Username: Vinson
Clan: clan of the broken night
Quest Number: 3
Response:
Crowcrawl was used to getting his way.
And he was used to getting his way when he wanted it, not a moment later.
And so, when Carrionstar so graciously offered him the position of fallback, of second in command, he took it without hesitation. He knew that the old bat would make him his second in command. There was clearly no better option - all of the other cats that Carrion had pulled off the streets and out of the parks to make his so called 'clan' were weak minded. He was the only one fit for the job, although he did have to admit that Griffonclaw had given him a run for his money at the last minute. But he saw the way that Carrion looked at Griffonclaw's son Eaglekit. He saw the hesitation in his leader's eyes and seized the opportunity. And now they ruled together.
At first, Crowcrawl had thought that Carrionstar was going to be a weak leader, one who depended on their clan too much, who couldn't take a hit without crawling back to Deathwish - Deathwish, he thought with a sigh. That old blind ghost who thought she could speak with the dead. She was old enough where she herself should be dead at this point, too, he grumbled, narrowing his eyes. If his plan were to work, he needed to find a way to get rid of her - and possibly her daughter, Whisperpromise. The two of them meant nothing but trouble for him, even though Whisperpromise had real clan blood like he did. He supposed it was because of her mother that she held such tight beliefs about her ways.
But the two of them, along with their new watch, Softstep, provided comfort to Carrionstar. And only the stars above knew just how much comfort Carrion would need in the coming moons. Crowcrawl wanted, no, needed, for this to work. There was no way it couldn't. And even though there was a small glimmer of distrust and doubt in the back of his mind, he pushed it down. This was no time to doubt himself. He knew that he had a cruel heart. It was how Serpent, his father, had raised him, and he had no regrets about that. Despite his cruelness he had still gotten two lovely mollies to fall for him, to have his kits, his beautiful daughters. And that satisfied him. His blood would live on. Carrionstar, on the other paw, had no kits. When Carrionstar fell, he thought, fangs gleaming in the low moonlight, who would be there to carry on his legacy? Nobody.
Crowcrawl surveyed the camp, looking around at each cat he could spot, trying to pick out the cats that supported him now, the cats that would need a little convincing, and the cats that were too weak to put up a fight when the inevitable happened. He narrowed his eyes, realizing with a start that his vision was growing tired. There were grey hairs on his muzzle already. But this only made Crowcrawl angrier. He had waited moons upon moons. He had bided his time, rising to Carrionstar's calls so many times, giving support where it was needed. Had he not earned what was supposed to be his? Had he not rightfully earned the title of leader? He was tired of being Crowcrawl, groveling in the shadows of his leader's paws. He was ready to be a star - one that would eclipse Carrionstar's legacy and bring the clan of the broken night together, drawing them together into a real clan, one that could rule the whole city. He huffed, turning from his post in the attic of the stuffy old building they were camped at and padding downwards, towards the rest of the cats below.
So far, his plan had worked well. He knew exactly how many lives Carrionstar had left - most of the original founding members of the clan assumed they did, but really it was just between Carrion, Deathwish, and himself. The rest of the clan did not know that Carrion had jumped in front of a car to save Jaykit when Crowcrawl had tossed the poor mewling kit up on that road himself, been the one to fetch Carrionstar quickly. The rest of the clan did not know that Carrion had died swiftly when Crowcrawl had delivered him a bird stuffed with poison. The rest of the clan did not know that Crowcrawl had been the one to lead them into a dead end alley filled with angry dogs. Crowcrawl puffed out his chest, thinking of all the lives that he had caused Carrionstar to lose - lives that he knew were meant to be his. And they would be his not just one distant day in the future - no, they would be his tonight. Carrionstar only had one life left to lose, and Crowcrawl was going to pounce on it and take it just as he had all those other lives for the past countless moons.
He had made his decision. He would not grow old without leading this clan into its future. They were destined to be great, but not with Carrionstar as a leader. He was too weak. He let mangy strays and soft kittypets into the clan without batting an eye, unworried about the clan's reputation. Crowcrawl stalked to his nest, quickly laying down and kneading his sharp claws into the blankets and moss. It was growing dark, and Crowcrawl had long ago given his orders for night guard and dawn patrol. He had made sure to put the cats he trusted, the ones who supported him, on guard tonight, and was quick to assign Carrionstar's biggest supporters to the dawn patrol so that they would retire to their nests early tonight. If all went as planned, the night guard would say they hadn't heard a peep, and the rest of the poor sleepyheads would be forced to turn to Crowcrawl as their rightful leader. If all went as planned, he would be Crowstar by the time the stars began to give way in the sky to the sun. With the stars as his only witness, Crowcrawl would swiftly and painlessly take his leader's last life in an act of mercy. The clan must move on, he would say, sadness paining his face. The clan must usher in a new era of pride and reputation. Crowcrawl fell asleep swiftly, a small grin on his face for the first time in a long time.
It was a few hours later when Serpentslither woke him from his slumber quietly, prodding him not so gently with his brutish paws. He glared up at his father for waking him roughly, but then turned his eyes away. He could not let Serpent see the glimmer of doubt in his eyes. Instead he rose, stretched, sheathed his claws so he made no noise, and padded towards Carrionstar's separate den. His heartbeat slowly sped up, ticking in his chest at a steadily rising pace. He tried to calm himself. There was no reason to be afraid. He was simply taking what was meant to be his. He narrowed his eyes, steeling himself in the dark. He knew his father was watching. He knew that Smolderingkestrel and Owllight were watching, the two young cats with so much anger and ambition and potential. But he did not look back. He could not look back now, he realized. He was about to do something so malicious and despicable that if he dared to turn his gaze over his shoulder and glance back then he would never carry through with his plan. Crowcrawl flexed his muscles, unsheathed his claws, and braced himself for what he was going to do next. When he emerged from Carrionstar's den next, he would be leader. He would make Smolderingkestrel his fallback, much to the disappointment of Serpent. But he couldn't be sure that Serpent would not, given the chance, kill him before he was to obtain his name and nine lives and simply take the title for himself. He could not let that happen. Smolder, however, wouldn't dare turn on him.
Crowcrawl entered Carrionstar's den quietly, softly, as if trying not to disturb a sleeping kit. But as he entered the separate room, he saw eyes opening in the darkness before him. Carrionstar's single blind eye still glowed, and Crowcrawl silently cursed at himself for not waiting so long outside. But he remained calm. Everything relied on him staying calm.
"Hello, Crow," Carrion murmured, sitting up in his nest. Crowcrawl practically heard his joints creaking. He padded over to his leader's nest and sat quietly.
"Hello, Carrionstar," he nodded quietly back, trying his hardest not to let his voice quiver. He could not betray his true emotions. His plan. It was beginning to fall apart in front of his eyes, however. He couldn't shake the feeling that somehow Carrion had figured it out. He tilted his head, looking at his leader curiously.
"Oh, Crowcrawl," Carrionstar puffed, blinking swiftly. "I thought I had made the right decision in choosing you. It was foolish of me," he continued, and Crowcrawl felt the beginnings of a growl in his throat. That decision was the only one to this date that Crowcrawl had fully agreed with.
"What do you mean by that?" Crow glanced curiously at Carrion, slowly sheathing his claws and praying to the stars that Carrion hadn't noticed in the first place. He winced, though. Carrion may be old and half blind, but he was not a completely unobservant fool.
"The stars told me that I would pick the right cat without their guidance. That they could not tell me who to name as my fallback. I wish they had, Crow. Maybe then we would not be where we are right now."
Crowcrawl stiffened. "You regret having me at your side all these years? We have grown old together, Carrion. You have led a successful clan. And you know that your time is coming to an end. Pass the torch, Carrion," he growled, hurt by his leader's apparent regret. Had he been nothing but loyal all this time? Sticking around in a weak clan that didn't appreciate him and his ambition? And now, now that he was trying to do the right thing and turn the tide, he was told that he didn't matter. Carrion dared to mock him to his face? Then he would not die the painless death that Crowcrawl had been planning for him. He would get what he deserved - they both would.
"No, I don't regret choosing you at first. You were the right cat for the job. You had ambition. You knew what you wanted, and you were willing to work for it. But Crow, you have fallen off that path. You have deliberately put your clan in danger. You have needlessly taken my lives. For what?" Carrionstar asked, rising out of his nest to stand and face Crowcrawl. Even though he was elderly and stiff, Carrion was still an imposing figure. But his words enraged Crowcrawl.
"You know what I've done this for, you old fool!" Crow hissed violently under his breath. He had reached his breaking point. "You have grown old as a leader, respected by your foolish soft clan, while I have waited in your shadow for my chance. I waited patiently. But here you are now, old and gray and brittle, telling me what I cannot have! I deserve this!" Crowcrawl unsheathed his claws and swiped at Carrionstar, feeling nothing but rage when Carrion sidestepped and dodged his blow. "I was going to kill you peacefully, you know. In your sleep. Not anymore, you bag of bones!" Crowcrawl pounced, his eyes alight with anger, and swiftly brought his claws down upon Carrionstar's ragged old pelt. The old cat hissed, threw him off, and struck a blow of his own. The two toms slunk to the corners of the den, circling each other, both of them full of anger - but both of them for different reasons. Carrionstar had just been betrayed by his own fallback, a cat he had once shared a name with, and Crowcrawl was relishing the roiling rage that was rolling off of Carrionstar.
The two black tabbies dove at each other in a fit, claws slashing and fangs flashing, both drawing blood. Crowcrawl fell back to his paws as Carrionstar swiped effortlessly at his soft belly, muzzle curling. But he had managed to scratch Carrion's head, and blood was dripping into his eyes, obscuring his already half blind vision. Crowcrawl knew that this was his chance. His heart raced, his vision narrowed, and all he could see was Carrion. Without making his usual battle roar, Crow dove at Carrion with all the strength he had in his body - but Carrion fought back. The two grappled, rolling around the room, landing blows and spilling blood. Crowcrawl gasped as Carrionstar's jaws tightened suddenly around his neck.
This was not how it was supposed to go. This was not the plan.
Crowcrawl jerked his head free just before Carrionstar could deliver a killing bite, flashing back around to clamp down on Carrion's leg. They scrambled away from each other, heaving, the floor painted red. "I don't want what you have," Crowcrawl growled, low in his belly. "I want to be you!" he snapped, diving at Carrionstar once more. The two of them locked into battle like it was an intricate dance, weaving around one another, striking each other with vicious claws. Crowcrawl felt Carrion's blow to his neck with a twinge in his stomach, and he dove wildly for the older tom, teeth flashing. In a rage of red, Crowcrawl saw nothing as he felt his jaws clamp down and heard something crack. He dropped Carrionstar's slowly stilling body and backed away, vision still clouded with anger, and Crowcrawl laughed. He laughed and he laughed, until finally he collapsed and fell as still and silent as Carrionstar.
They were both found not long afterwards. Crowcrawl was frozen in time with a cruel smile on his bloodied muzzle.
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