by Flitter » Sun May 06, 2012 4:15 am
Ivara wrote:Urk. So sorry about that Silverlilly, and April is right, your form is beautiful. I really love how he uses his pouch so much, usually you don't see the pouch mentioned in JBD forms. I agree with Simba on his first, second, and fifth dislike~
EDIT: Hey, April, I was looking over your form and noticed that you've got his markings wrong in your newest piece of art. The making with the orange and green square thing... I don't really know what to call it, is on his back, not on his chest, just a headsup~
Yeah..I know...there was just nothing to do with the center of his body, and you couldn't see his back. Plus...it's ridiculous, fat, chibi art. Essentially a blob. I didn't both to even try too much for accuracy--I bet the facial features are wrong too.

Thanks for the comment though, it's so nice of you to actually go through and look at everyone's work.

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by Ivara » Sun May 06, 2012 4:27 am
^^' Yeah, the facial features are too, but since it's chibi art, it's fine~ I go though and look at the forms everyday to see what's changed and what's new, it lets me help you guys with improving your forms or giving you suggestions if I know what's already there and how your form is going ;3
EDIT: Gah, just noticed this, I really should have noticed earlier. Oceanblast, please star out cuss words if your going to use them, but I'd prefer it if you didn't use them at all.
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by OceanBlast » Sun May 06, 2012 7:04 am
Ivara wrote:
EDIT: Gah, just noticed this, I really should have noticed earlier. Oceanblast, please star out cuss words if your going to use them, but I'd prefer it if you didn't use them at all.
What words do you mean?
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by HierophantReversed » Sun May 06, 2012 12:54 pm
Name: Mango Tango
Preferences:
Bubble Tea: He loves it! It makes him think of his mom and pop. It makes him happy whenever he drinks it, especially when he's upset.
Tangy: Mango loves his pet goat, Tangy. He met her when he was walking down the road. But I'll get to that story in a bit.
Foam: Anything he makes has to do with foam. Foam statues, foamy baths, foamy soap, etc.
Yellow: He loves the color as much as foam. It seems like a unique color, a bit lighter than the others.
Mari: Mari is a tiger cub. His relation to Mango will be explained in the story.
Negativities:
Strawberry Milk: He hates it. It tastes disgusting to him and get flecks of....STUFF on his tongue.
Teachers: Teachers remind Mango of parents, but unlike bubble tea, he just gets sad and makes foamy yellow soap.
GUM: He absolutely HATES gum. It's sticky and he has weak jaws, so he can't open his mouth very much when he chews it.
Peanut Butter: The same problem with gum, but easier because he can swallow it.
Brown Rice: IT. IS. DISGUSTING.I personally don't like it, but he hates it, okay?
Story:
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by Flitter » Tue May 08, 2012 11:28 am
Tweaked a few minor details on my form...added to the 'Why I Want This JBD' section and took out some unnecessary exclamation points. Added to the personality too--I think the whole form is a bit cleaner now.

I'm working on one more ultimate piece of art, hope I can finish in time!
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by Stripey » Tue May 08, 2012 11:33 am
I dont mean to spam, but think of this as a friendly bump ^^
Amazingly wonderful April Showers wrote: Stripey, your form is amazing
Apriiiiiiiillll thank you so much! It means so much to me! I just love Dewey so much and have deffinately worked hard XD Your's is amazing toooo!! <3 I love the haiku's..SO creative!!! (I cant write poetry unless it's about cats XD)
Anyway, thank you again!! It means so much!!
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by Ivara » Tue May 08, 2012 11:36 am
You be making me feel like a hypocrite OceanBlast Bl The one word you have italicized, like this
Sorry for the really bad way of explaining, but it's a kid friendly site, even though it's not too bad of a word.
I hope you can too, you have three days April, three days! I don't know how I'm going to chose a winner, everyone is making such amazing forms!
Thanks for the bump Stripey~ Your forms are both absolutely amazing, could you two make it any harder for me to be able to pick a winner in three days? <3 I really appreciate how hard you guys are working to get this little guy~
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by OceanBlast » Tue May 08, 2012 7:20 pm
Ivara wrote:You be making me feel like a hypocrite OceanBlast Bl The one word you have italicized, like this
Sorry for the really bad way of explaining, but it's a kid friendly site, even though it's not too bad of a word.
I hope you can too, you have three days April, three days! I don't know how I'm going to chose a winner, everyone is making such amazing forms!
Thanks for the bump Stripey~ Your forms are both absolutely amazing, could you two make it any harder for me to be able to pick a winner in three days? <3 I really appreciate how hard you guys are working to get this little guy~
Sorry about that, I'm just a bit dumb ^^
It's been removed
Edit: Oh darnit, I had added some extra information to my form but I forgot that I wasn't logged on and I lost it all! D:
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