
Nice Dipper wrote:Nice Dipper wrote:With the competition getting a bit more competetive, I really need help.
Does anyone mind critiquing my forum for NB 128 here? Thank you!

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@ȶigressa; thnks frond. also tht art is very cute n i love it??
@consulting.detective; /)0(\ ty!!
@the birb; thts nice of you to offer owo
@QuillTehOrbGodess; have fun w/the requests
@Chamomile.; omg tht animation is so smooth?!! gl in the contest omg
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@Lady Sif; eesh gl w/tht archive!!
@vee.; i love ur art omg i hope the jm was fun owo
@Cryogenic; wow cry nice new plume where'd you get it
@conquest;; gl gettin him grown!!
@Blueh; oo gl gettin rps or art, he's by far one of my fave designs
@ȶigressa; gl gettin him rps too?!!
@Sosna.; o: hope she goes to a good home
@aeiou; orcinus is a qt
@Kydashing; eloise is a qt too
@Transmasculine; kai is cute too?!!!
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@Mem; he's such a qt gl findin love fer him
@chihuahua.; gl w/the art stuffs
@:~Koi~:; gl findin him rps!!
@wander; what a cute baby?!!!!
@Lady Sif; aw thts nice of you to do requests owo
@spencer; ur plumes are cute aw
@Xhat; i love the la omg?!!
@PixelPlushiee; tht art is rlly pretty goodness me
@Sunnyside; gl gettin help n all tht jazz
@Tricksters; aw i hope you feel better
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@Lady Sif; gl w/the archives still lol
@dandyLIONscare; tht art is amazing omg
@mayhaps; gl gettin her grown!!Looking for RPs
Lisian||Li/Lis/Flowerboy
17||Male||He/Him/His||Polyamorous homoromantic demi-homosexual
Romance||Enemy||Friendly||Familial
Lisian is a very extroverted person, but still fairly quiet, he just prefers to listening over talking.
He dropped out of highschool when he was 15 and now works as a florist in a tiny flower shop in town.
He is good friends with Velius and Rudolpho and fairly easy to get along with in general. He's often seen
as being a hopeless romantic, but never really acts upon any feelings he may have for someone. He really
prefers to have more friends than anything.
Velius||Vel/Punk/Brat/Jerk/Velius do not/ect.
25||Male||He/Him/His||Demiromantic Bisexual
Romance||Enemy||Friendly||Familial
Velius can only really be described as being obnoxiously loud and obnoxiously promiscuous. He
lacks a lot of morals and doesn't understand the concept of having humanity. He uses a lot of his
life problems to manipulate people into doing what he wants. He is incredibly overbearing as a
front to cover up for the fact that he's really just a scared kid. He adores Lisian and flirts with
anything with a pulse.
Rudolpho Adelardi||Ru/Rudie/Lardi
26||Male||He/Him/His||Homoromantic Homosexual (Closeted)
Romance||Enemy||Friendly||Familial
Rudolpho is a incredibly cynical person when it comes to the aspect of human society. He's hard
to get along with and always a bit too negative for the comfort of most other people. Rudie is a
person with a very dry sense of humor and too much snark than what is really necessary. Despite
all of this he can still be nice to talk to, you just need to get through his very insecure top layer.
He is too afraid to be himself by himself. He needs a bit of prodding.
Galakitka||Gala/La/Kit
20||Male||He/Him/His||Polyamorous Gray-aromantic Homoromantic Homosexual
Romance*||Enemy||Friendly||Familial
Since Galakitka is polyamorous there is a chance of romance with him, he is married to
Otto, though, so there are no promises as you'd have to fit into the dynamic of Gala/Otto's relationship
as well as my and vjg321's relationship.
Galakitka is a very bold and in your face person. He is very overwhelming to almost any other personality
even including his own. He's loud and doesn't really care much about what you have to say to him. He is a
artsy person by nature and always very creative with anything he does. Galakitka is also very confrontational
and doesn't really understand the concept of personal space. If you make him mad he will hold a personal
vendetta for a while. He is also the father of two and due to this he's mellowed out just a tad, it just depends
on during what time period of his history you want to rp in.
Note; His age changes dependent on how old his kids are, if the
kids are 5, he's 25, if the kids are 2, he's 22.
Cashile Lector || Cash/Lec/Les
31||Genderless||He/Him/His & It/Its/It's||Demi-Panromantic Pansexual
Romance||Enemy||Friendly||Familial
Cashile is anything but your typical average joe. It is a rather calm person by nature, and has a stutter
due to brain damage he received as a child. It works at an old, rundown dockside warehouse almost all
waking hours of the day, and sometimes night. Since he is older than most he is more mature and prefers
to have the company of more mature company. It has a odd distrust of older men, and is sometimes more
violent towards males in general. He has a soft spot for dainty girls. For the most part, though, Cash remains
to be an enigma.
just feel free to pm me if you're interested in a rp, i don't bite 'w'
Kenadia//Nala
14//female//straight
She has a pretty spunky attitude. She likes to be manipulative and get what she wants. She acts like a little goody two shoes but once you actually get to know her she really doesn't care what anyone has to say about her.


@Transmasculine;; gl in competition c:
@Kydashing;; gl getting rps n what not <3
@PixelPlushiee;; ur art is so cute like ????? how do even process???
@chosendragon;; -weeps- Kane is so beautiful, like many congrats doll c:
@Baigel;; ur form makes me wanna cry <3
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@Transmasculine;; your art is abeutiful and that stream was so much fun c:
@:~Koi~:;; gl getting rps mate <3
@Blueh;; your art is so much love <333
@Rainbow Rose;; gl in your competition doll c:
@~Silver;; omg nimrah looks so great all grown up!!! congrats!!!
@vee.your form is so fantastic <333
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@the birb;; omg its so nice of you to offer a non-owner art <3
@Baigel;; your art is so pretty!!
@consulting.detective;; hurt those arts of yours are adorable!!
@Lady Sif;; your friend does so beautiful art!!
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@jern.;; i so wish i could afford to commission you /)n(\
@lyrastarbirbs;; omg gl getting the twins grown <3
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@Tricksters;; thaT IS ONE BEAUTIFUL BABY
@Baigel;; cute cute pixel c:
@Slimedog;; dem baes i wonder who will own them
@ȶigressa;; ur art tho
@me;; hur
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@ȶigressa;; my time has come
@Sosna;; i hope she goes to someone great <3
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@Mem;; gl getting him a mate c:
@wander:: cute baby alert!!!
@Xhat;; those feathers are hot hot
@PixelPlushiee;; your form is beauty <33
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@slime;; shut up punk
@~Caramel~;; gl getting her grown <33[b]What first comes to mind when I say the letter "s"?:[/b]
Peytin:: s-sguar
Lenny:: that ain't exactly appropriate love
Galina:: Sky!
[b]Your lost in the woods, what are you most afraid of/of happening?:[/b]
Peytin:: u-ummm everything c-cuz I'm l-lost a-and i-im gonna get h-hurt
Lenny:: i fear nothiiiing
Galina:: -whines- storms >.>
[b]If you could have any occupation in the world, what would it be?:[/b]
Peytin:: vid-video game d-designer
Lenny:: lady pleaser
Galina:: athelete .... i think .... idk yet
[b]If you could be in any book, which book would you choose and why?:[/b]
Peytin:: I-i don't ever really r-read
Lenny:: something from harry potter
Galina:: whY WOULD I EVER READ????!!!
[b]What was the last dream you can remember?:[/b]
Peytin:: i-i dont l-like dreaming
Lenny:: i think i was surrounded by my peeps and swimming ....
Galina:: I'm too young to remember my dreams
[b]Does your plumie know another language?[/b]
Peytin:: hur, no
Lenny:: i know the language of loooove -eyebrow wiggle-
Galina:: I know english and russian .... well bits of it
[b]How does your plumie dream of finding their true love?[/b]
Peytin:: u-umm i dont th-think thats a po-possability for m-me
Lenny:: lenny is too free to be tied to one true love >.>
Galina:: ewwww, I'm just three!
[b]What was you're reaction when you won your first plumie?[/b]
i like couldn't even comprehend it when i got either of my boys because like ???? people thought me cool enough to suggest me to be Peytin's new owner ???? how does one even react to that?!?!?!???
[b]Be honest, when you were little did you believe in cooties?[/b]
Peytin:: w-wait .... c-cooties aren't r-real?
Lenny:: nah man, i've always been wantin a little of that kiss action
Galina:: ewwwww yeS THEY AAAARE!!!
[b]For the owners:[/b]
[b]Rather then you're plumies getting brought into your world, you end up in theirs, what do you do?[/b]
omg scream n run cuz Galina terrifies me
[b]I know we all say we don't have a favorite, but being honest, which of your plumie's designs do you like the most?[/b]
design based is honestly galina >.>

so for now I am going to forego my search of RPs for Peytin and Lenny as I would really really like to focus on my form for Thomas [aka Firefly's staff plumerian] and as I'm still seeking a bit of help for him I thought I'd let you guys know a bit more about who i want him to be and the character I have in mind.
Like many would think Thomas is a very cute and small Plumerian with a passion and love for planes, specifically stunt planes. From a very early age he has loved them to pieces and made it his life goal to be a pilot. After years of hard work his dream came true and he was able to get his pilot license as well as a plane to call his own. Unfortunately not long afterward he suffered from a horrible crash that cause many changes in him. Thomas foremost lost his ability to speak as he vocal chords were damaged by a bit of shrapnel. Other than this he developed an eidetic memory as well as savant senthesia syndrome [a disorder that causes one to "see" sounds and "hear" colors].
click to go to what i have of my form so far
seeking:
*art
*form critique
*a few relationships [mainly a friend/care-taker]
*coding
offering payment from pets in this group, C$ [i have 10], and my own art if you so choose.
[b]When your plumie,if they were the one that were told,found out they were gonna be a parent,how'd they react?[/b]

For the plumies:
Have you ever made a small mistake that stuck with you for some reason?
Eloise; "My mistakes...welp,i know whenever I forget something when walking into a room! I dislike it }:"
Be honest, when you were little did you believe in cooties?
Eloise; "I believed that adults did! Probley do...">..>
If you were faced with an unsolvable challenge, how would you handle it?
Eloise; "I am not good with decisions, stappph ;,;"
You've been given 400,000 dollars, what do you do with it?
Eloise; "WAAT? Your lying! Well, I guess use it to pay my college fund to go to school! Then...give some to my village I live in!...the orphanage."
It's movie night but it's someone else's turn to pick, what genre are you hoping they avoid?
Eloise; "Gore/Scary. Because...like i dont wanna watch it!"
For the owners:
Rather then you're plumies getting brought into your world, you end up in theirs, what do you do?
I'd be chilling with Eloise, doodling it up! They'd be trying to adopt me,right?
When your plumie,if they were the one that were told,found out they were gonna be a parent,how'd they react?
Eloise; "But...I dont have a mate or anyone whom likes me. HOWS THIS POSSIBLE STORK?!"







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