Symphony Character Adoption Agency - CD + OPEN! :)

[Wesley]

Sorry for my hiatus, folks! Been experiencing some pretty rough things, but I'm back for now!

As far as the code drop, thanks for everyone's opinions! I'll be out of state the last two weeks of June, so I think the first weekend of July would make the most sense!

If possible I'd like Tartan, Rex, Yu-Kin-Sou, Arliss, Riley, none [no name], and - returned
back to me either as soon as you'd be able to, or after
the round is over.

I'd like to re-home them quicker so they don't sit for a while.

Absolutely!

[Jericho]

Username: seasee3
Kennel that you are applying for: 232
Preferred critic: anyone will do
What do you wish to get out of this critique?: I would like to be politely informed if there is anything I can add to make my application more successful, including fixes to grammar and spelling.
Link to form: viewtopic.php?f=58&t=1379673&start=3720#p85657173
critiquemepleaseoo

Would send a critique but I can't since I'm trying for the same character.

[DogLife.]

Username: Torak_and_Wolf
Kennel that you are applying for: 18
Preferred critic [any judge, sub-judge, or crit staff including myself is a valid request for critic. Please put 'any judge/subjudge' or something along those lines in this section if you do not have a preference]: I don't mind!
What do you wish to get out of this critique? [What do you want us to let you know? How can we help you improve your form? Would you like advice on the contents, the length, the name of the character? How harsh should we be on you?]: I would like you to be harsh on me please. I am desperate to get Aliya as she is so cute. My form needs the work on grammar I think...
Link to form: posting.php?mode=reply&f=58&t=1379673#pr86741795
critiquemepleaseoo

[squints]

marking so i can try for some ol guys<3

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[Cerestes]

(Kennel #85)




Ok wow first off I can't believe this character is still available!
I have adored her for the better part of a year! 80

Species
Dragon/Canine/Sabre Tooth Tiger

Use
Will be used in art and short stories.
I use my characters to make plushies, digital art, sculptures and fursuits.

Personality/Info
Jetta is laid back and confident. She loves the outdoors and making new friends.
She takes a keen interest in paleontology as well as Geology.
She collects bones and rocks and keeps them in an old wooden chest by her sleeping area.
Her home is made of a cave dug deep into the side of a canyon.
Jetta is very into DIY projects and collects various items to make art and useful tools.

History
Jetta comes from a loving family, but due to her curious nature she left home at an
early age and spent her younger years exploring. Eventually she settled down in a
quiet area inside a deep gorge. She spends her time roaming the land in search of
new trinkets and treasures. She acts as a sort of guardian for her canyon, and
keeps the smaller, more helpless animals safe from harm.

Likes
Sunrises, night time, rocks, bones, trinkets and baubles.
Sand between her toes, drawing, food.
Ants, small patches of sunlight, napping.
Music, exploring, recycling.

Dislikes
Littering, pollution, rain/getting wet, tree sap.

Prize Possessions
Her largest fossil - a dinosaur skull in near perfect condition
A sorted collection of geodes
Various stones
Ancient coins and statues

[Jericho]

Username: Torak_and_Wolf
Kennel that you are applying for: 18
Preferred critic [any judge, sub-judge, or crit staff including myself is a valid request for critic. Please put 'any judge/subjudge' or something along those lines in this section if you do not have a preference]: I don't mind!
What do you wish to get out of this critique? [What do you want us to let you know? How can we help you improve your form? Would you like advice on the contents, the length, the name of the character? How harsh should we be on you?]: I would like you to be harsh on me please. I am desperate to get Aliya as she is so cute. My form needs the work on grammar I think...
Link to form: posting.php?mode=reply&f=58&t=1379673#pr86741795
critiquemepleaseoo

Link sends you to the page where you create your post. New link please!

[DogLife.]

Sorry! Hope this one works XD

viewtopic.php?f=58&t=1379673&start=3740#p86741795

[dragonscales10]

Username: dragonscales10
Kennel Number: 23
Use: character
Name: Acorn
Gender: Male
Species and/or specific breed: Pinecone Glider
Personality: Fun, kind, energetic
History/Background: He grew up with his parents, in a large colony of Gliders, he one day became bored of following rules and doing the same things day on day off, so he left, he now glides 'round the world, looking for adventure.
Likes/dislikes/art, etc. (optional): He likes hot day, clouds, marshmellows, water, and thunder. He dislikes violence, cruelty, hail, and snow.
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[PeachFuzz]

Username: seasee3
Kennel that you are applying for: 232
Preferred critic: anyone will do
What do you wish to get out of this critique?: I would like to be politely informed if there is anything I can add to make my application more successful, including fixes to grammar and spelling.
Link to form: viewtopic.php?f=58&t=1379673&start=3720#p85657173
critiquemepleaseoo

I'll send you critique in a little while ♥

[Zoker]

I am re-posting this since i feel it went unnoticed. ^^

Username: Zoker
Kennel that you are applying for: 133
Preferred critic: Any judge/subjudge. I don't know if this is allowed, but if more than one person could offer critic, then that would be awesome!
What do you wish to get out of this critique? : I want harsh critic; I want to make sure that I have 100% chance of winning this character. I would love to know how to add to my form, whether its small and also on the content. Is there anyway I can improve on the form or the character itself? Should I define her more to the details?
Link to form: click
critiquemepleaseoo