Rise | #2297 by SurgeFire

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Rise | #2297

Postby SurgeFire » Thu Aug 15, 2019 4:48 pm

Welcome to Rise!
Rise is an adoptable based on Warrior Cats and focused around world building and character development.
Please make sure that you read the main thread so that you understand limits and levels!

To claim you must be at least level 1 or not have a founder in progress or a founder at all. Please be sure you have room in your clan before applying for this cat.

This cat may not be traded until: date
There is a 2 month cooldown after each ownership change.
For a transfer to be official, both parties must post on this cat's page. The original owner must post in the archive.

Tell me a situation in which this cat is put outside their comfort zone, and how they react to it/get through it.
Min: 50 words
Max: 400 words
End Date: August 20th, 11:59 PM EDT


Username: doge fruit
Cat Name: Rain Splash
Clan: Tribe of Toto Ra
Rank: warrior

Gender: male
Age: 40 moons
Description: Blue silver shaded spotted tabby with green eyes.

Other Features: None
Siblings: None Living

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Father: Foundation
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Dam: Foundation
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Postby sforzando. » Thu Aug 15, 2019 4:49 pm

Username;; vos.
Cat Name;; silvermouse
Gender;; she-cat
Age;;
Clan;; snowclan
Rank;; warrior

Prompt;; wip!
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Re: Rise | #2297

Postby Vixen Luo » Thu Aug 15, 2019 4:51 pm

res!

asked to watch someone's kits -- but he's awful with younger cats
finds a little joy in acting like a kit again
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Re: Rise | #2297

Postby doge fruit » Fri Aug 16, 2019 12:38 am

Username;; doge fruit
Cat Name;; Rain Splash
Gender;; male
Age;; 40 moons
Clan;; Tribe of Toto Ra
Rank;; warrior

Prompt;;

Rain Splash's heart pounded deeply and his head floated higher and higher as he tried to steady his breathe. He was doing his best not to focus on it, but the more he caught himself thinking of it, the more he felt queasy.

Cricket, a curious apprentice who went hunting with Rain Splash, was swept off his paws on the beach from standing too close to the shore. The strong waves dragged the little cat and brutally slammed him back to shore on some jagged rocks. The wide, jagged cut along his shoulder down to his hip was going to leave an ugly scar and his twisted paw seemed like a lost cause. Cricket's poor gray pelt was drenched in ocean water and blood.

Blood.

It settled heavy in Rain Splash, especially cat's blood since it never seemed appetizing like prey's blood. The sight and smell builded nausea for the silver tom. Minor cuts and scratches were 'okay' territory, but something severe like this made Rain Splash nearly faint. The silver tabby tom wants to quench his fear of blood, but it all needed small steps. And the current situation seemed like too much of a big leap.

But Rain Splash knows what's ahead in the future. There is going to be lots of blood in the future, and he needs to be prepared to deal with it. He was determined to mark that statement by helping Cricket until he could be brought to the healer. The little tom stared up at him with painful eyes but gave a determined smile that was enough to motivate Rain Splash into focusing, ignore how much blood soaked into his paws and filled his nose.

Leaf and Mangō were present in helping and had hoisted Cricket onto Mangō's back for transport. Even though he winced in pain, Rain Splash noticed how Cricket barely whimpered and kept a brave face. The little apprentice even made a comment about how he'll have a cool scar to show off just like Mangō, who nodded in agreement.

They quickly made for home so they could reach the healer's den. Mangō had taken the lead, speaking in soft tones to Cricket, who was clinging to his back. Rain Splash trotted some paces behind just as Leaf brushed past him. The brown tabby she-cat gave him a warm smile as her eyes glittered in admiration before catching up to Mangō and Cricket. It made Rain Splash feel warm inside. It made him feel like he still had time to improve.
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Re: Rise | #2297

Postby Lex. » Fri Aug 16, 2019 11:03 pm

Username;;sugar free.
Cat Name;; Silvertide
Gender;; female
Age;; 20 moons
Clan;; oceanclan
Rank;; warrior

Prompt;;I
She was taken hostage by humans when she was a kit. She panicked and tried to get away, but she couldn't. Luckily, her clan got her out. They worked out an escape plan involving a dog.
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Re: Rise | #2297

Postby DiamondDogg » Sat Aug 17, 2019 11:32 am

Username;; DiamondDogg Caverns
Cat Name;; Riverbed
Gender;; Tom
Age;; 39 Moons
Clan;; SilverClan
Rank;; Loner

Prompt;;

Riverbed, a loner who is close friends with SilverClan, lives near twolegplace. His brother, Smokestep, lives in SilverClan. He often visits his brother and is welcome onto the clan's territory and into the camp without an escort. He is fine for most of the journey to the clan until he gets to the river. The river. Fish's river. Whenever he gets to the river, he immediately becomes alert, and he goes out of his comfort zone. If he meets Smokestep at the river, he acts oddly and is very jumpy until he gets to the camp. Once he's in the camp, he calms down. He knows Fish is mean and rude, and he doesn't trust him. He doesn't like going by the river. Something is gonna happen one day, he can feel it.
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Re: Rise | #2297

Postby opti-mism » Sat Aug 17, 2019 2:51 pm

Username;; opti-mism
Cat Name;; Troutsmack
Gender;; Tom
Age;; 22 moons
Clan;; Saltclan
Rank;; Warrior

Prompt;;
Troutsmack's breath came quick, the rapid breathing making his vision waver as he started up the incline of the mountains. He was outside of Saltclan territory, venturing up into the mountains where precious herbs grew. It was said that a small grove of snowdrops lay nestled beneath the fresh-fallen snow, and with the frost sickness sweeping through the clan with a fervor, he was one of the few healthy enough to retrieve it. Even Minnowstar lay trapped in her den with a burning fever, and he trekked on up the incline with a purpose. His eyes darted back and forth, but he stared forwards rather than looking back.

He could only question how high he was now, and finally came the final obstacle that would push him outside his comfort zone to the breaking point. A 30 tail length climb, with nothing below but tall shards of stone, threatening to pierce his skin even as he simply stood. His legs shook as he dug his long claws into the stone to make his ascent, his entire body shaking. "Starclan help me, I'm not made for this." he wavered, shutting his eyes as tightly as possible as he slowly scaled the cliff. At least back at Saltclan, he could use the thin paths but this, this was the only way he could get to the herbs they needed. A way around would take far too long, and lives were already at risk.
Finally, his reach faltered, and he gripped the edge, frantically pulling himself over the edge with gasping breaths. His green eyes dilated as he finally opened them, but to no avail his heart calmed as he saw the tiny tops of snowdrops poking free from the snow.
Now, he just had to deal with the climb down...
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Re: Rise | #2297

Postby SurgeFire » Wed Aug 21, 2019 5:54 pm

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Re: Rise | #2297

Postby SurgeFire » Sun Sep 15, 2019 5:53 pm

doge fruit wrote:
Username;; doge fruit
Cat Name;; Rain Splash
Gender;; male
Age;; 40 moons
Clan;; Tribe of Toto Ra
Rank;; warrior

Prompt;;

Rain Splash's heart pounded deeply and his head floated higher and higher as he tried to steady his breathe. He was doing his best not to focus on it, but the more he caught himself thinking of it, the more he felt queasy.

Cricket, a curious apprentice who went hunting with Rain Splash, was swept off his paws on the beach from standing too close to the shore. The strong waves dragged the little cat and brutally slammed him back to shore on some jagged rocks. The wide, jagged cut along his shoulder down to his hip was going to leave an ugly scar and his twisted paw seemed like a lost cause. Cricket's poor gray pelt was drenched in ocean water and blood.

Blood.

It settled heavy in Rain Splash, especially cat's blood since it never seemed appetizing like prey's blood. The sight and smell builded nausea for the silver tom. Minor cuts and scratches were 'okay' territory, but something severe like this made Rain Splash nearly faint. The silver tabby tom wants to quench his fear of blood, but it all needed small steps. And the current situation seemed like too much of a big leap.

But Rain Splash knows what's ahead in the future. There is going to be lots of blood in the future, and he needs to be prepared to deal with it. He was determined to mark that statement by helping Cricket until he could be brought to the healer. The little tom stared up at him with painful eyes but gave a determined smile that was enough to motivate Rain Splash into focusing, ignore how much blood soaked into his paws and filled his nose.

Leaf and Mangō were present in helping and had hoisted Cricket onto Mangō's back for transport. Even though he winced in pain, Rain Splash noticed how Cricket barely whimpered and kept a brave face. The little apprentice even made a comment about how he'll have a cool scar to show off just like Mangō, who nodded in agreement.

They quickly made for home so they could reach the healer's den. Mangō had taken the lead, speaking in soft tones to Cricket, who was clinging to his back. Rain Splash trotted some paces behind just as Leaf brushed past him. The brown tabby she-cat gave him a warm smile as her eyes glittered in admiration before catching up to Mangō and Cricket. It made Rain Splash feel warm inside. It made him feel like he still had time to improve.


congrats! :o i felt this was a pretty interesting take on the prompt ^^ i love how you wrote his character!
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Re: Rise | #2297

Postby doge fruit » Tue Sep 17, 2019 11:52 am

aah, just now seeing this! tysm for this kitty! <33
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