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Welcome to Rise!
Rise is an adoptable based on Warrior Cats and focused around world building and character development.
Please make sure that you read the main thread so that you understand limits and levels!

To claim you must be at least level 1 or not have a founder in progress or a founder at all. Please be sure you have room in your clan before applying for this cat.

This cat may not be traded until: February 19, 2020
There is a 2 month cooldown after each ownership change.
For a transfer to be official, both parties must post on this cat's page. The original owner must post in the archive.

To win this cat, tell me what their greatest flaw is. Max 200 words.

End Date: December 18 at 7 pm EST

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Username: ieiis
Cat Name: Egretwillow
Clan: hiraeth
Rank: Willow [elder]

Gender: female
Age: 110 moons
Description: A warm gray-and-white cat with light blue eyes
(lilac shaded w/ high white)

Other Features: None
Siblings: None Living

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[astraf]

Username: eevee!.
Cat Name: slyfox
Clan: waspclan
Rank: honey gatherer
Gender: female
Age: 28

Prompt:

slyfox was named after her greatest flaw; she's too sneaky. you tell her to do something and she pretends to do it but then she 'somehow' ends up on the other side of the territory. there's a rumor that she had a mate for a short while but it turns out that she had another at the same time. she has snuck out of camp more than ten times, only to hunt until dawn. she has organised several patrols without fawnshine's permission, all while walking around and eating.

[Berryy]

Res with being too naive

[Zephara]

Username: Diamond pet
Cat Name: Sedgebrisk
Clan: MoonClan
Rank: Warrior
Gender: Female
Age: 47 moons

Prompt: wip

[Shuurock]

Username: Shuurock
Cat Name: Ghosteyes
Clan: Tidalclan
Rank: Warrior
Gender: She-cat
Age: 54 moons

Prompt:

Ghosteyes’ greatest flaw is her anger issues. Usually she is a kind cat with the need to help her clanmates, but small details can set her off in ways she doesn’t like to admit. She thanks Starclan that she’s never gotten physical with anyone, but she regrets all the cats she’s hurt over the seasons. Ghosteyes finds herself getting close to others fairly quickly, but in what feels like a heartbeat she will have an outburst and yell at them. Seeing the way their happy faces turn to pain makes her heart hurt. She is doing her best to work on her emotions talking with people who she’s hurt and what causes her to get so angry. She has definitely improved in comparison to when she was young, but she still has lengths to go to truly be happy with herself.

(141 words)

[mikan!]

Username: mikan!
Cat Name: streamleap
Clan: petalclan
Rank: warrior
Gender: female
Age: 14 moons


Prompt:

streamleap's greatest flaw is hubris. although she is trying to improve herself beyond hubris, her old habits die hard. her high self-esteem is a bit too high for her own good; she may put herself down, but in reality, secretly admire her doings. her backhanded compliments and habit of one-upping merit her as an "unpleasant cat", unbeknownst to her. deep down, she just lacks an understanding of how she is tearing down others with her actions, and really truly doesn't mean to hurt others.

it will be quite a challenge for her to understand the values of others, but she will eventually have to come to that realization if she wants to be the cat she's always wanted to be.

[houndjaw]

username: houndjaw
cat name: sloe (fang)
clan: valeclan
rank: tenderfoot
gender: molly
age: 11 moons

prompt: sloe's greatest weakness is her own lack of patience. she absolutely loathes waiting for things that take more than necessary, and because of this she is not as reliable as she should be. it is possible that this is merely an age-appropriated flaw, but probably not. sloe would rather go without something than wait; for example, if she is stalking prey that is especially hesitant or difficult to catch, she will almost instantly give up as soon as the signs of waiting show. tied with her stubborn attitude, this difficult combination of traits make her a troublesome cat to pin down. sloe gets frustrated easily, though unbeknownst to her she is causing her own troubles. with time, perhaps her mind will ease into the idea of taking rests, but right now all she wants to do is go, go, go. (140 words)

[clouds-move-on]

Username: Raincloud the 33rd
Cat Name: Fidgetfoot
Clan: Lighthouse Colony
Rank: tbd
Gender: male
Age: tbd

Prompt:
Fidgetfoot is far too acquiescent, and mostly to the wrong people- he can disobey his mentor fairly easily, as he doesn't fear him. But anyone he feels he has cause to fear he's easily pliable to their will, even if their will is to do something more harm than good. Fidgetfoot often puts on an act of bravery when in the face of his peers and friends - he'll do small daring exploits at their challenges. But his cowardice towards bullies and his gullible, weak nature he tries to hide. After joining Lighthouse he's doing his best to not be swayed by people as much, but the damage of his younger life - of being trained by Summer and being an accomplice in his plot of destruction - still remains. Fidgetpaw is the one who lit the fire that burned their home, all out of fear of Summer killing him or his brother. Even his joining the clan was a plan from the tomcat, to spy for his own group on the Lighthouse cats. He hopes someday be can break free and be a genuine, good ally to his new clan, and stop the lies, the fear and all the plotting he keeps.

[leafless willow]

Username: ieiis
Cat Name: Egretwillow
Clan: hiraeth
Rank: Willow [elder]
Gender: female
Age: 110 moons

Prompt:

188/200 words
She'd always been a bit prideful. Stuck-up, with a mind filled with dreams of glamour and fame, believing her beauty could carry her the length of many paths whichever one she took. Cats would say that'd always been her greatest flaw - living in a preconceived future, with no actual possible way of achieving it. Even as she'd aged into an elder, far beyond her youth, and fur now speckled with grey, she hadn't released this mindset. Instead, it'd only grown with her, evolving into a belief that her beauty in old age should give her special permissions.

Egretwillow's mate, Antlerfrost, disagreed. They'd struggled with conceiving kits when they'd first become mates, and with each failed attempt Egret had grown more bitter. Bitter towards herself, bitter towards the clan, and bitter towards everything. She wasn't who he'd loved, and once their only kit they'd conceived - Chestnut - had passed away in a freak accident, it'd hit a max. Antler described her biggest flaw as bitter entitlement. Everyone else danced around it - avoided responding to it, and fed into her flaws. Still, she circled, age 110, with icy bitter entrapping her.

[Only_Sky]

Username: Only_Sky
Cat Name: Rabbitfur
Clan: Fogclan
Rank: Elder
Gender: Female
Age: 90 moons

Prompt: Overbearing. Critical and expectant of nothing less than perfection. Though, it isn't her own fault, for pride and expectation has always run in her family. Unfortunately, this pushed her to remorselessness.

She strives for behavioural perfection, having disdain for those who step out of place and 'cause unruliness'. Few have gone unscathed by her barbed tongue. Her reputation as an authoritarian is well known. In her days as a mentor, Rabbitfur made sure that those under her care would 'Achieve the utmost greatness'. Each apprentice was strictly taught how to behave properly, and were expected to pass each of their apprenticeships with precision. For those who failed to meet her expectations, they were forced to retake their assessments until they passed.

As for her daughter.. Ashstar was lucky to have not been so affected by her mother's reign. As kit and apprentice, her mother watched over her and made sure that her daughter would be the best of the best. Ashstar managed to pass her assessment with flying colours, much to her mother's pride. And when she eventually became deputy and leader, Rabbitfur was impressed.

Yet, even now, she is still highly critical of others. And probably always will be.