Entry for Kiuii Adopts by CloudedDiamond

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Entry for Kiuii Adopts

Postby CloudedDiamond » Fri Aug 10, 2018 4:28 am

This one is the sky with a sun on it (it's shoulder).

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Re: Entry for Kiuii Adopts

Postby ❀∂σvεғαүε❀ » Sat Aug 11, 2018 6:27 am

Oh my goodness, I absolutely love your entries! They’re fantastic! However, I have some critcism, I hope you don’t mind! :)
First, I love the idea behind this one! However, it’s a bit sloppy, and it’s pretty plain. I love how you did the sky, though!
For the rest of your entries, I love that for most of them, you’re using different brushes, which I find creative!! But for the second one, the lines were a bit hard to see, and the eyes were too saturated, and it didn’t really fit. A good way to fix that is to lighten up the eye color and desaturated a bit, it really helps! As for the lines, white lines aren’t very nice, so I suggest using a dark color for those! :D
For your final entry, I love love the colors you used! They fit so well! However, you said you’d make line edits on it, but you only removed the tail and forgot to remove the shading. Either way, I really love it and I’m sure you’ll become so much better the more you practice! :)
Don’t feel upset! I enjoyed looking through your entries and they were amazing! Have a nice day! <3
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