[universal song]

Username||
Name||
Gender||
Personality|| [x150 max]
Prompt|| [prompt I or prompt II; x500 max OR x1]
Extras|| [optional, x2 allowed; x350 or x1 each]

res, I may have try to do this

[⸙❜◌┊Ren]

Res with wanting a family for Christmas

[Peyto1217]

Username|| Peyto1217
Name|| Xilo
Gender|| male
Personality|| [x150 max]
Prompt|| [prompt I or prompt II; x500 max OR x1]
Extras|| [optional, x2 allowed; x350 or x1 each]


Big wip!

[Cutieduckpie]

ChristmasTroll

Username|| CutieduckpieXXXXName|| Henri XXXXGender|| Male



Personality

Henri is nicknamed Greenu Ballu by his close friends, however there were a time he was also called bramble bush kid by malicious viscets when he was younger.
But times change and now he's confident ! All talk but also all act ! You can't mock him about that hehe.
A lot of viscets can agree on one point : He's curious as well as full of energy. It's a real sunshine to his pack.
He's concious about his size but it doesn't prevent him from being ambitious ! He doesn't let the other belittle his dreams nor does he gives up easily !
I said he was a talkative one, but let me add that he's also an expert at being sarastic -due to his honour in fact-. At least you'll always laugh when he's around ! Although he's kind and caring ... in his own way.

(148/150)

Prompt II

Trudging through the dense and humid forest, Henri sighs, his hooves leaving impressions on the squishy forest floor. Although he is supposed to be in a grey area in terms of human protection, he doesn’t feel anxious or in danger as he places his rump down with a thud.
Swiveling his oversized ears around, his eyes narrow at the tiny leathery thing darting over his hoof. Leaning his down to inspect the tiny creature, he huffs. “I thought the only inhabitants of the North Pole were supposed to be reindeer? You are not a reindeer, are you?” He’d heard they were large and had antlers, but perhaps this was a bald baby?
In response the tiny being sticks out its tongue to lick it's slanted eyeball.
“How gross,” he murmurs, using his other hoof to scoot the tiny eye licking creature from his body. Bringing the tip of his feathered tail around to wrap around his feet, he just sits for a moment to listen to the rather musical chattering of the North Pole’s many inhabitants. For a while he waits, wishing to be approached by the glorious creature he here for: the reindeer. Oh how he’d squeal with glee when he met one with all the freedom to feel it's luscious coat.
Clearing his throat, he ran his tongue over his pointed teeth before speaking. “Would any of you like to point me in the direction of Santa ? I wish to inquire about one of his reindeer,” he waits for a response but the chatter only intensifies once his voice I thrown into the mix. Birds of various size and color seemed to mock him with their incessant cawing. Perhaps they don’t know Santa or his reindeer? It dawns on him just then, a wave of sadness taking over his body. This cannot possibly be the North Pole! Wherever he is is so hot and humid the trees are raining all the time- he can’t remember when he saw the sky last. He must’ve taken a wrong turn at the Hawaiian Isles, drat! He knew it was impossible for the North Pole to be covered in trees, and to be so warm and full of animals. What was he thinking ?
With a defeated sigh, Henri lowers his large and green dappled body to the soft ground, his head resting on his hooves. Hope fills his belly and his heart as he prays the jolly old man will hear his plea: all he wants for Christmas is to meet a reindeer, to feel it's fur and compare hooves and tales- as well as tails.
“Please, oh please,” he pleads quietly. “Bring me a reindeer this year.” As if the red jacket wearing man heard his pleas, the birds stopped, a cold breeze blowing through his fur. A single snowflake drifted down from the sky, landing on his small wet nose before melting.
Next year, he’ll follow his instinct and continue North, instead of detouring in South America.

(497/500)

Extras

Henri always make people laugh with his crazy ideas to ressemble to a reindeer, so much that we lost track of count aha !
I remember, one whole week he was stuck with the idea of having antlers ! Unfortunatly the ones that we find in the forest -that fell off deers heads- were too large, too wide, or too long for him to carry -and believe me he tried many times but he couldn't help his head to fall backwards or forwards each time that the viscet helping him released his grip on the antlers-.
That was an hilarious scene to see !
He seemed disappointed so we decided to create him tiny antlers, that we fix on a sort of headband that he could wear. He suited him really well and brag about/with it all day.

(138/350)

Res : Art of him If I find anyone willing ;-; Same for relationship !

[grifforik]

Username|| Grifforik
Name|| Holly
Gender|| Female

Personality|| Holly is a quiet little viscet, she's sweet and kind and loving. She's always trying her best and working on things to give others, or following around the adults to talk to, mostly looking for attention. She's usually quiet happy and carefree when she plays with friends, but tends to quiet down or become rather wistful when she sees family's together. Holly can be cranky and crabby when upset, but her good nature and natural lack of guile, makes it hard for her to stay angry with anyone. Like most children, she's got a short attention span, and a huge imagination, and is quiet a bookworm.

Prompt||
Dear Santa,
This is Holly, I've been a very good girl this year, and I know I said I would stop asking but this year I know is the year that Christmas magic will happen and I'll finally be adopted! I love my friends here, and I adore the sweet ladies that take care of us, but all I want for Christmas is a family of my own. I want a mamma and papa and maybe a brother or sister that will play with me, and to cuddle with, and to open Christmas gifts with. I want to drink hot coco with them and play in the snow, maybe even get yelled at for doing something silly, or tossed on my bed when we're playing. They don't have to be fancy or rich, dear Santa, but I would like them to be nice, and close to each other. You see, I've never had a family and I don't remember who or where I was before I was here. The caretakers and other children are the only people I know, and I love them, I do! But, we all want the same thing, a family to call our own. The Ladies go home, not all of them stay, and even sometimes they bring family here to chat with or eat lunch with, and I see the love and the kind gestures and words between them. Mary has a husband and 4 kids, and sometimes when she talks to us about them before bed, we all picture ourselves as her children and how would it feel to not share a room with 20 other kids, or toys, or attention? I don't think Mary's kids know how good they have it, but that's ok, they seem nice like good girls and boys, and i'm sorry I'm not writing you to complain Santa! I promise! I only wanted to try and explain how I feel and why its important to me to find a family. I would even love to be part of your family if you can't find one around here? I would be a good elf I think, I'm little and I quick, I could probably help with all sorts of things and I know I can carry things. Maybe you and Mrs. Claws need someone to carry messages for you? If not, I understand, but if you wouldn't mind looking for a mama and papa who don't have anyone to spend Christmas with, I would really be happy to be part of their family or for them to be part of mine. Even if its just for Christmas, you don't even need to give me any gifts! Just... one night with a family will do.
Thank you, dear Santa, for reading my letter, I hope you get lots of cookies this year, and that you get to spend time with your own family.
~Love Holly.
PS- My friend Jimmy would like a bike that goes really fast.

Extras||
Friends:
Well, I have a lot of friends but my best friend is Jimmy. He's taller than me and really funny. He likes to go really fast so when we race he always wins, I mean... sometimes I let him win but mostly he beats me fair and square. Jimmy and me like to go down to the creek behind the orphanage and play pirates in an old wooden crate we found. We spent all summer once just making sure it was water tight and now we row up and down the shallow creek looking for high adventure. Sometimes we like to pretend we're out in the middle of the ocean and discovering new worlds, so when we drift to shore we look for crazy creatures, like the time we found the living stump, that turned out to be an evil warlord that had to be destroyed. Or the time a toad landed on Jimmy in the creek and he fell overboard so I had to fight through sharks and deadly sea creatures to save him. We go on a lot of adventures but at the end of the day we hang up our adventure gear and dock our boat and go in to eat dinner so the Ladies don't have to track us down and get upset over our boat. Its a good friendship, and I hope even when we find our own familys we can still be friends.

[G1 Sunstreaker]

1 day warning!

[G1 Sunstreaker]

Aaaand this is closed! Apologies for the late close, this should be judged tomorrow after I wake up <3

[Cutieduckpie]

Good luck guys ! Your forms are really cool and sweet <3
And happy new year to everyone c;

[WolfwithWings38]

Good luck my noodles and HAPPY NEW FREAKING YEAR PEOPLES!

[G1 Sunstreaker]

A huge thank you to everyone who posted, whether or not you filled out a form, I'm so very excited to have been able to host a competition!! It's been so much fun reading through everyone's lovely forms <33


So firstly my responses to everyone's forms. :> I'll put only the stuff I liked about the forms here, so if you'd like to hear my advice I can most certainly offer some up should you want to PM me about it! <3

Your form was cute, and I liked the concept it had. The idea of a little green Christmas-themed dude hated Christmas is comical and fun. x)

I love the world you built around the character. It was a fun and unique position for a character of his appearance and stature, and the level of detail in the relationship section was awesome.

Oh gosh I loved your form! It was super cute and the concept of this little hoofed dude wanting a reindeer was adorable and tons of fun to read about. I loved the little fiction piece and the way you described his personality, and the layout of the form was very visually pleasing as well.

Oh man, your form was so sweet and lovely. I loved reading her letter to Santa, it was a fun and unique perspective to answer the prompt with, and the character was sound. I also loved that the answer to the prompt was a desire for a family. the concept was played off of very well and it ties together into a form that flows very nicely! (plus the art is really cute <3)

And so without further ado the winner is Grifforik! Your form won out for its uniqueness and its pleasing flow. Excellent work, everyone, and thank you so much for trying out!! <3 Enjoy Holly! :D I'll add you right away.