[Blossom Birchwood]

Here's what I got:
1. Eyes
-Changed to a red instead of white. Red eyes always give the the idea of evil. (Im assuming his grey eye is blind?)

2. Base Coat
-I wouldn't use the blackest black for his base coat, then you can't see the lines in art. So I went with a bit of a softer black. I mean, what use is lines if you can't see them?

3. Markings
-Head
--For the head, I added markings that give him the "resting angry" face look. Along with triangles that look like he has spikes but not really. His ears has white diamonds on the back.

-Legs and Tail
--I added more diamonds/ outlines to give him a simple yet more complex look

4. Hair and chest
-Hair
--For the hair I added in some white streaks to make it flow better with the design

-Chest
--For the chest, having a white chest and a black diamond seemed odd, so it's just a bit of white there now to go along with his hair

5. Wings
-Honestly, I would keep the wings black. Too much white can give the wrong idea of evil if the wolf has white wings like an angel.


I really don't want any prize- but if you choose to use my re-vamp, 50% or more of the idea, please mention me in any reference sheet there is of him. I don't need to be mentioned in any art.

[Blossom Birchwood]

If you chose to use my entire revamp idea, I will give you 1 full body piece of art of him.

[corrosive_limes]

This is certainly an interesting idea. I really like the idea of the "resting angry face", it certainly seems like it would fit him. I also really like what you did with the outlines of the diamonds on his legs and tail. I do like how the red goes with the overall design, but it seems almost too stereotypically evil, I don't know. I might incorporate something to do with red, though.
And actually his grey eye is not blind, but depending on how things go in the story arc, it might not stay that way for long X3