Stars MYO #773 by VerySmashing

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Stars MYO #773

Postby VerySmashing » Sat Mar 26, 2022 11:26 am

    username: VerySmashing
    clan: ShudderClan
    myo/items using: 1x Uncommon MYO
    coat description: cinnamon mackerel tabby with mid white.
    edits: [nr] scars, claws, expression [c] pointed ears [u] long tail
    obtained how?: bought with C$


    Honestly not sure with the fur edit, it was one the pre-made ones but it didn't say uncommon on it I don't think, still if the fur is also an uncommon i can spend a little more c$ for 1x uncommon edit :>
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Re: Stars MYO #773

Postby I Like Bees » Mon Apr 04, 2022 6:03 am

Please remove min fur edits from the edits list (premade tails aren't fur edits) as well as pupil shape (wide/thin pupils are just expression)! Please also change the description to cinnamon mackerel tabby with mid white

Unfortunately, this coat will need a few edits before this cat can be approved:
- White spotting (the "cream undercoat") should be a lot closer to pure white, rather than cream
- None of the tabby stripes should go over the white spotting; white fur covers every color/pattern underneath

Once that's been edited, let me know and I'll be back to check this cat again!
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Re: Stars MYO #773

Postby VerySmashing » Mon Apr 04, 2022 7:03 am

I Like Bees wrote:
Please remove min fur edits from the edits list (premade tails aren't fur edits) as well as pupil shape (wide/thin pupils are just expression)! Please also change the description to cinnamon mackerel tabby with mid white

Unfortunately, this coat will need a few edits before this cat can be approved:
- White spotting (the "cream undercoat") should be a lot closer to pure white, rather than cream
- None of the tabby stripes should go over the white spotting; white fur covers every color/pattern underneath

Once that's been edited, let me know and I'll be back to check this cat again!

    Hey, I tried fixing the problems you pointed out! Mind looking again?
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Re: Stars MYO #773

Postby I Like Bees » Mon Apr 04, 2022 7:11 am

Looks good! This cat is now approved, and your bank/archive have been updated
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