Kalon Entry #10 -Windmill by Silver Pandorica

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Kalon Entry #10 -Windmill

Postby Silver Pandorica » Fri Jul 14, 2017 1:40 am

Little windmill child! I really really feel like there's something missing, but I can't quite put my finger on it. Design suggestions and critique are a huge help to me, as I struggle with it a lot. I'm better at edits then the actual design, haha.

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standard shine
common tail
common hair
uncommon ears
rare extra eyes
nr heterochromia (?)

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Re: Kalon Entry #10 -Windmill

Postby mongrel » Fri Jul 14, 2017 7:58 am

Hello hello again fren
So the design seems pretty simple and there's not really much to keep you eyes on the design. I'd say add some blues from the hair and tail and little accents of red and white you put in the shine and eyes. Also, maybe add a design to the legs? Other than the gradient they're pretty plain.
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Re: Kalon Entry #10 -Windmill

Postby Silver Pandorica » Sat Jul 15, 2017 1:52 am

Imaginary wrote:
Hello hello again fren
So the design seems pretty simple and there's not really much to keep you eyes on the design. I'd say add some blues from the hair and tail and little accents of red and white you put in the shine and eyes. Also, maybe add a design to the legs? Other than the gradient they're pretty plain.
I hope I'm helpful? I try to be? Especially to you because ily and you are an angel?


It does look really plain, but I couldn't quite figure out how to fix that. I'll add some accents in later when I've got the time! Thank you for the advice fren <3 And Ily 2 <33


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