Re: Viscet # 451 - UFA

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Re: Viscet # 451 - UFA

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Re: Viscet # 451 - UFA

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Re: Viscet # 451 - UFA

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Re: Viscet # 451 - UFA

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Re: Viscet # 451 - UFA

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"I will have my vengence... whether it be in this life or the next."


    "Maximus, Maximus!" The small viscet called, bounding up to his older brother a smile planted firmly on his face, panting slightly from his small run. "Did you hear? I am now Osiris's apprentice. I am going to be the next ruler." He said with a small smirk. "Don't be so sure of yourself, Brutus. Do you know how many apprentices he has gone through?" Maximus said upon glancing at the smug expression of his brother. Brutus frowned, and furrowed his brows in a sad and angry manner. "You are only jealous because you got picked by Arwyn." Brutus said in a whiny voice, giving a small face that a baby would give his mother if she said 'no'. "I wanted to be the General, and you know it clearly as I do." Maximus retaliated a tad harsher than intended. Not one to apologize to his brother, he waved a paw as he spoke his next sentence. "Go, play with Avina if you want to pester someone." He said with a snort, before heading off to find his new mentor. Brutus frowned, and soon went off to find the pretty, young female, Avina.


    Maximus grunted as he was hit in the shoulder by his opponent, sending him sliding across the ground. Brutus was entertaining himself with Avina nearby, who seemed more focused on Maximus. Brutus didn't like this, and then began trying to distract her once again. "Why aren't you practicing Brutus? Surely combat is important to a ruler." The smooth voiced female stated. Brutus frowned, trying to rack his brain for an explanation. "I find wisdom and good debate skills far more important to a ruler than combat. Plus, Osiris is busy. Come. Let us go elsewhere, so we don't get hurt by these brutes." He said, the words rolled smoothly off his tongue, not betraying his rush to find an explanation for his not training. Avina gazed at Maximus as he pushed himself up, and jumped back into the duel. Though, she was torn away as Brutus pulled her harshly away, growling to himself.

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    "Maximus!" The voice of the leader boomed, as he leapt from his high rocky perch, landing gracefully on two shorter forearms. He trotted quickly to catch up to the now stopped Maximus. "You have proven yourself enough to be able to take on the role of General. Arwyn is far too old to continue. I have already told him you will be relieving him in his duties as General, and you shall be named his successor." The leader stated in a much lower tone as he walked alongside Maximus. "Thank you, Osiris. I shall not disappoint you." He said, bowing to the male viscet, the golden earrings shining in the pale sunlight. "I know you will not. But, I do ask that you be careful. Some are not pleased with your rise to power. They think someone with the parents of an omega should be such as well." He said, furrowing his brows. He put a paw on Maximus' shoulders, before speaking once again. "Now, I must be off. I have your brother to attend to." Osiris said with a small chuckle. "Have fun with that." Maximus teased lightly, a smile spreading over his muzzle, before he watched the male vanish. After the leader disappeared from viee, he turned, and continued off towards the southern portion of the camp to find Alexandriam Alexandria was the viscet he had been recently engaged to. They had planned the wedding to be soon, and he prayed the warm, spring weather would hold.

    He soon found Alexandria, and smiled, nuzzling her cheek. "Everything been fine down here?" He asked, referring to the medicine den. Alexandria was the lead Shaman, as her necklace clearly showed, which was a large green and amber leaf, while his was a red and orange feather, signifying his rank of nobility. "Yes. Just a few visclings coming in with splinters, and a few bruises. Nothing over the top." She said with a small chuckle that melted his heart. She wasn't the prettiest viscet, such as Avina, but he had come to adore the female for something far more important. "Visclings will be visclings." He said with a small chuckle, taking up a seat beside her. "What about you, Maximus? Anything interesting?" She asked, wondering if he had another duel. "I am to replace Arwyn tomorrow before they choose the new apprentices." He said, and she smiled. "That is great, Maximus. I am so proud of you." She said, nuzzling into his shoulder, and closing her eyes. Maximus smiled, and turned to rest his head atop hers. "Indeed it is."

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    "It's funny how sometimes the ones you would take a bullet for, are really behind the trigger..."

    "Osiris!" The small female viscet shouted. "Osiris!!" She shouted again, her voice cracking, which had, at this point, awoken Maximus. Alexandria got up behind him, and the two slid out of the den, and raced towards Asphira, Osiris' mate. He slid up alongside her, before spotting what was the matter. Osiris had been mauled, and left in the middle of camp for all to see. Maximus was taken aback, and eyes wide, stared down at the body of his leader. He heard Asphira sobbing madly, and she tried to move to grab the dead Osiris. Maximus pulled the crying, shuddering Asphria into his chest, which she gladly accepted, crying heavily into his shoulder. Alexandria came running up with herbs, and Maximus lightly shook his head, knowing it was far too late for herbs. Maximus closed his eyes, wanting to know who was responsible for this cruel act. It had to be the rival clan. There was no way anyone in this clan would betray Osiris. They were all loyal, were they not? Brutus soon arrived on the scene, and gagged at the sight of all the blood. He turned to Avina, who gasped loudly. Burying his head in her shoulder, she moved a forepaw to his cheek, comforting the viscet. Maximus watched his brother, confused slightly by his actions. But, he figured it was that he had never seen such a horrific act of injustice.

    Brutus stood atop the boulder that once held Osiris when speeches were made. Now, it was Brutus' turn. Avina, his new mate, stood below the boulder, sitting, head lowered in sadness. "Today." His voice boomed, starting out his speech. "Is a sad day. Even the heavens mourn with us." He said, rain falling smoothly onto the soil, seeping into the ground, which would soon hold the tattered and toen body of Osiris. "We have lost our greatest ruler today to a threat still unknown to us. I, Brutus, shall spend every waking hour trying to solve this mystery. I, Brutus, shall serve you the same way your father, Osiris, has served you in days past." He said, before dropping his head slightly. "Fellow pack members, I ask of you to continue on in his sake, to keep his loss from being one in vain. We are fighting a dastardly enemy, one who knows how to stalk in the dead of night." He said. "Maximus!" His voice boomed, and the viscet arose, looking out over the crowd. "I ask that you and your soldiers please take the body of our fallen leader, and give him the burial he so rightfully deserves." He said. "As you wish." Maximus said, bowing to his brother, before turning. "Marilus, Arywn, Julius! Come with me, and we shall bid Osiris farewell." He said as the three soldiers came to flank him.

    Maximus stopped as he and his soldiers approached the outside of the camp grounds. He looked at the mauled body of Osiris, a viscet who had become a fatherly figure to him. He then laid the viscet to rest in a large grave, and they began to cover him up, when Julius screeched, causing Maximus to look up immediately. "Julius!" Arwyn, his mate, cried, throwing herself at the viscet whom had pinned, and begun to brutally maul Julius. Just as she was about to hit the viscet, a new viscet leapt in. Maximus grunted, and tried to twist around as someone pinned him. "What is the meaning of this?" He growled, before bitting back a cry as claws dug into his shoulders. "Maximus. Don't fight them, please." The voice was so bittersweet. Alexandria. She was in pain, it was obvious. Who dare hurt her? "Maximus, I do hope you listen to your precious Alexandria." Brutus said, dragging his claw under her chin, causing Alexandria to grimace. "Brutus. Explain what is going on? Why have you killed my soldiers? What have they done?" Maximus demanded. "They have done nothing, dear Maximus. It is you who have done everything. They were merely the last of the truly loyal ones. Shame." Brutus said in a fake disappointed tone. "Now, I do believe it is yours and Alexandrias turn." Brutus said, before looking at the other soldiers, giving a nod, before Alexandria screamed, and Maximus' world went dark.
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    "I am the dark messiah..."

    The viscet awoke to the sharp smell of herbs, and smoke. He coughed, and groaned as he tried to push himself up, only to have someone come quickly scuttling over and gently push him down. "Alexa...alexandria?" He questioned, perking his ears, and opening his eyes, only to spot something that was far from his mate. She sighed softly. "Th.. the female didn't make it. Nor did her son..." She said softly, her bright blue eyes shimmering softly, watering lightly. "S.. son?" He questioned. Her eyes widened. "I.. I am sorry. I shouldn't have said anything." She said, before scuttling off upon noticing his rageful look. He heaved himself up, only to collapse again, wincing heavily as one of his wounds tore open again. The female viscet winced for him, sighing softly, feeling down about not saving the female. "Look. You are injured badly, and need to rest. I will tell you what I saw if you promise to stay down." She said, trying to seek a compromise with the male. He nodded softly, before lowering his head, and closing his eyes.

    Maximus was now recovering strongly, his wounds turning to scars, which were beginning to hide beneath his dark coat. He now lay in the back of the den that was Alex's, the female having gone off to find some herbs to make some tea and for the headache's Maximus was complaining about. The story that Alex had explaines to him the day after his ordeal still ran rampent through his mind. How had he never noticed that he had a son? How could they have hidden him from him so well?! He had found some maroon beads, which he had tied around his tail next to his marriage bands, showing his title as a father to a son. He sighed, having entered a stage of denial and depression. Alex was helping with this by just being her cheerful and helpful self. It reminded him so much of Alexandria. Alex was a God send. He problem would have given up a long time ago had it been anyone else. He perked his ears upon noticing the return of the pretty viscet. She seemed paniced. Maximus heaved himself up, before moving forwards, tilting his head. "Alex, do tell me what is the matter?" He asked calmly. "Th... they are just.. just outside the te..territory." She said, tears forming in her eyes. "Who, Alex, hun?" He asked, tilting his head. "Your brother.."

    Rage boiled within the male viscet, and Alex desperately tried to stop his storming off, yet it was to no avail. "Maximus! Stop!" She cried as he stormed from the den, fueled solely by a burning desire for revenge. He pulled the mask over his head, the slick skull reflecting the sun's rays as he broke into a run, heading right for his brother.

    Avina flinched as Brutus yelled in outrage. "My pack is in ruins! The soldiers accomplish nothing, nor do the healers! No one does their job." He seathed, spinning on his hind legs. The jewelry-adorned viscet glared at the ground as he mumbled angrily. Avina reached forward, opening her mouth to comofrt him. "Don't you even try to. Your words are nothing but lies. You cannot convince me otherwise." He snapped angrily. Avina stepped back, before noticing something odd in the bushes behind Brutus. "Maximus..."

    The name slipped of her tongue in a soft whisper, and Brutus snapped up his head in anger, swinging a paw to send wounds up Avina's cheek. She cried out, and fell to the ground, tears welling in her eyes. "If you ever speak his name again, I will have you pub-" He stopped as he heard a familiar, dominant voice behind him. "Brutus. How dare you?" Brutus smirked, and turnes to face his brother. "Ah, dear brother, we finally meet again." He said, and glanced back at Avina, who covered her eyes with her paws. Brutus spoke once more. "Oh, how I have been waiting for this.."


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    Necklace
This necklace shows his rank. The feather shows a high ranking, as he was a captain during his time as a pride member. The red and yellow signified his rank as a captain, giving everyone in his pride the knowledge that he was the General.

    Mask
This mask was used in battles against opponents, whether they be rouges, a rival pride member, or youe own brother. He had the mask of a bird, showing his agressive, yet ingelligent strategy to fighting.

    Bead
The bead shows that he has made it past the viscling stage. All viscets of his pride have beads on their tails once they pass the viscling stage. It is a sign of their maturity, and their readiness to become an apprentice.

    Earrings
The earrings show that he has made it past the apprentice stage. Every viscet of his pride gained ear piercings to signify their rebirth as a newer, more skilled member of the pride. The color of these earrings also helped establish the rank. Gold for nobility, silver for elite, and bronze for the commoners.

    Bracelets
These were given to him by his parents as he made his rank. They soon passed away from old age soon after, and he greatly treasures these bands that he keeps around his ankles.

    Tail Bands
The gold bands are his wedding bands, showing he had once been married. The beads were for showing he was a father, and the maroon meant a male. Though his family no longer lives, he keeps them anyways, just to keep them alive in his heart.

    Bandana
He wears this bandana to signify his now loner status, which is because of true betrayal. He has seen many of the streets dogs with bandanas, and figured they were wearing it to show they were loners and rogues.


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    Maximus and Alex
Alex was the one who found, and healed him. He feels in dept to her. A debt that can never be truly repayed. He is always finding little ways to show his appreciation, through gifts and compliments or anything else he can think of. He may feel a small romantic attraction, but nothing overwhelmingly so. He figures she isn't interested in that, and tries to keep it from feeling too awkward.

    Maximus and Keiko
The two have an awkward relationship, as Keiko is frankly too scared of the brute to spend too much time around him without having some degree of an anxiety attack. Maximus also finds the female someone he wouldn't spend too much time with. She just isn't his type.

    Maximus and Kyuko
Kyuko is like a daughter to Maximus, someone he is always willing to protect. Kyuko is a spunky, wild child, whom he believes needs protection from the cruel side of the world and Maximus acts like a second father to the female, always willing to give advice, or just have a good time with the younger viscet.

    Maximus and Rajah
Rajah and Maximus do not get along at all. With Rajah's overconfident, trickster personality, and Maximus' humble and protective personality, it just doesn't mix well. The two are always at each others throats, sending jabs at one another, all harsh, but not understood by everyone.

    Maximus and Jonas
These two are basically brothers. Jonas is a bit more of the overconfident type, but not to the point of Rajah. The two understand one another on a spiritual level with their vengeful and 'dangerous-when-angry' persona's.


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Re: Viscet # 451 - UFA

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