[nindroidzane]

This is a Secret Santa gift cat!
This cat is for: Fallendownut
Coat description: black smoke tortie (carries classic tabby)
Edits: [nr] weight, scar [c] whiskers, fangs, sclera, ear tufts, min fur [uc] long tail

+ using this uncommon edit !!

[I Like Bees]

Hello! Please change this to MYO #1249

This isn't quiiite how a smoke tortie would work -- the smoke pattern should be showing on both colors, and at the moment it looks to only be visible on the black half of the coat. The red base coat should be fairly light throughout the whole coat, and then even lighter in the smoke areas. The red stripes should probably bit a tiny bit less vibrant as well since smoke has a stronger effect on red pigments. Here are some red smokes as examples -- just try not to go so light that their red appears cream or white for Stars purpose ^^

(Alternately you can remove the smoke from the black and the coat description and that would also work)

I'd also call this a long tail (uc) at the moment for the way the fluff extends far past the usual end of the tail. You can either apply an uncommon edit item for this or redraw the fur edit to end at about the usual end of the fluffy tail lines ^^

Please let me know when that's been updated and I'll be back to check this cat again asap!

[I Like Bees]

Approved and archived!

As the user this cat was for never finished their secret Santa cat, this cat will be added to the next round of readopts ^^

[faelyn]

this cat has been readopted to ethium!