[invincible llama]

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[SilverSamurai]

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please do not bump this. It has only been ten days. I can assure you that I have not forgotten about this.
I have had 3 exams the past week, and have been busy working on my psych seminar that is in a few weeks.
This will be judged when I have enough free time to sit down and judge it fairly and properly.

[invincible llama]

@silver

sorry- didnt mean to rush you

[grifforik]

@silver

sorry- didnt mean to rush you

Please do not post. Bumping is unnecessary. It will be judged soon.

Do not post until Silver has declared the winner. You may post congratulatory posts after that. Thank you.

(Please also do not post to apologize.)

[SilverSamurai]

I'm so sorry about how long this is taking to judge. I have been really busy with college and personal issues I've been struggling to get through recently, but I have been slowly going through the forms when I can. As I usually do with big competitions, I will be giving feedback to each eligible (and completed) forms, so bear with me for a bit longer. The winner should be up within the next day or two, if not by the end of the week for sure. Thank you all for your patience

[SilverSamurai]

As promised and per usual, I am giving feedback for the completed forms;
The criteria and base for entering is as follows and stated since the first post:

✦ 1 art piece required

- Can be done by you or someone else. Has to have some effort put into it, no sketches, exc.
- Can be an animation, no comic for the first part.

✦ 1000 word minimum (total)

- Everything, including personality, tidbits, story, exc.
- Unlimited writing, but 1000 is a minimum combined total

✦ Must have a back story

- Can write a story about, present though art or a comic, or even an animated video, exc.
- Can be a small history tidbit section
- Quality over quantity!

cyberdragon725 - Right from the start, your form shows a clear direction and a very in-depth character. But wow, I'm really taken aback from the sheer amount of story and character in your form. The world you created was amazing, and though some parts were a bit confusing to pick up on, you had an overall a really solid character and development! I was hooked all throughout the story, and I really want to know what happens next.

NurseGlowButt - you have a very neat concept! though some parts feel incomplete or a bit random at times. I could tell you had big plans for him, but I wish you had gotten more into your form!

Ravenshadow17 - while you technically met the requirements, your form has a lot of missing spots (from the red text) and the art you provided has nothing to do with the character, and it was a random picture found on the internet not relating to anything. For this reason, your form will not be counted. if you're going to use an image from google or deviantart, make sure you have specific permission from the artist, otherwise it could be considered art theft.

EverdaleDreamers - your form is very pretty! it drew me in, everything is nicely spaced and flows in a nice way. Though in your story, you left the (master/owner) parentheses rather than editing it for an actual name/character. But I really liked the concept and story you came up with, I don't think I've ever seen a character quite like it before and was a nice surprise.

~Neon_and_Lylia~ - your form had really cute art! Though I feel like you developed Latte more than you did Kyanite through your story. Also, if you're going to use an image from google or deviantart, make sure you have specific permission from the artist, otherwise it could be considered art theft. Also some part of your form seemed rushed or random, and I wish you had gone more in-depth with his character.

.kaede - your form looks great, though there is an odd break of text in the middle and towards the end. Also, I almost missed most of your form because you nearly hid it in the corner. That being said, I got a really strong influence of YOI from the story? making a character based off of another is OK, but it makes it significantly less original, perhaps add your own twist or make the reference vague enough to not be obviously recognized? very good writing though.

~Teya~ - Glacia sounds like a fun lil viscet. I loved the concept you had, it was very unique and really held a certain air over the form as a whole. What a cute story, I wish it was longer and more in depth with your original idea!

WolfwithWings38 - I can see that you added images to the form, but the images did not show up and must have been removed or invalid (I tried both my laptops, safari, firefox and chrome browsers, and even mobile), so I can not judge your form

Oh wow, everyone had much creative ideas! All were so unique and had their own character and excitement to it. However, one character particularly stuck to me with a story and concept that just blew me away.
However, I would like to give an HM to NurseGlowButt, EverdaleDreamers and ~Teya~, these can be exchanged in the stub shop located on the main viscet page.





With all that being said, I'd love to announce the winner at last;;
Congrats to Cyberdragon725!!!

Your story was really thought out and well written, and all the art pieces were fitting and were smart visual aids to the story. I hope you continue it, I would love to read more of his character and see him around!




It was a fun contest guys, thank you to those who entered! Thank you again for your patience u.u
Good luck in future competitions as well! Remember, if you have nothing nice to say, don't say anything at all!

[Vixen Luo]

Super huge congratulations!!!! ;u; omg I'm so happy for you dude! I know you'll take wonderful care of this kid! <3
Congratulations to the winners of the HMs, as well~!

[✦ nemuri]

Aaa, huge congrats to cyberdragon!! Your form was really amazing <3

Congrats to NurseGlowButt, EverdaleDreamers and ~Teya~ as well for those HMs <3

@cyber, you can keep any of the art in my form if you wish to do so uwu

[Yugi]

Ahhhh ;u;)/ Congratulations, Cyberdragon! I'm super excited to see what you have in store for Kamali in the future, my dude <3

Congratulations to NurseGlowButt, EverdaleDreamers and ~Teya~ for receiving honorable mentions for their forms as well!

[~Phantom]

HUGE Congrartz Cyber!! *Was always rooting for you and super stoked you got your lil one* And congratz to the hm winners too, I saw a bit of awesome art and writing ^_^