ravenmoon wrote:When customs open, will normal trackers have 'eyes'?
They can have eyelike markings, but the normal ones will not have eyes.
bluedogonalog wrote:BookMarking. :3 I love these new tackers. ^^
Thanks. :D
ravenmoon wrote:When customs open, will normal trackers have 'eyes'?
bluedogonalog wrote:BookMarking. :3 I love these new tackers. ^^
Nex wrote:ravenmoon wrote:When customs open, will normal trackers have 'eyes'?
They can have eyelike markings, but the normal ones will not have eyes.bluedogonalog wrote:BookMarking. :3 I love these new tackers. ^^
Thanks. :D
Abi_the_lionXP wrote:Tracker Dog Application Series 1
Username: [color=#008080Abi_the_lionXP][/color]
Tracker Dog you want:1 :)
Name you'll give it: Casmiro (Italian, Portuguese, and Spanish form of Latin Casimiria, meaning "commands peace.")
Reason why you want it: He. Is. A. Beaut. Also ,a story strolled on into my head with the self important swagger of a guard tracker at a maximum security prison ;)
Will it be used in any kind of story?: yes, it hasn’t been posted on here, but i have started typing up my original tracker (Serenity) and i think its time there was another one to mix things up, i shall also do him his own story up to the merging of the two.
Describe its personality: Cocky, proud, self important, calm, iron willed, loyal, initiative, patient, doesn’t really relax when off the job. He doesn't do too well in large crowds which makes him useless in prison riots, however- he can control a crowd of up to 37 and herd them (like sheep) back into there cells. When near other trackers- he wouldn’t join in on games of fetch or race around after them, but prefers to sit down and let his authority wash over them until they are submissive. He doesn’t take any cr*p and if someone challenges his authority he will not back down.
Write an introduction for your Tracker: morning rounds, doors open and cell mates are woken. In strolls an Italian prison officer leading a tracker dog. Absent minded smiles played on even the toughest inmates as they noted the tracker. He was like them... an outcast, only good for one thing. They bent down and ruffled his shaggy hind quarters as he passed there cells, slowing a little to allow them more time to comfort themselves. “c’mon then Cass. Inmates will keep there hands at their sides at all times, Cass will be around during the day so you can pet him then.” The guard said. He pitied them, the inmates- his father was once one of the heads of the mafia, before him and his brother, uncle Giovanni, was shot by cops. He was determined not to be like his father and joined the police. Michael... Casmiro thought- rolling it around his head, until a week ago- he was kept in the kennels with the other dogs, mainly German shepherds and Doberman. But after he had attacked, and killed one of the Doberman he had been assigned to Michael.
Michael... I like Michael. Cas thought to himself, flicking his tongue and testing the air for banned substances like cocaine or steel from a makeshift blade- who’s particles always seemed to be waiting for Cas’s tongue to taste there presence. He hoped Michael wouldn’t leave, as a tracker he didn’t know why the human’s left- but he had been through seven different guards in his time. The old man that always smelt of tobacco, the twitchy “man” who was barely out of pup hood himself, one eyed frank, he was blind in one eye... yes many guards none like Michael though.
Cas caught the scent of pheromones and sure enough, a female was waiting downstairs. She had with her an unfamiliar scent- one he hadn’t smelt for a long time... another tracker. Michael lead him downstairs to where the female and the tracker (also female) waited seemingly for them. There was however a familiar smell about the woman, he flicked his tongue and was sure he had smelt it around the apartment... particularly around the bedroom and the kitchen. He proceeded to smell the female tracker as was protocol for when new canines came in. I wouldn’t do that if I were you...she growled, her purple markings flashing, sending a wave of heat rolling over him. He curled his upper lip, the equivalent to a sneer, and who are you to tell me what to do? he challenged, drawing himself up to his full height- for he was tall for a tracker. Well, we wouldn’t want you to burn your nose now, I'm sure you’ll need it for all the, uh, “tracking” you need to do in here... she chuckled not rising to his challenge, but settling on the floor by her owners feet licking her paw. Cas barked challengingly, receiving a sharp tug on his leash from Michael, “Casmiro no.” He ordered, accompanying it with another tug. Cas growled, “So I’ll come round your place tonight then? Should I bring Ren? I'm sure they could keep each other company whilst we’re out”, she said with a mischievous smile playing on her lips. “Yes, that’d be a good idea” he said, smiling, taking her hand. Ahh, Cas thought, she’s his mate! He paid attention to the fluctuations in her hormone levels and endorphins. “Amber, honey they’ve gotta call for you in the office- I think its your boss” said a nasily fat woman whose face and neck fat was hanging out of a doorframe smiling. “Thanks Darla, I’ll be there in a sec, umm... so I’ll see you later” she said kissing him on the cheek. “I look forward to it” he said smiling and blushing at the wolf whistles from his colleagues. See you round... the female tracker whispered as she trotted off after her owner.
Umm so I know there’s not much action but that will be yet to come if I get him :) :L ♥
Nex wrote:Alright guys, before I continue, I need a know a few things.
1. Is the size of the Trackers alright? Would anyone rather have them smaller/larger?
2. Is the shading okay? Not too dark or too bland?
3. Any particular flaws that you have noticed in the Trackers?
I've seen quite some flaws and anatomy errors myself, and eventually I'll work on a final version of the lineart that I'll be content with. But it doesn't hurt to get critique. (:
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