Tracker Dogs V2.0 [Series 20]

[OhuWarrior92]

Tracker Dog Application Series 1
Username:Toad Lover
Tracker Dog you want:#1
Name you'll give it: Senro
Reason why you want it: He's so cute, and has the perfect markings!

Will it be used in any kind of story? Probably.
Describe its personality:

Write an introduction for your Tracker: Senro loped along the trail of a deer, his paws silent against the fallen leaves. The scent was fresh, he hardly had to scent the trail. As he was passing a birch tree, he felt something on his paw.His instinct took over, and he tried to tug it free. Next thing he knew, e was dangling in the sir, the tags on his collar tinking together. A man stepped out from behind a bush. Senro growled; he hated the looks of this man with the cameo outfit, knife, and rifle. The man stared at him, pulled out his knife, and stepped closer. Senro growled louder, warning this man that any pain inflicted on him would be dealt right back. The man paid no heed, and Senro could hear him mumbling something. "Lazy townsfolk, letting their dogs run lose." From a distance, he cut the rope holding Senro to the tree. Senro leaped to his feet and treid to run, but he was jerked back. The man had hold of the rope in his hands. "Steady there. I'm gonna return you to your owners." Carefully pulling Senro towards him, the man took out a string of twine. Then, with surprising speed, pinned Senro down and tied his mouth shut. The he took hold of the collar and looked at the tags. "Blank? What kind of joke is this?" He said scratching his head. "Well, you might as well come home with me, seeing you've got nowhere else to go." Untying the twine, he stood up and gently yanked on the leash. Senro growled a bit, but when the man offered him a piece of meat, gladly obeyed. The man smiled and laughed, and led Senro away to his new home.

((This is my first time doing this, so if it's weird, that's why.))

[Aki~]

any clue when a stealth guy will come around...

Nope. I haven't the foggiest.

Because he's so damn good at his job. Oh yeah.

Hahahahahahaha!!!! I get it... After a whole page....

[DoctorDraca]

Alright guys, before I continue, I need a know a few things.

1. Is the size of the Trackers alright? Would anyone rather have them smaller/larger?
2. Is the shading okay? Not too dark or too bland?
3. Any particular flaws that you have noticed in the Trackers?

I've seen quite some flaws and anatomy errors myself, and eventually I'll work on a final version of the lineart that I'll be content with. But it doesn't hurt to get critique. (:

[Not me nope]

Actually, i like the shading style;3
I think that phraps I like all trackers with no eyes at all; but thats my opinion;3

the size is fine as I can shrink it myselfx3

[Chara Dreemurr]

Alright guys, before I continue, I need a know a few things.

1. Is the size of the Trackers alright? Would anyone rather have them smaller/larger?
2. Is the shading okay? Not too dark or too bland?
3. Any particular flaws that you have noticed in the Trackers?

I've seen quite some flaws and anatomy errors myself, and eventually I'll work on a final version of the lineart that I'll be content with. But it doesn't hurt to get critique. (:

1. If it's to big, I know how to shrink it. But it looks siggy size.
2. The shading is amazing!
3. Really? You've seen some?

[DoctorDraca]

Psh, you guys. Stop making me blush.

Also, I'll be giving away the first Tracker today so.. finish off your forms so I can start judging. :D

[Chara Dreemurr]

Good luck to all!

[Dradogo]

Good luck to everyone who has applied for the first Trackers of the second generation! Your forms are all really interesting and have some good storylines to them. :3

[Chara Dreemurr]

When customs open, will normal trackers have 'eyes'?

[Keero]

BookMarking. :3 I love these new tackers. ^^