[shishou]

Not, gonna enter, knowing im terrible with stories ;O; this bab reminds me of one of the sonic characters XD

[Dragonets-of-destiny]

Holy Smokes! This is like my dream babe right here! Oml I'm going so in depth in this one, hopefully I can finally get one Viscet under my belt, but this guy, he should count for like five!

Username:
Dragonets-of-destiny
Why I want this Viscet:
When I first saw him my jaw dropped. I thought that he was a customer made for a second, but then I saw the little UFT and I ran around the house screaming. When I was finally done I clicked on him and instantly fell in love with this guy. I knew his story, where he came from, and his name just from looking at him. This Viscet is really special and whoever wins please take care of this little one.
Name:
Lune Sombre, or Sombre for short. It's french for Dark Moon.
Gender:
Male
Personality:
In the story your about to read Sombre is many things. In the story he is a bit moody, but more or less nice all the same. He is curious and loves to explore, but he also has his serious side. Sombre is found mostly sitting up somewhere high watching the moon and this is his sensitive side. But if you had to give him just a few words for his personality it would be, bold, brave, protective, smart and a little sensitive. There!
Story/art: (I'm sad cause I can't art ;-;)
A cold winter's breeze blew through Twilight's fur.She sniffed the air hesitantly and placed her paws near the edge of the den. It seemed abandoned, deserted and the faint smell of mother's milk filled the air. It was around midnight and the moon was blood red in the hunger moon cycles. Twilight shivered and carefully walked inside the den. No signs of life showed and Twilight grew more relaxed. It was hard surviving during the hunger moons, but this den would help, at least with the cold factor. She sighed and sat down at the heart of the den, wrapping her tail around herself. Her ears flicked back at the sound of movement. A low growl escaped her throat and she whipped around to see nothing but a lump of fur on the ground. She wondered how she hadn't noticed when she came in. She carefully walked over to it and sniffed it. But suddenly the lump of fur started moving. Twilight jumped back, startled. The creature turned to her and gave out a soft bark, that sounded like a pup. Confused at what it was Twilight studied it carefully. It had a fox-like tail, such as her, and fox-like ears, but it had a mane running down it's back. But what caught Twilight's eyes was the creatures deep red eyes. How memorizing they were. The creature barked again and suddenly stood up, wobbly at first, but then steadied itself. Twilight backed up in fear and suprise.
"No, don't come closer." Twilight yipped at it. The creature made a sound that sounded a lot like giggling. Twilight flicked her ears back in dismay.
"What are you laughing at? Hmm pipsqueak?" Twilight questioned it with a bit of sass. This just lead to the creature erupting into more giggles and laughter. Twilight snorted and turned her back on it and began walking towards the exit when the creature stopped laughing. Then Twilight heard a different noise. Crying. Twilight turned her head to see the creature crying with pleading eyes. 'Please, don't leave me' the eyes seemed to say.
"No, oh no. I'm not fit to be a mother, much less a caretaker. I can barley take care of myself." Twilight tried to explain to it. But it was no use the creature kept crying and sat down. Twilight akwardly stood there before moving closer to comfort it. The creature stopped crying and looked up at Twilight. His big red eyes stole her heart.
"Your eyes are like the blood moon. I'll call you Lune Sombre. It means Dark Moon." Twilight said to the little creature. The creature nodded and seemed to agree with this. Twilight had never been happier in her life.

Four Years Later...

Sombre bonded down the field hill on his paws and gave a howl of excitement. After him there where three red blurs chasing after him.
"You can't get me Twig!" Sombre called behind his sholder. One of the red blurs gave a huff of disagreement and sped up. Sombre gave a cry of joy and dug his paws into the ground to come to a swirling halt. The three fox pups were not expecting this and smashed into the bigger male. The four pups where a jumble of limbs and fluff and laughter.
"I almost caught you Sombre!" The smallest one, Lilly, said. Sombre rolled his eyes and sneezed.
"Yeah right Lilly, I was like 1 billion times faster than you." Sombre said. The male, Twig, smiled and looked at the second pup, Ruby. Ruby was still laughing from the tumble and finally stopped to catch her breath.
"Oh Sombre that was fun, what is that game called again?" Ruby asked through breaths. Sombre gave a laugh and nudged her.
"It'd called the rabbit and the foxes. I invented it myself." Sombre said proudly. He got out of the mess and saw his second birth mother on the hill. Twig gave a small grunt of saddness.
"Aww it's time to go eat..." Twig said with disappointment laced in his voice. Sombre felt a little sad as well. They had only played like... 26 rounds, and that wasn't nearly enough. Ruby got up and gave a yawn. Lilly smiled at Twig and brushed his side.
"We can play it all day tomorrow Twig, don't worry. Sombre isn't going anywhere any time soon, so we can play it forever!" Lilly said. But Lilly was wrong, because something had been watching them, something big, and it was staring right at Sombre. Twig, Ruby and Lilly ran up to Twilight and Sombre started walking towards them. He smiled and was about to run when he heard his second mother's scream. Sombre barley had tI'm to turn his head when a jet black 'thing' grabbed him. He screamed in fear as the 'thing' bolted away from his mother into the forest.
"Mom! Wait, please help!" Sombre cried out. The 'thing' put a furry paw over his muzzle and Sombre tried to bite it. The last thing Sombre saw of his second mother was her bright orange fur zooming down the hill. But Sombre knew her fox legs couldn't carry her as fast as this 'thing' was going.

***

Finally after what seemed like forever the 'thing' set Sombre down. Sombre whirled around and snarled at it.
"Listen here you forest goop! I don't know who you are or why you took me, but your taking me back to my mother right now!" Sombre growled at it. He looked up to find shocking red eyes like his. What's more was the creature looked a lot like him to. The 'thing' laughed at him.
"Woah calm down there squirt. I'm bringing you home. The only forest goop her was that thieving little fox." The 'thing' said wrinkling his nose in disgust. Sombre leaped at it angrily, but it easily pushed Sombre's head into the dirt. Sombre wriggled to the front and kicked the 'thing' in the stomach. It fell over in suprise.
"How dare you call my second mother a theif! Who do you think you are!" Sombre yelled at it. The 'thing' stood up and held up its hands.
"Woah there squirt! Do you even remember me? I'm you father." The 'thing' said. Sombre gasped. So that's why he looked so familiar. Sombre backed up with sudden shock. He didn't know if he wanted to beat him up or hug him. He curled his tail around himself fumming. Sombre's father scratched the back of his neck a smiled sheepishly.
"Yeah, I didn't want you to find out this way, but what was I supposed to do?" Sombre's father said. Sombre turned his head and glared at him. Why hadn't his father tried to get him sooner? Why hadn't he shown himself. Sombre snorted in anger and flicked his ears back.
"Twilight said I was abandoned. That nobody was there when she found me. If that's true than why did you leave me. I don't even know who you are, what you do, even your name is a mystery." Sombre said sadly. He remembered when he was cold and alone. Then Twilight had shown up. His father pulled him out of his thoughts.
"The name is Jamba. Pronounced *Jam*ba* and I'm a fruit gather for our tribe." Jamba told his son. Sombre flinched when Jamba said 'our' tribe. He flicked his tail back and forth angirly.
"That still doesn't explain why you left me!" Sombre growled angirly. His father took a step back, clearly hurt.
"Son I never wanted to leave you... it was just... complicated." Jamba tried to explain. But Sombre just got up and kicked a pinecone. Jamba looked around in worry.
"How about I take you to the tribe, I can show you to your mother, she'd be happy to meet you." Jamba tried to comfort him. Sombre stared at his father. My mother? Sombre thought. He would meet his real mother. Sombre thought for a second, and then remembered Twilight. Sombre crushed the pinecone he had been kicking beneath his foot. He gave a snarl.
"Is that the same mother who abandoned me? The same one that left me in the cold den alone to...to... to die!" Sombre flushed angirly. Jamba stepped back and nervously twitched his ear. He looked down at Sombre and sighed.
"Listen squirt, you don't have a choice, your coming with me to the tribe, I'm not letting that thieving fox snag you away again." Jamba said with a certain bitterness. Sombre suddenly didn't like this guy. If he was his father or not, Jamba was not very nice. Sombre stamped his foot.
"I'm not going with you, not now, not ever. I swear if you ever try to hurt my mother, your a dead Jamba!" Sombre threatened and without any thought Sombre turned and bolted back the way they had come. Sombre wasn't suprised when he didn't hear anything behind him.
"That's what I thought, Jamba left me a second time, what a good parent." Sombre said sarcastically. But Sombre did feel a little pity full for Jamba, he was his father after all. But he's not a good one, Sombre thought to himself.

***

Finally Sombre found his way back to Twilight and the tree pups. It was around midnight and he gave a yawn. He was suprised to enter the den to see Twilight wide awake. When her eyes met his she lighted up and jumped excitedly rushing towards him. Sombre opened his arms and Twilight fell into his hug.
"Sombre I'm so sorry, I searched and searched but I didn't know where you were, did they hurt you? If they did I swear I'll.." Twilight wasn't able to finnish when Sombre laughed.
"No they didn't hurt me mom. But I can't stay here... I have to find my own family, I don't want to leave you, but after today I don't want to put you on the line." Sombre said. Twilight tilted her head confused. So Sombre went on explaining what had happened and how he met his father. Twilight understood in the end and hugged Sombre tight.
"Ok if you must leave I understand, but please visit from time to time." Twilight said in a quiet sob. Sombre let his tail droop and held Twilight close.
"Don't worry mom I will." Sombre said. Sombre left as soon as they were done hugging. He didn't want the pups see him leave. So he setter off for a new life and a new story.

3 years later...

A large male fox bonded through the snowy tundra. Following him were two female foxes. The male fox stopped and sniffed the air.
"Lilly, Ruby do you smell that?" The male fox asked. The smallest, Lilly sniffed the air.
"It smells familar Twig." Lilly stated. Ruby sniffed the air and shrugged.
"Whatever let's move on, the rabbits aren't going to get eaten themselves." Ruby said and raced off. Lilly hesitantly followed. But Twig stayed for a little while longer.
"Foxes and rabbits? That sounds real familiar." Twig whispered before following the sisters. After he left a black figure slid down a icy tree. He was black with grey patterns and vivid red eyes. He sighed and sniffed the ground.
"Yes Twig, it is oddly familar isn't it?" Sombre said to himself.

The End!

[*Shiveren*]

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[Ather]

Username;; Ather
Name;; Astro
Gender;; Male
Story/s;; wip ;w;
Likes;; Sparring, throwing knives, fall colors, playing card games with his friends. Dislikes;; Easily won fights, the sun, cowards, morons.

[elliott.]

Username;; Addie (Addison)

Name;; Sorren

Gender;; Female

Story/s;;
The air was crisp as young Sorren traveled through the snowy pine forest. Sorren hummed as she looked for any type of food source. Seeing a bush with red dots on them, a yip of glee escaped her lips. She raced over and started to pick the berries, putting them in a large beech leaf and wrapping them up. Now, a little backstory on young Sorren. She had been abandoned at a birth by her family and was raised by a Viscet until a few days ago, where she was left yet again. But Sorren, being her happy self, never backed down and kept being happy and living her cheery life. Anyways, back to the story at hand. Carrying back the juicy berries, Sorren looked around as a louf squeal pierced the air, followed by a few whimpers. "Hello? Who's out there?" Her soft, soothing voice called out. The squeal came again and Sorren followed it, coming across a squrriel. His front paw was stuck in a trap that was laid into a tree. A burst of anger flared inside the Viscet. Who would do such a thing! Climbing the tree with ease, she reached into the hole and pried open the trap. The squrriel yelped, moving his swollen hand. "Here, hop on." She soothed, leaning down. The squrriel pondered for a moment, before leaping on Sorren's back. Sorren carried it to her small den.

A few years later.
A now-slighty more mature Sorren was standing in a meadow, the hot summer air hitting her back. A hum of delight escaped. "Doesn't the sun feel great, Berry?" She asked her squrriel, who just chattered and scrambled up a tree, causing Sorren to frown. "Rude. I took care of you, you know." The squrriel three an acorn at her, causing Sorren to move and gasp, "Berry!" The squrriel just scrambled higher into the large tree. Sorren glanced around. Man, she loved her life.

Minimum words for form;; 1,000, does not include art or name, gender, exc.
(WIP)

[canis-corax]

Teensy little reserve...

[SilverSamurai]

3 day warning

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Good luck everyone!

[kamelgirl]

Ahh good luck guys~ //extremely nervous because lots of really good forms//

[augestines]

ahh good luck everyone :3



dream bab ;u; *drools over it*