed an extra treat on the tray for him. She gave the koi boy a sweet smile as she placed the item down on the floor for him. He quietly whispered a thanks to Hana once she had stood up. She nodded at him before heading off back at the table to wait for the visitation to end.
xxxxxx She watched as everyone drank their tea and eat the sweet treat. They all scooted the trays to one side and listened to a chant by a monk for a couple of minutes before they were all able to stand up and form a line in front of a rather large statue. Each viscet walked up towards the statue and kneeled before it, bowing down to it and quietly saying their prayers before bowing to the statue once more to finish. The koi boy always went up and prayed with his mother, he never went up to the statue by himself.
xxxxxx Once everyone and everything was finished, Hana decided that she wanted to finally talk to the koi boy. It had been several years, but she thought that it was best that she was to know more about him. The girl quickly went over to clean up the trays before she rushed to catch up with both the koi boy and his mother. Luckily for her, the two would always be the last ones to leave the temple. Hana did her best to casually stroll up next to them and greeted the two. “Hello, my name’s Hana. I was wondering if it would be okay if I were to chat with your son?” she asked the mother. The boy and his mother looked at each other with a slight questioning look, but his mother had no problem with letting her son go to chat with Hana.



xxxxxx Hana has had her eyes on the koi viscet ever since his second visit and onward. She had lived and worked in the temple for as long as she could remember. The girl would recognize every visitor that came through as there were not many viscets that really knew or cared about the temple; so, one could imagine the surprise that Hana had felt when there was someone that she had never seen before enter the temple. It was strange to her. The boy was always accompanied by his mother, and no one else. There was something about them that Hana couldn’t quite get a grip on.
xxxxxx The girl had always wanted to talk to both the koi boy and his mother in order to know them more. She just never had the chance, or took it. Hana unfortunately is too busy tending to many of the visitors that would arrive for the day and cleaning up afterwards. Sometimes she would have to work different shifts and duties within the temple. If she was completely free, Hana would have her chance to talk to the koi boy, but she was only free on the days that the boy and his mother weren’t available. Although, there were a handful of times where she could’ve easily went up to them, but then again, anxiety struck Hana and she was too hesitant to come up to them, missing her opportunity.
xxxxxx Once she had noticed that the two had stopped visiting the temple so often, Hana had silently regretted all of her actions in which she had missed out on meeting the two strange viscets. Regret that she was too anxious, too hesitant, too slow, and the fact that she never got to understand what it was about the koi boy and his mother that were strange to her. Hana eventually shrugged off the negative thoughts after she had realized that she needed to focus on the temple once more. Many months had passed, that is until she caught sight of those bright colors once again. Hiding behind a pillar and taking a peek to see if it was truly them, she would then whisper to herself with her eyes solely on a specific viscet, “The Koi Boy.”
xxxxxx Both Hana and the koi boy made their way to a secluded area, not too far from his mother. Hana slightly stumbled around with her words, too nervous to think of a proper introduction. She realized that she may have been taking too long and finally forced herself to say, “May I ask, what is your name?” The boy answered rather quietly, “Hanako Koi.”

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Credits
Story is written by me, TenguInari.
First art piece is made by user, Yugi.
Second art piece is made by user, ratatouille.
The viscets Hanako and Ochiba are owned by user, Yugi.