[Fuscontidox]

Though she has all breeding slots in tacked, they must all be taken by me(Fuscontidox)
Foals have:
50% chance of thick & wavy mane tail and flares
25% chance at Feathering
15% chance of an eye showing from behind their forelock
25% chance at a cropped tail

Owner: kiwilady
Gender: Mare
Rarity: Rare
Height: 6.0hh
Stable Name: Maleficent
Show Name: Dark Light That Shines
Coloration: Black
Extras/accessories: fuzzy feets added <3; all hair edited, red eyes, new shadowing and highlights
Favorite grim story:The seven ravens
What breed? Friesian
Favorite detail: the fuzzy feet!
Poem:
Oh What A Feeling, One In Which Washes Over The Body Like Merciless Thorns From A Rose Bush.

A Wilting Rose Bud, One That Has No Light To Reach Towards.

Twisted, Mangled, Spine Stinging Thorns That Pierce The Skin.

Like The Sinful Thoughts In Which Penetrate The Most Conscious Of Minds.

Logic, Moral, Sanity, Are Just Light That Fades With Each Passing Day.

You Can Feed It Some Savior From That Little Water Pale.

But Its To Late, The Shade In Which Has Turn The Petals Grey.

Has Decade It From The Inside Out.

Pure Madness I Say! But I Never Want A Feeling Such As This!

To Ever Go Away!

I Cant Help But Take All The Thorns In.

I Don’t Want To See That Pitiful Light!

Give Me The Over Whelming Satisfaction Of THAT SINISTER FEELING!

Let My Humanity Welt Away!

And My World Will Turn.

A Shade Of Grey.

All credit to original author from here http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/ ... -progress/

Link to runner up (sister): viewtopic.php?f=53&t=2523723

[Firedancer77]

Owner
Firedancer77, here to try and win this beauty.

Gender
She's a mare

Rarity
She's rare

Height
6.0hh

Stable Name
Reaper is what this girl is called around the stables. The nickname came after The Grim Reaper from stories, as she showed up at one point whenever some stable members were discussing the tale.

Show Name
Dancing With Evil is her show name, because of this girl's attitude. She's downright nasty, bucking and kicking, and nearly impossible to ride. They don't call her Dancing With Evil just because it makes a good story- it's almost like you're trying to dance with evil.

Coloration
Her coloration is black.

Extras/accessories
Her extras/accessories are fuzzy feets added <3; all hair edited, red eyes, new shadowing and highlights.

Favorite Grim Story
Well, I'm assuming you mean one of the fairytales made by the Grim brothers and that you mean the mare's. Her favorite is "The Water of Life", mainly because of the dwarf.

What Breed?
I'm saying Fresian? I'm not sure,

Favorite Detail
I, personally, love her hair edits. They're really cool!

Poem
Come on and dance with evil

In the shadows of the night

Just forget about the people

And let the nightmares take flight

Come on and dance with evil

The darkness is all around

Just forget about the people

Listen to the eerie sound

Just come and dance with evil

And let all goodness die

Just come on and dance with evil

Because evil is dancing tonight

Credit to Firedancer77 for the poem.

[Kiwilady]

Owner: kiwilady
Gender: Mare
Rarity: Rare
Height: 6.0hh
Stable Name: Maleficent
Show Name: Dark Light That Shines
Coloration: Black
Extras/accessories: fuzzy feets added <3; all hair edited, red eyes, new shadowing and highlights
Favorite grim story:The seven ravens
What breed? Frezion
Favorite detail: the fuzzy feet!
Poem:
Oh What A Feeling, One In Which Washes Over The Body Like Merciless Thorns From A Rose Bush.

A Wilting Rose Bud, One That Has No Light To Reach Towards.

Twisted, Mangled, Spine Stinging Thorns That Pierce The Skin.

Like The Sinful Thoughts In Which Penetrate The Most Conscious Of Minds.

Logic, Moral, Sanity, Are Just Light That Fades With Each Passing Day.

You Can Feed It Some Savior From That Little Water Pale.

But Its To Late, The Shade In Which Has Turn The Petals Grey.

Has Decade It From The Inside Out.

Pure Madness I Say! But I Never Want A Feeling Such As This!

To Ever Go Away!

I Cant Help But Take All The Thorns In.

I Don’t Want To See That Pitiful Light!

Give Me The Over Whelming Satisfaction Of THAT SINISTER FEELING!

Let My Humanity Welt Away!

And My World Will Turn.

A Shade Of Grey.

All credit to original author from here http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/ ... -progress/

[Fuscontidox]

Bump!

[Firedancer77]

I'll keep working on my form!

[Fuscontidox]

Bump! Finish form while you can!

May extend the date if need be

I would like to see at least 2 finished forms before I judge

[Firedancer77]

Finished my form!

[Firedancer77]

I believe there are two finished forms. ^^

[Fuscontidox]

Yeah I'm still make a choice x3x omg....

I like both the forms for lots of reasons! Some similar some unique!

This is closed for judging, I'll post again when I decide!

[Firedancer77]

Okay! I can't wait!