Re: DAM: Palomino Extended Blanket

Postby Wolf's Spirit » Thu Oct 18, 2012 4:31 am

Owner: Wolf's Spirit
Horse Name: Honeydrop after a horse she reminds me of from my stable :D
Height: 14.2hh
Gender: Mare
Rarity: Uncommon
Poem: Wip~
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Re: DAM: Palomino Extended Blanket

Postby ArrowΩCountry » Thu Oct 18, 2012 4:57 am

Owner: 12CountryGirl13
Horse Name: Amarillo
Height: 14.2hh
Gender: Mare
Rarity: Uncommon
Poem:
Golden speck,
Out in the sand,
Where've you come from,
Some far off land?

Your looks,
Your grace,
The likes only found in books,
Seem out of place.

Gentle eyes,
Mane of silk,
You tell me lies,
But I still bask in your light.


A little short, but I think these 3 verses really portray how I feel about this mare. She is stunning and innocent looking, but her looks may hide a darker side.
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Re: DAM: Palomino Extended Blanket

Postby Doodle Buddy » Thu Oct 18, 2012 5:28 am

Owner: Doodle Buddy
Horse Name: Morning Glory
Height: 14.2hh
Gender: Female
Rarity: Uncommon
Poem:
Alone again,
here I stand.
Trapped in this sea of sand,
the light is gone,
dark took its place.
I long to the touch,
of your gentle embrace.

I keep on wandering,
searching for my soul.
It left my body so long ago.
I cry every night,
surrounded by black.
Praying that one day,
you may just come back.
But for now I'll just wander in search of the sun.
I know you'll be waiting, I know you hun.
If you ever get lonely,
or if I cross your mind.
Just call out my name,
and everything will be fine.

Alone again,
here I stand.
Trapped in this sea of sand,
the light is gone,
dark took its place.
I long to the touch,
of your gentle embrace
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Re: DAM: Palomino Extended Blanket

Postby MazBourne » Thu Oct 18, 2012 5:30 am

I'm seriously debating on applying for this one.. Just to have some light in my dark XD
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Re: DAM: Palomino Extended Blanket

Postby wind song » Thu Oct 18, 2012 6:00 am

She is incredible Ally </3
She seems so 'sacred' - like no one can have her.

Owner:
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Horse Name:
Eidolon
Meaning 'an unsubstantial image; apparition; phantom'
She's like a ghost to me, her beauty somehow untouchable and deceiving.

Height:
14.2hh

Gender:
Mare

Rarity:
Uncommon

Poem:

Dark heart, she sold her soul
To those who dare invite her there,
Canter - until you're close,
Give her a single sun set stare.

She'll let you in so easily,
Convince your heart - it beats for her,
She'll warm you up, so soothingly,
Until it breaks, she'll trot and turn.

Turn away and face the sun,
You'll live for her and breathe to see,
Her happiness - her dull eyes full,
Of smiles she fakes so she can feel.

Don't get too close, no one could guess
Her heart's the blackest shade of black.
Cause when she's done, she'll leave a mess
And let you cope with what you had.

She's just a ghost - try to escape,
Her cruel fake love is not for you.
Don't interpose, don't try to change -
The selfishness she tries to fool.

Oh bright heart, she gave her soul,
To those who look from far away,
Just stay there - don't get so close,
And try to hide that sun set stare.

Dont fall in love with this shadow,
Cause just like ash - she will collapse.


Edit: I changed the name, it was hard, but I find this one fitting too </3
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Re: DAM: Palomino Extended Blanket

Postby august rush » Thu Oct 18, 2012 6:20 am

Owner: αυgυsτ гυsн
Horse Name: Kréma
Height: 14.2hh
Gender: Mare
Rarity: Uncommon
Poem:
    Catching stars in your eyes
    with the flutter of your lashes
    like the steady beat of a butterfly's wings
    Shine your golden light
    across a darkened sky
    shower your love like
    a blanket of snow
    sweet as sugar
    gentle as a feather
    As sure as the lightning
    that strikes the stark black
    your golden beauty
    matches no other

I fail at poems c':
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Re: DAM: Palomino Extended Blanket

Postby Bast-et » Thu Oct 18, 2012 6:55 am

@Wind Song- there is already a DAM named Umbra. I'm not sure if that matters, but I figured you would want to know.
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Re: DAM: Palomino Extended Blanket

Postby wind song » Thu Oct 18, 2012 7:18 am

Awww D:
Hope it's okay, I can't imagine her as anything else.
But if it's not allowed I guess I'll try my best :'3
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Re: DAM: Palomino Extended Blanket

Postby ~punkstache » Thu Oct 18, 2012 7:52 am

I just have a couple of questions ^^

Is there a set end date/cut off for us to edit our forms?
&& does the length of the poem matter?

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Re: DAM: Palomino Extended Blanket

Postby typewriter; » Thu Oct 18, 2012 8:20 am

Owner: ~*Hedwig*~
Horse Name: Honeysuckle (Honey) for short
Height: 14.2hh
Gender: Female
Rarity: Uncommon
Poem:

I gallop through the desert
Sand flying beneath my feet
Few have ever seen me
And my beauty, none can compete

I watch through the silver pools
At fish swimming below
And look at my reflection
While the sun behind me glows

I am a blessing
For I bring rain,
Most say I am perfect
But I am not vain

I blend right in
To the light colored ground
One minute I am there
Next, I am gone without a sound

I gallop through all time and space
Trough seasons each and all
Through the summer and the spring
The winter and the fall

Time does not concern me
I live until the end
But it can be a lonely life,
One without a friend

That was, until I met you
Your smile, oh so kind
You loved me and loved me
And now lonely is off my mind

Let me take you, oh young one
Take you upon my back so strong
Show you all the sights of the desert
Not a step will I take wrong

For you are my only
The one I love so dear,
Even the other Equids
Do not hold a spot here

Here in my heart,
Few other hold a spot so deep
Please stay there forever
And your love may I please keep
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