WME: Red Chestnut Splash by AmigoGirl

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WME: Red Chestnut Splash

Postby AmigoGirl » Thu Jul 19, 2012 9:58 am

No forms after page 4 will be judged during the lack of time. Sorry. WIPs are allowed. You will have 3 days to finish your stories.

Lilian Nightshade wrote:Username: Lilian Nightshade
Equid's name: Koriander
Short story:

(For the story I be using my equid Richard)

It was morning, the still weak rays of sunlight washing the mountains with their warmth. In a day like that, with a sky so blue and cloudless and with the sun radiating life, any animal would be awake already, doing its tasks in the nature, running, searching for food or even playing around.

Well, any animal but a certain young equine.

There she was, the equid. She was lying on the floor of a very small cave, her tail curled around her body tightly as she slept soundly. She looked so peaceful and relaxed that anybody would think she could continue asleep for the whole day. However, the cave entrance wasn’t narrow enough to prevent the sunlight from invading her rocky, dark home, and the mare let out a quiet grunt as the warm tongues of energy touched her closed eyes.

“Come on, I want to sleep.” She mumbled, shifting so the irritating light could leave her small form alone. The effort wasn’t very successful, though, and soon she felt the warmth on her coat once more. To interrupt her slumber even more, the soft chirping of the birds that had just woken up could already be heard everywhere outside her home, making her long ears instinctively flick around wildly. Those creatures must have been eager to greet the sun, she thought. The equid quickly buried her head between her front legs as her last attempt to return to her dreams.

And, of course, it didn’t work. In fact, her attempt was interrupted once more, this time by a familiar, male voice.

“Kori? Kori! Are you asleep?”

“No, I’m training for when I die.” She mumbled, buried her head further between her legs. “Go away, Richard. I want peace.” She felt the warm light touch her skin again and shrugged slightly, the rocky room becoming silent. Maybe Richard had really left, she thought...

Well, the spell was broken the moment a wave of gelid water suddenly crashed against her face and neck, causing her eyes to shoot open and her body to jump suddenly, so suddenly her back hit the low ceiling of the small cave she was in with a thud.

“Ow!” Kori quickly ran outside her home, shaking her body wildly to get rid of the cold liquid. Her back was sore from the incident with the cave ceiling, earning a few grunts from her mouth with each move. Once the mare calmed down and took a deep breath, she finally heard the hysterical laughter that echoed behind her, a very familiar laughter, and that made Kori turn around to see what was happening.

And there he was, the young male equid. He was laughing as if he had seen the funniest thing in the world(what was probably true) and had a large, wet leaf lying by his side. Realization shone in her green eyes as she imagined Richard dipping that leaf in the water of a river that ran nearby, carrying it to her cave and then spilling its contents on her face. “Richard, you little...”

Richard never thought an equine could growl, but Koriander’s voice tone made him consider that possibility. With that, in a quick move, he turned around and galloped away, his laughter never ceasing. “Come catch me, if you can!” He shouted. Kori, of course, couldn’t let such an opportunity escape her, and with a smirk, she sped off towards Richard. Her cave disappeared behind her running body as she approached more and more the stallion, a new world forming before her, filled with mountains and bright green camps.

Right then, she couldn’t remember why she wanted to keep sleeping at all.

The pair soon lost track of time, they couldn’t tell if they had run for minutes or hours. The only things that mattered for them right then were their laughter and the sound of the small hooves that touched the hard soil, releasing a faint crunching sound with each step. Their chase only ceased when Kori finally managed to reach the young stallion and bite on one of his long ears, pulling it to her and making Richard lose his balance completely.

With that, Richard fell, rolling on the ground twice and stopping on his back, laying close to a small river that descended from the mountains. He spit a few patches of grass he had accidentally swallowed in his fall and suddenly heard a soft giggle by his side. When he turned to the direction of the voice, Kori was smirking and trying to stop her giggles. “See what happens when you try to drown a lady?”

“Oh, sorry if I almost drowned you to death with a leaf of water.” He replied, rolling his eyes and standing on his legs. His tongue was still itchy because of the grass, but he ignored it.

“You may not have drowned me, but I was trying to sleep, that was still a low blow.”

“Well, what could be better than spending your time with me instead of sleeping?” He joked, earning an eye roll from her, and took a few steps in her direction.

“Do you really want me to respond?” Kori approached the river and took a few gulps of fresh water. All that running had made her thirsty and she couldn’t resist once she took notice of the thick stream of the liquid.

Richard saw that and suddenly his ears flicked upwards as an idea hit his mind “Actually, no.” He responded, getting even closer and in a slow, careful pace. Kori quickly lifted her head and narrowed her eyes at him, suspicious. “Tell me, Koriander, are you really that scared of water?”

“I’m not scared!” She exclaimed. Her voice full of irritation. “I bet not even you would like to be woken up with a jet of cold water.”

“Oh, really?” He was circling her now, a wide smirk visible on his equine lips. “Then prove that.”

“... How?”

“Like this!” And with a sudden movement, Richard threw his body on his friend’s and pushed Kori into the small river with a loud splash. The river was quite shallow, the water only managing to reach her shoulder, still, since Kori was startled, the mare struggled to get back to the shore, leaning on the her front hooves as she approached the grassy area and taking deep breaths.

Richard was laughing wildly once more, not even paying attention as she jumped from the water and bit hard on his tail. “Time for the payback!” In a matter of seconds, the stallion was pulled to the river, gasping for air and struggling for a moment as Kori observed with a wide smile how helpless he looked. It didn’t take long for him to recompose himself, tough.

And with that, both equids spent the rest of the morning playing in the river, splashing each other wildly, jumping in the water and even trying to chase a few unlucky small fish that crossed their way, being drawn by the weak current.

They were soaked wet by the time evening came, but they couldn’t care less. That morning had been just too enjoyable for them to pay attention to such details.

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Re: WME: Red Chestnut Splash

Postby parlaymars » Thu Jul 19, 2012 9:59 am

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Equid's name:
Ardens
{Are-dens}
Meaning 'my Soul is Burning' in Latin.
Short story:
Ardens trotted faithfully behind her mother, blinking her green eyes. They were a startling contrast to her white and red coat, and her with her coal black mother certainly made an interesting pair. She followed her mother through the thick snowfall, grabbing her black tail between her teeth when she couldn't even see her own hooves.

Little Ardens tripped, stumbling over some rocks she couldn't see in the loose snow. She lost his grip on her mother's tail and fell, buried in the freezing powder up to her red and white chest.

"Mama! Mama!" she called frantically, looking for hrt mother's black coat in the whirling snow. Ardens' mother, however, was nowhere to be seen.

"Mama!" she bleated, struggling out of the snow and trotting forwards.

Without hrt mother, however, she was petrified. She had heard many storied in her herd about foals falling off cliffs during snowstorms. She bleated again frantically, frozen with fear. She thought she heard an answering call, so she slogged through the thick snow another few feet before finding a cave. She looked inside, then backed away, terrified, as a pair of gleaming yellow eyes peered out from the cave. She stumbled backwards into the snow as a massive cat, bigger than any bobcat she had ever seen slunk out of the cave, bearing its giant fangs and the tiny foal in front of it.

Ardens opened her mouth to scream, but before she could, a large bay stallion with a peculiar face marking leapt in front of her. Flashing his steely black and pinkish hued hooves at the cat, he slowly drove it back into the cave. When the creature was back in its den, yowling for its lost supper, the stallion noticed the foal.

The stallion turned to Ardens, grinning.

"Well, youngster, looks like you picked the biggest cat in the mountains." he said, winking one brown eye at the foal.

"W-well i was l-looking for m-my m-mommy." Ardens stuttered, getting to his feet and walking beside the bay stallion.

"Let's find your mom, then. What does she look like?" the bay stallion said.

"My mom is ebony black, with whitish brindle on her face and neck, but it fades into the black. She's also got white streaks on her tail." Ardens recounted.

"My name's Ardens, and my mom is Lolita." the foal said, bouncing happily next to the stallion.

"They call me Patch." the stallion replied, trotting up a rise. The herd spread out below the stallion and the filly, one dark mare running anxiously to each equid.

"Thats my mom." Ardens said, smiling up at Patch.

"Cool. If you ever run into any other big bad bobcats, give me a shout." Patch said, trotting towards some equids Ardens recognized as Rasheeka, Asfaloth, Tigress, and Tranquil. She smiled.

"I will never forget you Patch. You will be remembered as the Stallion of the Snows." she whispered before trotting down to meet her mother.

The chilly winter wind stole her words and carried it across the landscape, coming to rest in the hearts and minds of the equid owners across the globe. What Ardens said was true, for we will never forget you, Stallion of the Snows.
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Re: WME: Red Chestnut Splash

Postby ☆ ★TARDIS » Thu Jul 19, 2012 10:00 am

I shall get myself a spot.

Username: Nazgul
Equid's name: WIP
Short story: WIP
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Re: WME: Red Chestnut Splash

Postby Lilian Nightshade » Thu Jul 19, 2012 10:00 am

Username: Lilian Nightshade
Equid's name: Koriander
Short story:

(For the story I be using my equid Richard)

It was morning, the still weak rays of sunlight washing the mountains with their warmth. In a day like that, with a sky so blue and cloudless and with the sun radiating life, any animal would be awake already, doing its tasks in the nature, running, searching for food or even playing around.

Well, any animal but a certain young equine.

There she was, the equid. She was lying on the floor of a very small cave, her tail curled around her body tightly as she slept soundly. She looked so peaceful and relaxed that anybody would think she could continue asleep for the whole day. However, the cave entrance wasn’t narrow enough to prevent the sunlight from invading her rocky, dark home, and the mare let out a quiet grunt as the warm tongues of energy touched her closed eyes.

“Come on, I want to sleep.” She mumbled, shifting so the irritating light could leave her small form alone. The effort wasn’t very successful, though, and soon she felt the warmth on her coat once more. To interrupt her slumber even more, the soft chirping of the birds that had just woken up could already be heard everywhere outside her home, making her long ears instinctively flick around wildly. Those creatures must have been eager to greet the sun, she thought. The equid quickly buried her head between her front legs as her last attempt to return to her dreams.

And, of course, it didn’t work. In fact, her attempt was interrupted once more, this time by a familiar, male voice.

“Kori? Kori! Are you asleep?”

“No, I’m training for when I die.” She mumbled, buried her head further between her legs. “Go away, Richard. I want peace.” She felt the warm light touch her skin again and shrugged slightly, the rocky room becoming silent. Maybe Richard had really left, she thought...

Well, the spell was broken the moment a wave of gelid water suddenly crashed against her face and neck, causing her eyes to shoot open and her body to jump suddenly, so suddenly her back hit the low ceiling of the small cave she was in with a thud.

“Ow!” Kori quickly ran outside her home, shaking her body wildly to get rid of the cold liquid. Her back was sore from the incident with the cave ceiling, earning a few grunts from her mouth with each move. Once the mare calmed down and took a deep breath, she finally heard the hysterical laughter that echoed behind her, a very familiar laughter, and that made Kori turn around to see what was happening.

And there he was, the young male equid. He was laughing as if he had seen the funniest thing in the world(what was probably true) and had a large, wet leaf lying by his side. Realization shone in her green eyes as she imagined Richard dipping that leaf in the water of a river that ran nearby, carrying it to her cave and then spilling its contents on her face. “Richard, you little...”

Richard never thought an equine could growl, but Koriander’s voice tone made him consider that possibility. With that, in a quick move, he turned around and galloped away, his laughter never ceasing. “Come catch me, if you can!” He shouted. Kori, of course, couldn’t let such an opportunity escape her, and with a smirk, she sped off towards Richard. Her cave disappeared behind her running body as she approached more and more the stallion, a new world forming before her, filled with mountains and bright green camps.

Right then, she couldn’t remember why she wanted to keep sleeping at all.

The pair soon lost track of time, they couldn’t tell if they had run for minutes or hours. The only things that mattered for them right then were their laughter and the sound of the small hooves that touched the hard soil, releasing a faint crunching sound with each step. Their chase only ceased when Kori finally managed to reach the young stallion and bite on one of his long ears, pulling it to her and making Richard lose his balance completely.

With that, Richard fell, rolling on the ground twice and stopping on his back, laying close to a small river that descended from the mountains. He spit a few patches of grass he had accidentally swallowed in his fall and suddenly heard a soft giggle by his side. When he turned to the direction of the voice, Kori was smirking and trying to stop her giggles. “See what happens when you try to drown a lady?”

“Oh, sorry if I almost drowned you to death with a leaf of water.” He replied, rolling his eyes and standing on his legs. His tongue was still itchy because of the grass, but he ignored it.

“You may not have drowned me, but I was trying to sleep, that was still a low blow.”

“Well, what could be better than spending your time with me instead of sleeping?” He joked, earning an eye roll from her, and took a few steps in her direction.

“Do you really want me to respond?” Kori approached the river and took a few gulps of fresh water. All that running had made her thirsty and she couldn’t resist once she took notice of the thick stream of the liquid.

Richard saw that and suddenly his ears flicked upwards as an idea hit his mind “Actually, no.” He responded, getting even closer and in a slow, careful pace. Kori quickly lifted her head and narrowed her eyes at him, suspicious. “Tell me, Koriander, are you really that scared of water?”

“I’m not scared!” She exclaimed. Her voice full of irritation. “I bet not even you would like to be woken up with a jet of cold water.”

“Oh, really?” He was circling her now, a wide smirk visible on his equine lips. “Then prove that.”

“... How?”

“Like this!” And with a sudden movement, Richard threw his body on his friend’s and pushed Kori into the small river with a loud splash. The river was quite shallow, the water only managing to reach her shoulder, still, since Kori was startled, the mare struggled to get back to the shore, leaning on the her front hooves as she approached the grassy area and taking deep breaths.

Richard was laughing wildly once more, not even paying attention as she jumped from the water and bit hard on his tail. “Time for the payback!” In a matter of seconds, the stallion was pulled to the river, gasping for air and struggling for a moment as Kori observed with a wide smile how helpless he looked. It didn’t take long for him to recompose himself, tough.

And with that, both equids spent the rest of the morning playing in the river, splashing each other wildly, jumping in the water and even trying to chase a few unlucky small fish that crossed their way, being drawn by the weak current.

They were soaked wet by the time evening came, but they couldn’t care less. That morning had been just too enjoyable for them to pay attention to such details.
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Re: WME: Red Chestnut Splash

Postby Butter Dragon » Thu Jul 19, 2012 10:00 am

Username: BCL
Equid's name: G'reth
Short story: The day was slow and the going was easy and the four year old female G’reth was as happy as could be. Shiniko was leaping around like… Like… Nothing G’reth had every seen. “What.. What are you doing Shiniko?” G’reth inquired. “What?!” Shiniko said surprised to see G’reth right behind her. “I uh… I” Said Shiniko embarrassed. “Berries?” Said G’reth changing the subject. “Where?” asked Shiniko looking around. “Fallow me!” So Shiniko did fallow much to her disappointment. “You weren’t eating these where you?” Shiniko asked. G’reth turned around with big eyes and a stuffed mouth. “Yes… Is… That…. Bad?” G’reth said between bites. Shiniko’s face went pale. “Those berries are called Bulleddeg berries. If I’m right then we have 7 days before….” Shiniko stopped. “Before I die.” G’reth finished. Shiniko looked down in desspare. “Well if I’m gonna die I’m gonna die good.” “What?” Shinko looked puzzled. “Every herd of a buket list?”

1. “I don’t understand. Why are we on this cliff?” Shiniko asked. “Because we are gonna jump.” “JUMP?!” Shinko repeated. We already made a soft landing. “But but…” And before Shinko could finish. Shove went G’reths head poof went the snow and down went Shiniko. “Wait for me!” G’reth shouted. “Were are you Shiniko?” G’reth said once he plooped down. “Blu.. Pff!” Shiniko replied spiting out snow. G’reth looked at Shiniko and smilled.

2. “I’m not gonna do it!” G’reth said. “Hey! You pushed me of a cliff now its my turn.” I ain’t gonna poke a bear” “Just go in its cave then. “ Shiniko said. G’reth mumbled under his breth and went in. 2 seconds later out came G’reth… And a bear.
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“Quickest get away ever recorded!” G’reth looked at Shiniko and smilled.
3. “Leaping. This I could take to.” Shiniko said. “Well then lets get started. The biggest casam was about 10 feet away from where Shiniko and G’reth where standing. First a walk then a trot then a gallop and finally a run. Closer and closer and closer the they jumed. “Yahoo!” G’reth and Shiniko yelled together. G’reth looked at Shiniko and smilled

4. “Swimming?! I can’t!” “Neaither can I Shiniko. But if I’m gonna die….” “Fine! but just a dip!” *Splash* G’reth jumped in. After a while Shiniko came gradually in aswell. G’reths legs started to weakin so they got out and shook off. G’reth looked at Shiniko and smilled.

5. “Eating a fruit.” G’reth reapeted many times to herself. “From the top.” Shiniko reminded her. “From the top.” G’reth reapeated. “From the top.” They found the smallest tree wich was easily robbed of its top fruit but G’reth was still proud. G’reth looked at Shiniko and smilled.

6. “What now?” Shiniko asked. “Is tomarrow a full moon?” Asked G’reth. “Yea…….” “I’ve got an idea!” G’reth looked at Shiniko and smilled.

7. The next day… Uh night, They went to the tip top of Equid mountain and felt the moons light rush through them. Nothing went on between the exept that G’reth looked at Shiniko and smilled.

Conclusion:
Word spred quickly from equid to equid about G’reth and soon word reached the wise old equid who replied and I quote: “ This my good friend is a duffle berry bush. Commenly mistaken for its poisonous cousin but the duffle berries are completely harmless.”

G’reth and Shiniko looked at each other…. And both smilled.

(Done!!!!)
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Re: WME: Red Chestnut Splash

Postby LadyCrowsong » Thu Jul 19, 2012 10:01 am

Username: Lemur-Flight
Equid's name: Kyra
Short story:
They say that true love can overcome anything; that it always wins. There are so many love stories out there, and here's another one. Hopefully, this one a bit more unique than the rest.

There was once a herd of horses, mostly mustangs, that belonged to a couple. Most of the horses were solid colored, little bits of white on their faces or legs. Out of the browns of the herd came a foal with the color of flame; his name was Blaze. Around the same time he was born a young paint female was born (to the only pinto in the herd) and her name was Shasta. The pair grew up together, but one day the herd was sold off. Only Blaze and his mother remained with the couple that owned them.
Blaze's love was gone. He had no idea where she was or why she had been given away.
Years passed. Blaze would often neigh as loud as he could, hoping to get some response from Shasta. If only she could hear him, if only she could cry back. Finally, he had had enough. The blazing boy jumped the fence and ran, letting his burning heart guide him.
He ran and ran until he reached the mountains and then, it happened: he heard a feminine cry. He stopped and looked around, gasping for breath. His heart skipped a beat as Shasta came galloping to him. The lovers greeted each other.
All seemed well, as if life would be perfect since they now had each other. But...something was missing.
Blaze was a gelding and so the pair would never be able to have their own foals.

Or would they?

The two shared such love that another being simply could not go unformed. But, Blaze and Shasta could not create another horse. Where they lived there were other creatures running around; other horse-like creatures. These were equids.

And one day, Blaze and Shasta caught a glimpse of an equid foal, a young filly, with a coat of flames like Blaze's and minimal white markings like Shasta's, not to mention the circle around the eye that Shasta had.
Their love had created another being. Another beautiful, special, horse-like being.

--ADORE this girl; she made my jaw drop!
And, just so you know, Blaze and Shasta are real horses and the markings described on them are how they really look.
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Re: WME: Red Chestnut Splash

Postby lemondropkitten » Thu Jul 19, 2012 10:01 am

I would try, but I have my heart set on the Classic Champagne <3

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Re: WME: Red Chestnut Splash

Postby Cupid » Thu Jul 19, 2012 10:02 am

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Re: WME: Red Chestnut Splash

Postby AmigoGirl » Thu Jul 19, 2012 10:02 am

Bella's corgi love wrote:What about? Any thing or the equid?



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Re: WME: Red Chestnut Splash

Postby wildly-unaware » Thu Jul 19, 2012 10:04 am

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Equid's name: Fire at heart (Fire)
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Le Wip~

What a gorgeous mare Amigo!
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