I have 7 pages and NO ONE has even posted on one! Ok people i thing thats just not right

soooooooo help me out and even just say good,awful, and it goes on and on..... Oh! And now you can sign up to be in the comic! But you HAVE i repeat
HAVEto be in DeathPack and when i want to you'll die. Just fill out this forum
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BTW don't make the name/desines too hard
How do you make the pic transparent?
Narrator: The heavy rain drenched their faces and fur and fog swirled around them. Suddenly a forest of bare black trees were in front of them.Nala shivered at the sight for when the packs were friendly to each other packs gave small packs their pups. And Nala was one of them. Her mother she now knows is the queen of this butrial pack.
Nala: I stood in front with Death and as soon as i saw the forest i stopped and said "We're here."
Narrator: A shiver went through The Death Finders spines they now knew that they weir alive this was no nightmare, nor dream. It was life. They had to help 7 packs come back to life. For right now it was their nightmare and for HowlPack and WoodlandPack it was a living h-e-double-hockey-sticks (i bet you all no what i mean)
Death: I firstly went into the piny forest for witch i knew by heart since DeathPack loved using me because of my wings
Narrator: Even though Death knew he was going to win this war he had a thought that something worst then DeathPack losing will happen to
him