Y282(rd) by meerkatgirl

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Y282(rd)

Postby meerkatgirl » Thu Jan 20, 2011 10:42 am

Originally, this dog was inspired by a deck of cards sitting on my desk, but then I failed at drawing it changed my mind XD

To adopt this dog, fill out the form with the correct numbers, word, or link, by replacing blanks and words in parentheses. Write a story after the '...' The only catch is that you cannot name it the genaric Yin, Yang, Yin Yang, ect.

Here are some things to remember about the form and story, based on already submitted forms...

-I've gotten a lot of forms submitted with a timeline of the dog's life for the story. It has to be a real story!
-Remember, they are robots, they do not feel pain, happiness, sadness, ect. They are keen on revenge though, and will go great lengths to hurt the scientists, lab assistants, ect.
-They cannot be injured or killed, and they have no fur! Please remember this! I've gotten a lot of stories with these in it, which either means my writing in the first post was unclear, or people didn't read it.
-No, they can't be your fursona's mate/pup, and no, your fursona can't be a robotic dog too. They can know your fursona, though robotic dogs do not exactly make friends, because of the no emotion issue stated above ^^ They are mostly loners, and few live in a pack of any other breed.

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I would like to adopt T282(rd)! I would like to re-name it (yes/no). It's new name will be __________ (if applicable). It is a (male/female). I will give you this (link) uncommon+ wishlist pet for it. A story involving this dog is...
It started and ended with a man.
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Re: Y282(rd)

Postby Silvertongue » Thu Jan 20, 2011 11:44 am

I would like to adopt T282(rd)! I would like to re-name it, yes. Its new name will be Split. It is a female. I will give you this (http://www.chickensmoothie.com/viewpet.php?id=25467606) uncommon+ wishlist pet for it. A story involving this dog is...

I creeped forward, the wires and gears that made up the muscles of my legs coiling together as I prepared to spring, my blind silver and black eyes focused on my prey, a simple human scientist...male I think, though I was never very good at telling apart humans..especially since I had to rely only on smell. I bared sharp razor-like fangs as I waited for the perfect moment to move from my hiding spot, for a moment I thought my chance wouldn't come but then the scientist turned around, my ears twitching at the shift of fabric. With a sudden snarl, sounding more viscious than a real dog's due to the fact that my vocal cords were electronic, I jumped at the man's unprotected back, landing on his shoulders squarely and forcing him to the ground with my superior wieght. "Say goodbye whitecoat...this is for everything you've done to us!" I snarled, though I knew he would only hear it as a serious of barks and growls, before I sunk unnatural metal teeth into his windpipe. He struggled feebly, his arms flailing around in a pathetic attempt to escape...though I had a feeling he already knew his life had ended whether he escaped or not he would still die from loss of blood. With a guttural growl that could have only been described as feral I snapped my jaws together, immediatley severing the human's life thread. Removing my now bloodied jaws the first thing I did was spit the blood out of my mouth and onto the ground. 'Fowl tasting stuff...'I grumbled before jumping in surprise as a woman screamed from behind. "Damn...I was hoping I'd be able to escape before getting caught so soon." I barked outloud, the woman seeming to freeze in fear and...something else...at the sound. "Sorry Whitecoat but you're going to have to die now..." I barked to her, my tone almost maniacal. I froze in surprise as the human answered, actually answered, me. "W-why do you want to kill me?!" She sobbed, her fear taking control of her as she sunk to the ground. 'How pitiful...she should at least try to die with honor...' I thought, any feeling I may have had being overrun by the pitiful display as I remebered WHY I wanted revenge so bad on any scientist, or whitecoat. "Because, whitecoat, your kind have all but ruined me..in ways you can hardly understand." I snarled as I jumped at her, not even having to bite into her soft form I snapped her neck with a strong swipe of my metal paw. Staring down at her now-limp form I blinked my blind eyes. "It's because you ruined my eyes." I snarled in answer, though I knew she could no longer hear me. That's right...I'm Split, and though I look, act, and even sound like a boy I am a female in as much ways as a robot can be. A couple years ago, when the lab where us robots where being made exploded, my eyes were ruined by a revenge bent scientist, angry that he should die because of us. Though I wasn't the one to start the fire he still ruined my sight...maybe if he hadn't I wouldn't be so cruel or bent on revenge...maybe I would...I can't really answer that. Though one thing is for sure, sooner or later my hearing and smell aren't going to be able to save me.

*Ok so I decided I'd add this part d: but it's not really part of how I did the original part above and in my opinion I like the first part more XD...I also had trouble with the whole, Split sparing the human thing and also since I don't think I mentioned it the human is supposed to be me...yeah...just wanted to tie in how I 'adopted' her*

I limped slightly as I padded through a forest on the outskirts of a human city...it had been a few days after I'd killed those whitecoats and in my haste to escape I must have caused a gear to shift in my paw because now I walked with a limp..though it didn't hurt it was very annoying and worsened my already handicapped (by her blindness) ability to navigate through unfamiliar areas. I felt myself freeze as the faint sound of a stick snapping reached my ears. Usually I would have procedded with more caution but at this time my actions were hazed with anger at my limp and blindness and the want for revenge and thus I darted forward recklessly, regretting it almost immediatley as I felt cold wires snap around my paws and hoiste me into the air. My paws were tied together and held above me in a thing I'd heard a human call a 'hog tie'...though I was strong the misplaced gear in my limping paw prevented me from moving in the right way and so I couldn't escape, untie myself, or snap the wires...since they seemed to be quiet strong. My electronic mind whirled as I wondered if there were anyways to kill a robotic dog...I had come up with only one so far and that was electrocution...if someone were to press a tazer into my head would it kill me? I wasn't sure and I wasn't going to stick around to find out. Drawing up all the strength in my aritifcial body I surged all my energy to my paws and madly began to snap and /attempted/ to claw at my bindings, surprised when the metal wire holding me loosened and I plumeted to the ground, landing on my back. For barely a moment I was relieved that I had managed to escape but then my circuits froze as I heard a footstep behind me. I whirled around with a feral snarl, jumping towards the sound blindly..my movements powered by rage and desperation. I was suprised when I actually did land on something that I knew immediatley to be a human by its soft oily smell...scenting the underlying smell of perfume I guessed it was a woman. "Don't kill me..." The woman spoke, her voice was odd...it sounded almost...feral, as if she'd been living as an animal herself, though by her soft clothes and scent I could tell she was probably a city liver.
"And why should I?" I snarled towards where I guessed her face was.
"Because I can repair you...I'm a mechanic...I can help your paw and your eyes." She said, her voice surprising me with the fact it held no fear.
"And why would you do that?" I retorted, wanting to be sure this wasn't a trap.
"Because I'd rather repair you than be killed...plus I don't think you're a mindless killing machine...even if you and everyone else does." She answered, her voice snappish at first but gentler on the last two statements. I had no idea what to think...a robot I didn't experience things like happiness or sadness but I had always assumed I was a machine built to kill in both body and mind...the fact she thought I could be good for something else both intrigued and angered me.
"Fine...I won't kill you...but you have to repair me right now!" I snarled, not wanting this stupid human to think I was soft.
"I can't..." She answered, what little temper my robotic mind had flaring at the simple statement.
"And why not!" I snarled, drawing razor sharp, metallic teeth closer to her throat.
"Because I only have my wrench with me...my tools are all back in new york, which is at least a three months travel on foot from here." She answered, her voice still unfaltering despite my intimidating presence.
"Three months...are you sure?" I asked, my mind starting to become more open to the idea...I desperatley wanted to kill this woman who seemed to know so much about me and who showed such interest in me but my want for the return of my eyesight far overpowered the want to kill.
"Almost positive...though perhaps I can drive you a little bit of the way. Of course we'll have to keep a low profile on the way since everyone is looking for you and other like you." She answered. With a sigh I gave in and agreed to her deal, getting off of her as I did so.
"Well follow me...I'll have to go back to where I'm staying so I can get my things...I'm Kioko by the way." She said, her voice was very hyper and she spoke rapidly...it was almost hard for me to keep up.
"Yeah whatever...I'm Split..." I answered irritably...if there was one thing I hadn't planned it was this...
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Re: Y282(rd)

Postby meerkatgirl » Thu Jan 20, 2011 12:00 pm

I love it so, good job!
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Re: Y282(rd)

Postby Silvertongue » Thu Jan 20, 2011 12:50 pm

XD Just edited my first post and finished the story 8D
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Re: Y282(rd)

Postby meerkatgirl » Thu Jan 20, 2011 1:21 pm

You get her! Send the trade with the payment and she's all yours.
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Re: Y282(rd)

Postby Silvertongue » Thu Jan 20, 2011 1:34 pm

X3 Sure thing~ Trade sent
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Re: Y282(rd)

Postby Silvertongue » Fri Feb 11, 2011 8:09 am

c: I finally started up on Split's story...for now I've only added a prologue but I plan to finish this story > link :3
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