[Ivara]

Anything I should do?

A more definite personality and maybe give a whole section as to why she hates caterpillars so much, yet doesn't mind spiders. Mostly the personality though, going with the theme you have now I'd most likely title it something like, "What would you describe your personality as?" Or something close to that, but its entirely up to you. I know you have a basic explanation as to why she hates caterpillars so much in your story, but I would love to hear more about that. Sorry if my replies are a little late today guys, working on a JBD form right now.

[flyteck]

No problem, I was drawing anyways c: Good luck with your JBD!

[flyteck]

Form has been tweaked c:

[Wlyrout]

Yay, my introductory is okay! I will go and fix that mistake you found. You are right, it does sound much better that way. *noms caterpillar*

Now I have done my little interview, as you kind of suggested earlier on. Good suggestion, I wasn't sure how to tie in her personality. O.o <-- Why that smiley!? It makes no sense here! Curse you, you twisted brain of mine!

You know when a form comes so naturally when you really want something? I thought I was going to be in so much trouble form-wise, but now everything's just pouring out of my mind. In the past two days I've been having this awesome creative streak, and I'm going to use it while it lasts! (AKA: I'm off to finish my form.)

[Ivara]

I think I must have caught your wave of creativity, I'm breezing though my JBD form. *Steals and eats caterpillar* Amazing job, really want to see what story your going to get out of Flour.

Like the tweaks you made to your form Flyteck, thanks for the explanation of the caterpillars and spiders.

[Ivara]

Just a heads up people! Two days until judging day!

[Wlyrout]

Done now, and I'm pretty happy with my form. The story is a bit blah, but if I win her I'll edit it a lot.

Good luck, everyone!

[Ivara]

It's absolutely amazing, I'm glad to have inspired you with my attempt to make Sofethol my own. The story is fine, and I don't really know much about New York either (except not to stay in bad hotels because you get covered in bed bug bites, I was red for weeks and no one else in my family got bit either), but it sounds perfect for the city.

[Ivara]

Judging day is upon us! You have approximately half an hour to do any last minute stuff, then I'll start judging, which hopefully shouldn't take more than maybe twenty minutes. In case you want to time it down to the last minute, this will end 6:30 Pacific Standard Time. If you think you'll need an extension, shoot me a PM with your reasons why and I'll consider extending the contest, but for no longer than an hour past 6:30, meaning that then judging will start at 7:30.

[the timey thing]

What is the eye color? -can't figure it out and feels rushed- O_ O