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No!
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Yes! (select an option below)
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Because I don't want a character (and I want to replace him/her with a new character)
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Because some people are taking up the character slots and they don't even read the Hawk
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Because I want character slots to be opened quicker (maybe because you want to insert a character)
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby CoolComrade » Thu Sep 03, 2015 1:59 pm

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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby 20lait1 » Thu Sep 03, 2015 5:15 pm

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Dear Hawk,

Living life like an actual normal student isn’t that bad at all. But of course, school. How I hate learning all those random Math facts. When do you think I’ll be using a+b x (c+a-b) x d+a+e in real life?! Plus, I have to face little Miss White-nose again. Ugh.

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Oh-so-pretty-and-perfect Queen Bee. She was moaning about her lipstick and pawnails and everything else today just because she had to sort a bunch of students. Well, I have to get back into the habit of writing down the sortings. So... yeah. Here it comes.

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Snowy: Hmm... I like the pink, and the rose is so romantic too... But what's up with the book and pencil?! Populars carry around lipstick and... well, fashion stuff, you know. Well, let's see.... Name and interests?
???: I'm Turka, a member of the feline family. I have the PPS syndrome, but -
Snowy: Get on with it, Turkey!
Turka: Um, okay... As I was saying, I'm Turka... and I like readingsciencetextbooksandmemorizingchemicalcompounds. *runs off, looking hurt*
Snowy: Ugh. YOU'RE A NERD, TURKEY TURKA WHATEVER YOU ARE!

Snowy's rude... I wonder where she's gone. Ran up a tree or something? I don't know what I should do... Maybe I'll talk with her later. Oh, look. Another girl.

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Snowy: Name. Interests.
???: I - I'm Stella... and I like reading, writing, drawing....
Snowy: Nerds.
Stella: And gaming...
Snowy: Run off to your nerdy friends! You're ruining my perfume scent, you -
Stella: *runs off*

I hate Snowy.

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Snowy: Name and interests? Your dress looks good, by the way, and I like your hair. It's very trendy now - but I prefer to keep my beautiful curls. *flicks hair*
???: I - I'm Ocean Spirit... I - I....
Snowy: Hmm... I don't know. Your dress is too fashionable for you to be in Outcasts or Nerds, and you don't look nerdy... Whatever. Populars.
Ocean: S - swimming... *stands for a second, then wanders off*

I don't know.... She doesn't look mean and... well, Snowy-like.

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Snowy: Rabbit-girl. Or boy. Or -
???: I'm Clémence, girl - you remember that. You know if you forget about a candle and leave it somewhere? It burns your house down. I -
Snowy: Your hairstyle is fashionable, as I said before... Your dress comes from the same brand as Ocean's, right? But you're too rude, and I don't like rude people. Nerds... no, Outcasts!
Clémence: I prank, give others haircuts - you want one? :twisted: - smashing stuff in dumpsters - I'd love to do that with your head - Star Wars games, and other stuff. And you know what? Call 'em Outcats. Sounds cooler. *walks off*
Snowy: W - wait... what did you -

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???: I - uh - I mean, hey, girl! You look... great! You know, fashion and the lot. I'm Nicanyo Night, but I'm totally not an Emo! I love shopping, having sleepovers, and painting my claws.
Snowy: Populars! Even though you spoke first, but you're totally like me, which is... great!
Nicanyo: Thanks! *struts off*

I watched her. Nicanyo turned around and sighed softly, then walked off a bit more... ghostily. (Is that even a word?) I wonder what she really is like. Oh, wait. More students. How many are there?!

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???: *walk - no, slides up*
Snowy: What in the world is wrong with -
???: My name is Victoire, and I am a female, if you cannot see. A cat and raven are my friends, jet black, like the darkness of the night. Edgar and Poe are their names - they are the shadows in the brightest light, the light in the darkness. I swim to the darkest depths, and see deep into you without sight....
Snowy: Wait a second - what did you -
Victoire: *stares at her*
Snowy: Whatever, Emos! Go away!
Victoire: *continues staring*
Snowy: Go! Shoo!
Victoire: Years of love have been forgot in the hatred of a minute. *walks off*
Snowy: *freezes* I - I... L - Le... *stops stuttering* Next!

What was she going to say? I really don't get her...

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???: .....
Snowy: Name and interests. Outcasts.
???: I haven't said much... I'm Joakim, but some call me Jo. I don't mind. I play video games, reading and writing. I'm sure Outcasts are so happy to have you as a 'queen' too... *snorts* I'm Xavier's brother. Now, if you don't mind, I need to find him.
Snowy: .... What?!

.... I suppose he isn't that bad. Xavier's brother? Maybe I have to ask him...

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???: Hey there! I'm Summer Frost, and I love playing Minecraft, the internet, trolling others on PawTube, parties, adventures, and Minecraft!
Snowy: ... You said 'Minecraft' twice. Outcasts.
Summer: Oh yeah! I forgot! Trolling populars and putting videos of that on PawTube!
Snowy: Whatever - wait, what?!
Summer: *skips off*

She's pretty cool... Maybe another copy of Cinders? I might have to introduce them to each other. S - Wait a second, SPLASH?!

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Snowy: I -
Splash: Hi there! I'm Splash, and I love gaming, drawing, and pretty much being online!
Snowy: ... Stop interrupting me. Your.... fur patterns aren't too bad, so... whatever. Nerds.
Splash: Thanks so much! *skips off*
Snowy: Wait, that isn't a good group -

I can't believe it. Why in the world is Splash here?! I - oh wait. Candles. Fire. Deer. What in the -

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Snowy: I'MTALKINGFIRST!
???: :shock:
Snowy: Good! Name and interests?
???: Well, I'm Leonard, and I like reading and having fun.
Snowy: Nerds... no, you're too... Hmm... The last deer here, I think, was Maggie. And she's in Outcasts... *nods towards Maggie*

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Maggie was standing close by, muttering under her breath as she wrote in a notepad. She didn't notice there were a bunch of people staring at her....

Leonard: I - I.... Uh....
Snowy: You can be Jocks, then. Because I'm so nice.
Leonard: *continues staring at Maggie*

I have to get to class now. I might write more later.... My paw's aching. See you, Hawk.
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby chimique, » Thu Sep 03, 2015 7:08 pm

Hehehe. Clemence was perfectly evil. She isn't like that with the outcasts though, unless they bother her.
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby Alnitak » Thu Sep 03, 2015 8:04 pm

    Oh man, you nailed Jo's character perfectly. Well done. Better than I probably could. 'I'm sure the outcasts are happy to have you as a 'queen' too.' - That is literally exactly the kind of sarcastic comment I can imagine Jo (or even Xav', actually) saying to Snowy's face. Though I think Jo's humour is more sarcasm and Xav's is sometimes sarcasm and other times just lame puns.
    So Xav's humour is basically exactly like mine, heh.
    Although, I should mention it's 'Xavier', not 'Xaiver'. I don't mean to nitpick or nag at spelling or anything, it's just kinda bothering me.

    I'm such a Grammar Nazi.
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby hxneystorm » Thu Sep 03, 2015 8:12 pm

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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby CoolComrade » Fri Sep 04, 2015 12:22 am

Oh my perfect! I was reading Victoire's part and I was so happy! You are amazing at this! *round of applause*
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby someth1ng » Fri Sep 04, 2015 6:11 am

Yay Perfect!
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby CoolComrade » Fri Sep 04, 2015 8:05 am

So, Danava and Victoire's images were bothering me, so here are updated versions-
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(Of course don't go back and change all of Danava's, that'd be silly, but if you want to change Victoire's, that's fine.)
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby pinkgeneguy » Fri Sep 04, 2015 8:30 am

Wow...Turka was beautifully represented.
Do you know that the chemical compound for sugar is C12H22O11
Now got to see if she will have a crush but....eh...who would like her back? She's weird...








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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby retroaqua » Sun Sep 06, 2015 11:28 am

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