by MotherMother » Mon Dec 31, 2018 11:02 pm
The winner of this kal is fishi. ! I really enjoyed the story, especially about Peach and their very interesting relationship. I also really liked the creative tail idea!
I’d like to give HMs to the following people (in no particular order):
SilhouetteStation - you really captured an amazing atmosphere and it was a joy to read your story. I think you’re a strong writer and I’m glad I got to read your work
tweek tweak - a very creative idea and I adored the journal entries and how they progressed, and how Oddy learned more and more about the mysterious world
jurassic, - your story was intriguing and I liked the way your poem tied into it
f1owercrown - I really loved the stories and how the young kals compared to when they are grown up. I also really like your style of writing and it was a joy to read it
doge fruit - the dissociative identity disorder was really interesting to see through Lark’s eyes, and it was interesting to see which personalities appeared and how often
Stephaaa - your story was captivating and I especially loved the line “Very few pass by with almost blank faces. I hope I don't look the same.” I also think you expressed emotion really well
Thanks a ton guys, I feel so lucky to have enjoyed everyone’s creativity <3