by Chamrosh » Thu Sep 10, 2020 4:55 pm
Username: Chamrosh
Show name: Wish Upon a Star
Barn name: Meteor
Gender: Mare
Discipline: Show Jumping
Halter type + color: standard + gold
Customization? Daisies or wildflowers I think would both be really cute so either of those are fine by me?
Prompt:
Four thundering feet still strike the ground,
Though Summer heat, run round and round
A trot, a prance, they start to soar,
And with advance, come cheers for more.
They raise the poles, pick up their speed;
They reach their goal upon their steed.
With shoulders back and head held high,
Forgot, the hack, Hands touch the Sky
The human's off, he stands and bows,
His glory quaff, vic'try avowed.
The crowd apprise him on the stand
A neck-worn prize they place in hand.
And now, a nip, the usual fare;
They hear a rip come from his hair.
For here's the thing - 'drove her berserk
Despite this bling - It was her work!
And all she'd ask for was a treat
Just some small task, something to eat!
For her if gifts come with delay
Riders wear quiffs from a toupee.
this came out different from how i meant but sometimes writing is like that
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by Chamrosh » Fri Sep 11, 2020 8:00 am
Owlmania wrote:Congrats Chamrosh, you certainly deserve this girl!
<3 <3 thank you! Both for the compliment and for beautiful bean!
I'm... really surprised I'm the only person who entered, honestly, because she's gorgeous?
I really love the colour combo of the high-contrast monochrome + the soft gold type of tone and I kinda just?? had to enter?? If that makes sense?
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by the-raven-king » Fri Sep 11, 2020 9:51 am
i almost entered, but poetry doesnt come easily to me and i thought your poem was great (i thoroughly enjoyed it and i love the humorous bit at the end, a very nice touch that made me smile when i read it!) and truly believed you deserved to have her so i decided not to go for it!!! meteor is a very lovely lady, congrats chamrosh!
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by Owlmania » Fri Sep 11, 2020 11:32 am
@Chamrosh
Thank you and yes! Glad she’s found a home
@the-raven-king
lol, I really stink at poetry myself and probably need to practice more. I’ve found myself in your shoes often. Just looking at an amazing entry and thinking... well I’m doomed but nice piece!
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