Re: Stars #629

Postby saphiraae » Mon Mar 01, 2021 1:35 pm

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Cat Name: Sunfade
Gender: Demiboy; He/They
Rank: Warrior
Clan: Keepers of the Pond
Age: 22 Moons

Prompt:
Half of night, half of day
No one else sees it this way
That's just fine- this vision mine
Is just StarClan's design
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Re: Stars #629

Postby nio » Mon Mar 01, 2021 2:16 pm

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Cat Name: Adderthorn
Gender: tom
Rank: sharpclaw
Clan: bayclan
Age: 32 moons
Prompt:
through one eye i cannot see
but a disadvantage it is not to me
i can hunt and fight
in day or night
my ears are enough
i'm just as tough

i was born this way
next to the bay
my mother was kind
though i was half-blind
she said to me
"you'll be great, i guarantee"

and right she was
i say, because
nothing stops me
i can still climb a tree
i can fight like no other
just like my mother

she would be proud
up there in the clouds
she looks down on me
as i wander free
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β™” ── falling stars))

Postby faelyn » Thu Mar 04, 2021 12:40 pm

username: faelyn
cat name: eirlys
gender: female
rank: the oracle
clan: the shore of dreams
age: twenty five moons
prompt: ------>>>>>
i’ve watched
the sun rise
and the moon fall.
a gentle heartbeat
over and over again

i’ve seen
millions of stars
thousands of constellations
colliding together
into a beautiful art piece
in the dead of night

ever since
that little gemstone
was stolen from me

reality had become an atom bomb
waiting to react
a sandcastle glistening
on golden shores
shores far too close
to roaring seas

an eye for a jewel
a price i would never forget
love at first sight traded..
for a jewel
to rest on my heart

now,
the stars are lower in the skies
the sun faint with shadows
my entire existence..
a blur
a spinning tornado
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Re: Stars #629

Postby I Like Bees » Wed Mar 17, 2021 4:27 pm

allynabean wrote:
new clan, new home, new life
there's so many new things to find
new name, new role, new world
i'm no longer so trapped and confined

new words, new rules, new code
so much to learn before nightfall
new nest, new food, new cold
sometimes i regret leaving at all

same eye, same face, same fur
not everything seems to have changed
same sun, same moon, same stars
not everything has been rearranged

new clan, new home, new life
im thinking maybe i was wrong
new friends, new kin, new love
i think this might be where i belong


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Cat Name: foxwink
Gender: male, he/him
Rank: guardian
Clan: moonclan
Age: 19 moons

Congrats! I loved the story your poem told, and how you used repetition but still kept everything sounding new!

I'd also like to award a RU to tula! !
I loved the rhythm and mysterious tone of your poem!

I'll also be awarding HMs to Mythz and faelyn !
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Re: Stars #629

Postby allynabean » Thu Mar 18, 2021 12:39 am

    ahhHH thank you so much!!! im so excited for this boy :0!!

    congrats to tula and the HM's!!! everybody's poems were so fun to readdd
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Postby faelyn » Thu Mar 18, 2021 10:58 am

ooohh,, congrats ally! your poem was beautiful, i loved it so much! ,<3 congrats to mythz and tula as well!
,,, aww.. thank you, bees, for the hm!
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