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Re: The Land of Syegaria {Fantasy Specieses WIP}

Postby IzzyBee » Tue Jan 25, 2011 2:35 am

*Watches* Hurry up, I'm getting impatient..No not really..X3
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Re: The Land of Syegaria {Fantasy Specieses WIP}

Postby TheSilverfeather » Tue Jan 25, 2011 2:36 am

*Hurries* My computer is slow D:
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Re: The Land of Syegaria {Fantasy Specieses WIP}

Postby IzzyBee » Tue Jan 25, 2011 2:40 am

*Pats back* No need to be slow computer...*Looks at computer* GO FASTER...
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Re: The Land of Syegaria {Fantasy Specieses WIP}

Postby TheSilverfeather » Tue Jan 25, 2011 3:03 am

*Uploads and puts on first page* There :3 A little female this time, will make maybe one more so that there is a few to choose from ;)
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Re: The Land of Syegaria {Fantasy Specieses WIP}

Postby IzzyBee » Tue Jan 25, 2011 4:01 am

Beautiful..I love it!

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Name of Serenche:Diferente, Pronounced: Dee-feh-REN-tay, it's in Spanish. Or just Different, she also goes by Alessia
Personality:Different is a interesting little one, her history had much to do with her own mental state. She can be quite unpredictable, one moment she can be cuddly and sweet, the next she can be mean and snobby. All you can tell from her is how she is feeling by the way she act, if she is angered she usually has a grudge against someone, or is she is being cuddly, she could be depressed and sad about something. She likes to be alone most of her time, thinking herself through and trying to figure out where she went wrong back when she was little that made her the way she is. 'Normal' the word always makes her angry, she was never normal, she always knew that...
History:
The fog cleared from the forest, the dark dense forest was full of life, but the hunters were here...

Us

My parents were lowly Omegas, actually my mom was, my dad was a loner with a shady past, he dared show his face in our group, I never knew why, but my mom always told me he was a trader that brought resources to groups for a price and that's when he fell in love with my mother, she was a beautiful Serenche, her coat was silky smooth as I remember, the golden markings made the Alphas intimidated by her, they always thought she possessed a certain power to influence others, but her parents left her alone only to be found by the Alphas who took her in, but made her Omega cause they feared her unknown power. He just strode into camp, a dark golden-eyed Serenche, he brought beautiful things or jewels, something called silver, gold, all of these things...

"Who are you? You seem so..Empowered.." He asked her, his tail twitching side to side as he looked over her.

"Magnolia..Who are you?" She replied her body in a submissive posture, she looked up at him, her light yellow eyes glared at him.

"That you do not need to know.." He said his teeth starting to show, his white teeth, some were missing. She still stood here, "Come now.." He said turning and started walking into the forest, as dark as ever.

The Alphas never knew what happened to Magnolia, they just thought she 'dissapeared' because of the strange trader. She never did actually 'dissapear' she ran off with the trader, she never did know his name, he never gave it to her, for he feared that she and his pup would be killed for his own actions..He never wanted anything to happen to her..

"Magnolia! Run!! Take the pup with you!!" He yelled as the fire licked up the forest, he couldn't escape, he knew she could, but he wouldn't make it. He picked up the small pup and handed it to her, "Go now.." He coughed as the smoke he inhaled burned his lungs.

"No i'm not leaving without you!" She yelled over the flames gasping for air as the smoke got thicker, she had no choice she pressed her face to his and then ran out of the forest into a clearing, her feet sore from the hot ground she still gasped for air as she held the small white pup in her mouth, she then collapsed onto her side her breaths choppy and hard as she layed on the ground, her fur burned to her skin, it stung the pain so intense she was dizzy to the point where she thought she'd pass out...

Magnolia was soon awoken the sharp pain and water on herself, her eyes shot open and she saw two old looking Serenches, one a sickening green pelt with matted fur, and a dark blue one both looked over her, "You awake now?" The one asked, her voice raspy.

"Wha- Who are you?" Magnolia asked trying to sit up, "Where's my pup?" She asked starting to look for her frantically.

"You mean Differente?" The dark blue one asked a bit away walking towards a hollow tree, immense in size, she watched as the dark blue Serenche picked up the gray and orange with others mixed in.. The Serenche walked back over to Magnolia and dropped the pup in of her.

"What? That's not my pup?" She said to them both. She examined the now gray, orange, and aqua pup

"Yes she was pure white, but her fur sadly is permanent gray..We pained the orange and aqua markings and such...." The green one said to Magnolia her voice getting raspier as she spoke.

"You painted her?" Magnolia exclaimed.

"Yes, she needs to be painted just like every Serenche should.." The dark blue one muttered.

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"I know i'm different mom..Why won't you let me go and play with the others?" Different whined, she folded her black wings to her back and looked at her mom.

"Yes, but we don't want anyone getting hurt.." Magnolia said to the large pup, Different had grown about twice as fast as all the other pups, her horn also was hazard for the others.

"But mom...." She whined, she looked up at her mom her blue eyes wide she pouted.

"Fine go and play with the other pups.." Magnolia said finally laying down on her side and watching Different as she ran out of the den into the light.
Magnolia had returned to her group once Different and herself were both healed from the fire, she never let males near her pup, she despised the males now, her heart belonged to her deceased mate, she learned to call him 'NoName' but he never did tell her his own name.

"Okay i'm back!" Different smiled wide as the other pups looked up at her, her immense size made her fun to play with.

"You like that horn on your head don't you.." A teen sneered from behind her, Different spun around to meet a large white male Serenche, she growled softly, "I for the record love my horn and wings.." She said lifting her head to the male, " And I assume you don't.." She challenged, she got into a ready position.

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She stood over the body of the white teenager, "You deserved that.." She spat, her mother soon trotted towards her, "What did you do?!?" Her mother asked exasperated.

"He made me mad, so he offered to fight to the death, and I won.." She said to her mother, she lifted her head and smirked softly.

"Go to the den now.." Her mother said through tight teeth.

"Fineee..." Different said not really meaning it as she walked back the the den all the others started at her in fear, they backed away as she took every step with a meaningful thought.

"You can't just kill other Serenches becasue they made you mad.." Her mother trying to change her daughters mind.

"Mom, it's who I am! You can't change that!" Different raised her voice, she looked away from her mother.

"Sweetie, just don't kill anymore Serenches in the group.." She asked her daughter her voice soft.

"Mom, you can ask me, but you can't change my mind!" She yelled pinning her mother down, her forceful paw on her mother's chest, her mouth inches from her mother's throat, "I'll be myself always, you can never make me change..Even if it means me being alone.." She muttered.

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Different sat on a cliff over looking a valley, a soft breeze brushed her fur, she sighed softly and looked back, "I'm never going back..mother wouldn't care where I went anyways.." She muttered, "She's gone now..So are those other meddling Serenches.." She said, she looked over her shoulder and saw nothing but forest, trees, bushes. She sighed softly and heard rustling in the bushes, she whirled around and looked to see what and who it was, "Who dares disturb me?" She challenged.

A dark Serenche emerged from the bush,"I see you survived the fire..And your mother didn't.." She golden eyes looked her over.

"What are you talking about, my mother dies, I killed her.." She said through clenched teeth.

"You killed your own mother..Well I guess she would have rejected me after the fire that almost made me die.." His raspy voice made the words ring in her ears.

"You don't know who I am do you?" She asked him, her blue eyes looking the Serenche over.

"You don't know? I'm your very flesh and blood..The one who raised you for some time.." He hissed at her, his teeth starting to show in a snarl.

"You're my-my father?" She asked him, starting to shake.

"Yes, your own kin, and I guess since Magnolia is dead..Thanks to you, you are all alone with me.." He hissed at her still, he looked at him, "And how did you grow these tings called 'wings and a horn'" He asked her.

"I've had them, it was just never visible when you saw me last.." She said to him, starting to straighten up.

"Then let's go explore the lands together..Father and daughter.." He said stepping closer, his movements like a shadow.

"No..I'm not coming!" She answered raising her voice.

"Then force must be applied.." He snarled and jumped at her in a clash of claws she pushed her father off, accidentally pushing him off in the opposite direction, off the cliff...

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Different now known as Alessia sat alone in a empty den, she felt the tears stream down her face and drop onto the rock ground, she closed her eyes, sober of loosing all of her family, "I have no one left, no siblings, no parents..Nothing.." She muttered to herself, then she heard paw steps outside, she didn't dare look to see what or who it was, she still sat there tears lingering in her blue eyes.

"Why are you crying?" A soft male voice came from the den entrance.

She still sat there but opened her eyes to a male Serenche, he was light blue, like the sky with the looks of it glowing yellow spots on him, "I'm just alone.." She said softly after mustering the strength to even say anything.


"Well if you are alone, may I join you?" He asked padding to her side softly.

"Why do I even bother...I'm so Different..." She said softly, not casting a glance at him.

"You seem fine to me, Different is better than being normal.." He said softly looking at her.

"Don't use that word.." She muttered, she looked at him and said, "Why do you even bother coming to me?" She asked him.

"I was out exploring, and I heard you crying, so I thought I might come and see if you were alright.." He said to her softly, "By the way i'm Lithuka, but you can call me Lu.." He said with a warm smile on his face.

Alessia had never seen a smile, let a lone know what it meant, "I'm Alessia, or Diferente, or Different...Whatever you'd like to call me..But I prefer to be left alone, thinking about where I went wrong with myself.." She said trying to smile back to him.

"Well I think you are Unique.."

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Alessia raced through the forest light on her feet, she smiled wide Lithuka at her side running just a bit faster than her she laughed, "You'll never catch me!" She yelled panting a bit, she quickened her pace and lowered her head softly, trying to make herself go faster.

Then there was a shriek behind her, loud and sounded familiar, Lu was no longer at her side, "Lu? Where are you?" She called out then heard loud yelps again, she retraced her steps quickly and saw Lu stuck in something that looked like a big bear trap, his foot was limp in the trap, it must have crushed his bone, she whimpered and padded to him, she looked his paw over, "Can you get out?" She asked tears starting to come to her eyes.

"I-I don't know Alessia.." He whimpered as he tried to pull a bit, "But the hunters probably left the trap to catch us..But you need to go, they can take me, but I don't want them getting you.." He said his voice soft, he tried to step closer but the trap restrained him.

Alessia whimpered her ears flat to her skull she stepped forward and pressed her face to him, "I'll never forget you Lu.." She whispered to him, she looked him in the eye and licked his cheek softly then heard something in the trees.

"Now! Go!!" Lithuka barked, he whimpered loudly again.

"I'll never forget you Lu.." She said to herself as she turned and ran away in fear, what was to become of him, why did the hunters want Lu?

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Alone...Again...Why is this always...

Not done yet!!
Which Cage?:Cage 2
Other: Wow, good story in my opinion, I changed the Serenche I was going for, I thought the story would fit better for her..Thank you so much for letting me try for her!
I listened to this song while I wrote, it's my color guard song but I love it anyways:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j2QXLlzsgoY
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Re: The Land of Syegaria {Fantasy Specieses WIP}

Postby TheSilverfeather » Tue Jan 25, 2011 4:37 am

Ooh, love the story :3
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Re: The Land of Syegaria {Fantasy Specieses WIP}

Postby IzzyBee » Tue Jan 25, 2011 4:45 am

SilverFeather wrote:Ooh, love the story :3

Thank you, it's not finished, i'll add more later..
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Re: The Land of Syegaria {Fantasy Specieses WIP}

Postby TheSilverfeather » Tue Jan 25, 2011 5:11 am

That's fine, the story is great so far! ;)
I'm also adding a new Serenche (female) soon, which will be rather... Unique...
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Re: The Land of Syegaria {Fantasy Specieses WIP}

Postby IzzyBee » Tue Jan 25, 2011 5:13 am

SilverFeather wrote:That's fine, the story is great so far! ;)
I'm also adding a new Serenche (female) soon, which will be rather... Unique...

Gosh, if I like the other one better can I edit my story a bit for that one..Just asking..
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Re: The Land of Syegaria {Fantasy Specieses WIP}

Postby TheSilverfeather » Tue Jan 25, 2011 5:16 am

Sure ;) I don't mind who you try for ^^
Besides, this one IS Unique ;3
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