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by DeMaizu » Wed Apr 20, 2016 2:58 pm
These last few pages got really gory all of a sudden . . . . .
So, uh, advice needed. With history. The world I'm writing about is *tentatively* basically Earth . . . . . With supernatural beings. Humanity is maybe like, oh . . . a fifth of the sentient population? I want make some changes in history, but I'm not sure what or how to change the event(s). For example, I know for sure that I want to change the slavery thing? So that it wasn't just black people, but humans in general. Well, not humans in general, but the weaker species'. But I don't know if I want to change famous names from being human to being supernatural or not, or whether natural disasters were caused by supernaturals or one supernatural out of control. Help?
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by Ranger of the North » Wed Apr 20, 2016 4:03 pm
DeMaizu wrote:These last few pages got really gory all of a sudden . . . . .
So, uh, advice needed. With history. The world I'm writing about is *tentatively* basically Earth . . . . . With supernatural beings. Humanity is maybe like, oh . . . a fifth of the sentient population? I want make some changes in history, but I'm not sure what or how to change the event(s). For example, I know for sure that I want to change the slavery thing? So that it wasn't black people, but humans in general. Well, not humans in general, but the weaker species'. But I don't know if I want to change famous names from being to human to being supernatural or not, or whether natural disasters were caused by supernaturals or one supernatural out of control. Help?
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by L.V.L » Wed Apr 20, 2016 4:07 pm
Am I the only one who hates how you have this whole story line plotted out, you've even got Boulton Points made for it.
But then you go and sit down, but you have No Idea how to Begin or even End the dang story.
*literally me right now*
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by DeMaizu » Wed Apr 20, 2016 4:15 pm
MexicanGrizzlyBear wrote:Am I the only one who hates how you have this whole story line plotted out, you've even got Boulton Points made for it.
But then you go and sit down, but you have No Idea how to Begin or even End the dang story.
*literally me right now*
*waves hand around emphatically* MEE!!!!
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by montmorency » Wed Apr 20, 2016 4:22 pm
MexicanGrizzlyBear wrote:Am I the only one who hates how you have this whole story line plotted out, you've even got Boulton Points made for it.
But then you go and sit down, but you have No Idea how to Begin or even End the dang story.
*literally me right now*
*hand darts up*
This is my writing life. Like I have random plot points and a story line, but no way to begin, end, or even what some of the filler is!
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