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𝐫𝐞𝐬𝐮𝐥𝐭𝐬 !!
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oh boy yall made it hard to narrow down winners ;;
To start, I wanna give honorable mentions to:
recherché
lavender towns
atlas,
rab1es
kokochin
You all had entries that
really stuck in my head --
I hope you keep the concepts you came up with and use them in the future <3
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In addition, I am awarding a Runner-Up kalon to ethium!
The lie you portrayed in your story was unique and filled with empathy. Beyond the situational conflict, there was also a very tangible emotional conflict catalyzed by an ambiguous ending. The design of your RU kalon is inspired by the ocean and sirens mentioned in your entry.
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The winner of this kalon is:
plantfood !!
I really enjoyed the use of second-person in your entry -- it denies us of Renautis' thoughts and motives, enhancing the effect of his lie and adding shock value to the twist. You went with a very paradoxical lie, as well, which parallels Renautis' paradoxical actions. Your entry paints a very dynamic character with a lot of potential for development! Congrats on winning Renautis. :>