Pound of Love - JUDGING!! 155 kennels to adopt!

[violentPrince]

I don't see green on the poll...

[SabrinaB]

I don't see green on the poll...

Second option, with the blue

[SabrinaB]

Username: Queen Chrysalis
Link to form: [Boop]
How harsh should we be? Be as harsh as you feel you need to be.
Who do you want to look at your form? Anybody who feels they have the time, I don't want to be a bother ^-^
weteachallthelittleboysandgirls

Please and thank you! <3

Username:
booklover789

Link to form:
Here's my form for Kennel 50.

How harsh should we be?
As harsh as you'd like! I want to improve.

Who do you want to look at your form?
Any of the judges would be fine - though I'd prefer SabjeBammie, I honestly don't mind who decides to do my critique. I'd love multiple different opinions on this, so if multiple judges want to look it over, I'm good with that, too!

Please ignore the "Personality" section, as it is REALLY not finished, and shouldn't even be looked at in its current state.

Please note that I am not yet finished with this form (though I AM nearly finished with everything other than the personality and history, which I am still working on), and would appreciate any tips y'all can give me.

weteachallthelittleboysandgirls

Will send both of you your critique today (most likely between 22:00 and 1:00 GMT+1

[Karma.]

-salutes Booklover-
I'm always hanging round and willing to help.

[Daleks&Dragonlords]

Marking! This thread is genius!

[Daleks&Dragonlords]

WIPPITY WIP WIP (cinnamon)

Basic information






Ok, time to switch to regular text. Anywho, one reason I would like the character is because I am a crazy cat lady in training. Cats are easily my favorite animal, and when I get older I plan on being the crazy cat lover your mum warned you about. And also, red is my favorite color. Favorite animal plus favorite color, how could I possibly resist?!?

Hmmmm well first I stick him on my character thread and scour the art board, in search of affordable art. Of course, I'd grab my sketchbook (after digging around my horrendously messy room for a while) and get started drawing. In fact, that's probably what I'm going to be doing tonight if i can't go see the DCI premiere. After that, I'd use him in any roleplays where I could use him. Of course, it would probably be a genderbend, since I can't RP a male for the life of me.
Character information


I names him Charlie because after seeing Jurrasic World I have been in love with raptors, and one of the raptors from the movie was named Charlie. When I saw this little kitty, I immediately thought he just looked like a Charlie!

I'm going to have to go with Male, since I believe his facial structures look like a Males.

In a word, innocent. Ok, well that's a lie. He just acts innocent. He's actually a little son of a...gun. Very mischievous, as a cat should be. Always getting into trouble. But he's a suck up all right. He's basically just like your usual house cat; loving to those he cares about but a little -booty-hole to most. He's got some sass to him all right.



Extras: (optional)ka--ching

[Gleib Jelky]

Username: Gleib Jelky
Link to form: viewtopic.php?f=15&t=2704347&start=10#p87372767
Harshness: Please be completely honest with me. This is the first time I've ever written a story and I don't really know if it's good at all. I have completed my form so I'm really interested in getting some critique on the entire form. Thank you!
Who: Anyone who can(:
Note* - The form is not on the Pound of Love thread yet, it is on the second page of my trade thread. I don't like to post it until it is completed so I do not forget about it, I hope that's okay.
weteachallthelittleboysandgirls

[SabrinaB]

Up

Will try to send booklover and Gleib their critiques later today <3

[SabrinaB]

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[booklover789]

Hello everyone! I am normally against the whole "adding a kennel in the middle of a round" thing, but I've decided to add ONE kennel to this round so that anyone who wants to may try out for it. And seeing as this round is going to be a bit longer than the average round, I figure that anyone who'd like to try for it has plenty of time to write up a cool form. The kennel is #141, if any of you are interested.

Thanks for keeping this place up and running in my absence, everyone! Please take this little kennel as a donation of appreciation from yours truly.

Also, the forms are coming along nicely! Good work, everybody!

Lastly, I updated the poll. Please vote on it if you find some extra time on your hands!