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A Whole New World

Postby . Nebula . » Tue Mar 24, 2015 4:23 pm

Hey there, Welcome to my little corner of writting! before you go any further I want you to know this, please do not post! AT ALL! If you want to say something please PM me.
Thank you!

anyway this is a story about 7 Orb Cats who will learn the true meaning of friendship, power, and truth,
but its gonna take a while for them to get there, so go ahead bookmark this page!
Sidenote: Some of the cats used in the story are mine, some are other people's


TABLE OF CONTENTS


Font Page<--- YOU ARE HERE
Chapters
Characters
World Map


EXTRA LINKS
Orb Cats Main Thread
Orb Cats Fanclub
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Characters

Postby . Nebula . » Tue Mar 24, 2015 4:24 pm

Here's a list of all the characters we know so far:



Female
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Name: Skylar Storm
Town: Flantof
Relatives: ???
Friends: Soren Silverwood
Enemies: Shadow Creatures
Deceased: No
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Name: Ruby ???
Town: Strange Ravine/Village of the Mini's
Relatives: ???
Friends: ???
Enemies: ???
Deceased: No
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Name: Soren Silverwood
Town: Flantof
Relatives: ???
Friends: Skylar Storm
Enemies: Shadow Creatures
Deceased: No
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Re: A Whole New World (WIP)

Postby . Nebula . » Tue Mar 24, 2015 4:24 pm

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Intro

Postby . Nebula . » Tue Mar 24, 2015 4:50 pm

Dear Reader,

I am about to tell you a story, one you may or may not believe, it is your choosing,
but before i tell you i must inform you of three things first, this story is ages old, it is from a journal shared by The Seven, and last but not least you must learn the Lore of Orbia...

Long ago, Long before your time and mine, there were 7 elemental beasts
The Flame God, Isiar
The Water God, Nabyru
The Earth God, Xenu
The Air God, Ratchru
The Ice God, Stratocice
The Light God, Aniceus
and The Dark God Z̸̵̩̼͔͙ͦ̿͑ͩ̈́̉͟͡e̍̍̃̽͗ͣ̓ͯ̔̏ͧ̿̆̿̂͂̈̔̕҉͏͈̝̰̲̻̥̹̺̫͙̘̬l̵̰̬̦̪̦̒̆̅͌̽͋ͩ̎͆̉̊̓͛ͯ̅̅ͯ̇̚͘͢ơ̵͑̌ͯ̀ͨͬ̆͠͏̯̖̦̣͖͍̺̞͍̯̺r͎̝̠̜̫̣͔͙ͯ̃͗̄͑͂͢͟b̸̼͍̹̮̟̤̞̬̘̙͕̺̠̯͎͂̍ͪ̌̎̒ͧ͐ͮ̀y̓ͪ͒ͤ̇͗͛̋̓̀̃̑̋͌̇̅ͦͣ͌҉̸҉̝̱̺͎̭͇͙̹̻͓̝̼̣̝͡i̸̧̛̠̦̼͔̩̺͈̍̿͆̊̓ͥ͛̄ͧ̈́̃̋̀͡o̷̸͔͈̪̥̺͆̆̽̅̆ͤ̀͋͜ū̴̷̴̦̘͇̹̮͈̭̫̭͕̬ͧͬ͛̅ͩ̋ͯ͂͊͘͞ş̵̡̺̻̜͓ͫ̐͋͐̎͋ͨ̽̏͆̏ͪ̽ͬ́͡
Since these beings were pure energy and power, they had no true form but they did enjoy taking certain ones, but that is not important in this story...

Aniceus created the other 5 Ele-Beasts to help him make a beautiful new world, thats where the Demi-God Quillidalia comes in
Quillidalia was Aniceus' student- a great one at that, she cared about anyone or anything's well-being, she loved and she learned, Aniceus knew she was perfect for taking his place. The world was getting bigger and bigger, it had more Orb Cats and other creatures then ever. Aniceus and the other Ele-Beasts knew they couldn't stay there much longer so they went off to rest. Aniceus however, gave up his powers for Quillidalia, who became the new "God" of the world, but don't think she rules the world on her own she has many other Demi-Gods helping her out each day, too many to name each one...


And there you have it, the end of the begining

but i hope you know,


That this is only the start.
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Just a Normal Day

Postby . Nebula . » Wed Mar 25, 2015 10:33 am

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Wow, Flantof looks gorgeous today. Flantof, the floating city of dreams~ that's one of our motto's, our other is You don't need fossil fuel to power you city, all you need is Clour Power! and by "Clour Power" they mean magical floating clouds. The motto's are pretty dumb if you ask me but, no one does ask me....
anyway, I think there's only one thing that could ruin today and it's already happening
*sigh*
i never knew such an important job could be so boring, I absolutely hate guard duty, i hate it, i hate it, i hate it! Well atleast my best friend Soren Silverwood is here. He makes things just a bit better. He always does.

"Hey Stormy, why the long face?" Soren said with a smile.

"Oh you know, the usual. Guard duty..." I replied quietly.
Well acually, that's my normal voice, i never really talk with anyone... i'm shy like that you know?

"Why do you hate it so much? It isn't that bad, we get to goof off all the time!"

"Well I-I-I...."

"I what? Were you attacked by Mutant Chickens? Did Squill's grow wings and start throwing acorns at you? Is it because of our boss?"

"I-I...."

"It's our boss isn't it. He's way too hard on you, stupid too. You're waaaay to nice to attack anyone!"

"W-Well i wouldn't-"

"Who does he think he is! Just 'cause he's our boss doesn't mean he can be rude to you!"

"S-Soren-"
If you haven't have noticed by now, I stammer A LOT.

"You know what, once my shift is done i'm gonna give him a piece of my mind!"

"Wait! You d-don't have to you know..."

"I know, i just want to. For you."

"Wh-wha- really?? For me?"

"Of course Stormie!"

I bat him in the face with my paw
"Don't call me that."

"Whatever you say, Stormie."

God I hate that nickname, he does know i have a real name right? Right? Ugh, doesn't matter i guess.

I shifted my golden spear around in my paws, its hard to believe these are weapons, they're so pretty! The gold, the jewels and the design...
maybe it's just a reminder to our enemies, of our "rich" background, we don't really even have one, that's why everyone who isn't from Flantof considers us snobs...

"Hey Stormie, you in La-La land again?"

I perk my ears up "Huh w-what?"

"Exactly, doofus. Guard duty is important, no sleeping on the job."

"I wasn't sleeping on the job!"

Soren smiled "Then what were you doing?

"I-I was..."

"Daydreaming? Again?"

"N-Noo!"

He chuckled


i don't even know why i was fighting back, i probably look really dumb, i'm such a fool...

"Hey wait! Do you hear that?" I could sense alarm in his voice.

I listened, all i could hear was a soft bre- "Wait! I hear it too..."

Soren pulled out his spear and readied for attack

I stood still and listened, it was a faint hissing noise, I don't think I've ever heard a creature hiss like that before.
"Is-Is it coming closer?"

"No I don't think so, it's probably just the wind." He lowered his spear.

"Oh, whew i thought we actually had to do something for once."

Soren burst out laughing, which was quite unfortunate for us.
The quiet hissing soon turned to loud snarling

"H-hey, what is-"
and we were attacked, it all happened so quickly, it happened in a flash, and here in this journal where i write, i shall try and make the moment last...

"Soren look out!"

it was huge, and black, like a large lizard-dragon, along it's back were large wide spikes, and it had no wings, but there was one thing about this creature that disturbed me more than anything, it had no eyes, only a toothy grin along its face, and if you're wondering "why was it smiling?" well... even though it had no eyes
it knew where each and every one of us stood.
next to the dragon was several other shadow-y cat-like creatures
"KILL THEM!" a creature hissed.

Soren yowled for backup
I grabbed my spear and swung it around hoping i would hit one of the black creatures (I was forced into this job okay?)
soon the other guards came and the fight was on.
I held my spear up high and charged towards the beast.
and in a moment of seconds i felt the wind flying by my fur, as well as Soren screaming my name.
It would be the last time i ever heard it.


I looked up at the Flantof, the city of clouds, hopes and dreams. Some say a long time ago Quillidalia herself used to live here, some say she still does- but only in the shadows.

as i was falling I sang my self a soft tune, it was familiar but i don't know where i learnt it

Little Dove flying by,
what have you seen in thy sky?
Take her away to a land of hope,
take her to somewhere, where she can cope.


i wasn't even sure if i sang it myself, but it didn't matter.

I closed my eyes.



My name is Skylar Storm
and this was Just a Normal Day.
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Rising From the Ashes

Postby . Nebula . » Thu Mar 26, 2015 10:29 am

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My name is Skylar Storm,
and i just had
the most normal-est day ever.
I opened my eyes slowly, i saw several paws sitting around me, I also heard whispers.
"When will she Wake up?"

"What will you tell her?"

"Do you think she'll accept?"

"Will...Will she make it?"

That last one sent shivers down my spine, but then I heard another voice, it was way different from the rest, it was soothing and calm and... It made me feel warm, like when you're cuddled up in a blanket drinking a hot beverage.

"Hush now, she's waking."

I opened my eyes fully and saw a kind looking cat, she was blue and had long white feathery wings, on her back was a huge cherry blossom tree, I've heard of tree cats before but this was just- wow! A top Her head was a fluffy streak of fur like mine, but it came around down to the side into a ponytail as well. The color of Her fur was like no other, it wasn't a light pink, fuscia or salmon pink... it was more of a...
a...
Sunset Pink. I'm not even sure if that's a color, but i don't even care! Oh! And Her scent! Her scent smelled of roses and Lilacs and Petunias and almost every good-smelling flower i can think of! Everything around Her seemed to become more lively, even i felt like i just chugged down an energy drink!

"Skylar, Skylar are you okay?" Her voice was soft, it almost reminds me of clouds...

"Okay? Of course i'm okay! I couldn't have been better!" How did she know my name...

a brown cat sitting next to Her jumped in "Okay? YOU JUST FELL FROM THE SKY AN-"

The blue she-cat interupted her "Pupilla not now." Her voice was still soft, yet stern.

I guess the brown cat's name is Pupilla, she seems okay, much younger then the Blue cat thats for sure. Is it just me or is she? Nah it can't be... I've never seen a glowing cat...

"Anyway, I'm glad you're okay Skylar, but can you stand?" Blue-Cat asked again.

"Heck yeah I can stand!" I don't know why but when I stood i felt lighter...

Blue-Cat nodded "Good, good now there is something we must-"

I interupted "oh my goodness, I just remembered that Flantof is under attack!" I began to spread my wings but it seemed they weren't there "Wh-What?'

"Skylar, we were going to tell you later but... when you fell and 'landed' your wings were all mangled up, so we..we had to-"

"JUST WHO DO YOU THINK YOU ARE!" I took a step towards Her and stared at Her right in the eyes
"HOW DARE YOU REMOVE MY WINGS, I'D PREFER TO HAVE LONG BEAUTIFUL FEATHERY WINGS THAT DON'T WORK OVER THESE-" I took a moment to look at my new 'wings' "FEATHERY WISPS!"

"Well I don't know who i am in your world but in my world, my name is Quillidalia."

I gasped and took a step back, realizing my mistake "Q-Q-Quillidalia?"

"Yes Quillidalia, now about those creatures that attacked you, we came down from The Above to try and stop them but it seems that we cannot..."

"Why can't you?"

"An Anicent has spoken to me and he says that only the 7 elements can destroy Him, and i'm afraid the Elements do not exist anymore..."

"Who's Him?"

"Him is He-Who-Has-No-Name, literally he is a nobody, a nothing, a shadow, if you will."

I nodded "So why did you save me?"

"Because Skylar, you are going to stop him."

I felt like there was an earhtquake happening, I became very dizzy, very nauseated and other terrible things,

How was I going to stop him, if the things that are supposed to stop him, don't exist?




Just like a Phoenix
I will rise from the ashes.
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Ambush

Postby . Nebula . » Fri Mar 27, 2015 1:56 pm

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My name is Skylar Storm
And I will rise from the ashes
I felt two cats next to me, steadying me,

"Woah, careful there." The one on the left said, it was strange, she looked like she was made out of metal! B-but that's impossible! I-I- you know what. It makes perfect sense, they're gods and at this point i don't really care about anything anymore, i've lost everything. I've lost my friends, I've lost my family.

"Anyway, I want you to venture out to the Lost Forest, I will have a Squill meet you there and bring you in, she will explain as much as she can." Quillidalia said.

"Uh okay. W-Wait, will the Squill meet me outside the forest or on the inside??"

"Outside obviously. Only the stupid would try and get in."

"G-Good, but uh.... in which direction is the Lost Forest at, exactly?"

"Oh! I'm sorry Skylar, just follow the Rising sun."

"So East?"

"Yes East! Now I must go, so I wish you luck on your journey!"

"WAIT! You're leaving m-" That was me getting cut off by the sound of them leaving.
Oh well I better head East...

I looked up and saw the sun high up in the sky and I begun my quest.

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After about 2 hours of walking the sun finally starts to set

and i'm not even close to the forest.

I don't even know if i'm going in the right direction, yes i know its East but, what does the Squill look like? In what part of the outer forest is he? Or is it a She?!?!

Ugh, like i said before, i really don't know anymore.

as i'm walking I hear a rustling In the bushes, my Brain says "Stop!" but my Legs say "RUN, FOOL!"
and like the scaredy-cat I am I run the heck out of there! But because I have the worst luck in the world, whatever was in the bushes decides to chase me. Continuing my stupidity I look back and see-
It's the Shadow Creatues again.
AND their stupid Shadow Dragon.

and then I hear this:

"KILL HER! SHE HAS TALKED WITH NUZÆB!"

And after hearing that i continue running at (what I hoped to be) Mach 2, when all of the sudden bad luck strikes again.

I trip on a rocky edge and everything goes black, from above I hear

"IS SHE DEAD? IF SHE ISN'T KDRAKOR IS GOING TO BE FURIOUS!"

and from below....

"OH MY GOD, IT'S A GIANT! HE'LL KILL US ALL!"

This quest is going great.



Wait slowly, do not fret.
The time to pounce, shant come yet,
but when you do, master will be pleased,
and his nerves will finally be eased.
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Village of the Mini's

Postby . Nebula . » Sat Mar 28, 2015 10:49 am

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Ambush Sucks.
Everything was blurry, a mix of black, red, blue, brown and more, I heard voices all around me,

"Is it dead?"

"Will it eat us?"

"IT CAME FROM THE ABOVE???"

"What were those Shadow things?"

"Shut up Ruby!"

then I heard shuffling and...

"Well, well, well! What do we have here?" The voice sounded old and muffled. I turned my head a bit and saw a tiny brown cat with large cream-colored, fluffy eyebrows (so fluffy you couldn't see the cat's eyes) and a large cream-colored beard (again with the fluffy thing)

"Who are you?" The tiny cat asked.

"Umm i'm Skylar.... Skylar Storm..."

Tiny Cat nodded.
"Will you eat us?"

"What! No! That's just... Ew!" I saw several hats fly up and the tiny cats all begun to cheer.

"H-Hey wait! Before you start your.... whatever you're doing, can you tell me how to get out of here?"

all the cats stopped cheering and slowly turned to face me, the brown cat spoke once again

"You wish to leave? Hmmm, very well, go through The ancient Door Of Truth..."

"And then I'm out?"

"No, after that you have to make your way through The Labyrinth Of Lies!" I heard several gasps, they all turned and looked at this huge brown and turquoise door at the end of the ravine. A red cat with a red/pink scarf walked towards me and bowed.
"My name is Ruby and I shall guide you through the caverns." I heard more gasps.

"Ruby my child! You cannot, you shall die!"

"Sorry Maxivous, you know i don't listen to you."

So the fluffy brown cat's name is Maxivous, i guess..? Ruby then walked up to me and said,
"We should go now, we can't open the doors at night."

that's when I remembered about the Squill

"You're right, let's go." I picked her up and maneuvered around all the little houses, straight to The Door. Two little cats opened the door, one blue, one black; And me and Ruby stepped in.



Fee-fi-fo-fum,
I be in the town of the little 'uns,
Be they small, or be they large
I will be the first to charge.
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The Ancient Door of Truth

Postby . Nebula . » Mon May 04, 2015 2:34 pm

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Fee-fi-fo-fum...
I took three steps in, then the door slammed behind me, they could be a little nicer...
Infront of me and Ruby there was three cave openings, all of them looked equally dark and dangerous

"Ohmygoodness, ohmygoodness, ohmygoodness!" Ruby squealed in a very annoying voice

"What?"

"I've never met a cat that wasn't a mini!"

"Yeah I figured..."

"So, what's your name? Where are you from? How'd you get here? Why do your wings look weird? What were those scary things that were chasing you? Where are you going now? Have you ever met a mini..?..." The questions kept coming...

"I, u-uh..."

"Well, aren't you gonna answer me?"

*sigh* "Fine, Skylar, Flantof, I fell, They were chopped off, I'm not sure, STILL not sure, nope!"

"YOUR WINGS WERE CHOPPED OFF? BY WHO!" Ruby squealed in a very annoying tone, AGAIN

"By one of those shadow creatures..."

"REALLY?? WELL WHEN WE GET OUTTA HERE I'M GONNA.. I'M GONNA...."

"Do what? You're barely three feet tall Ruby...."

"Oh uh.... that might be a problem..."

"Uhh huh, now where should we go to get out of here?"

"Ahaahaha, it seems we have a another problem..."

"We do? What is it?"

"I have no idea on how to get out of here, annnnnd they won't let us back in through the doors..."

"W-W-WH- WHAAAAAAAAT?? I THOUGHT YOU SAID YOU WERE A GUIDE!"

"I did, buuut... I only said that so I could come with you, hehe~!"

"So, we're t-trapped?"

"Not really, we could always pick one of these caverns and hope that they'll lead us out."

"And if we pick the wrong one?"

"No one knows, none of us have ever ventured into here; we could die, be free, die, find treasure, die, find a city, make a friend, did I mention we might die?"

"Yes Ruby, you mentioned we might die, FOUR TIMES!"

"Ahh okay good, I just wanted to make sure you got the message."

"Well I guess we sho- Ruby where are you going?"

"To the left cavern!" I think she said more but I couldn't hear her because she decided it was a good idea to jump farther down into the caves...
So of course I had to go after her.

--Many painful drops later...--


"RUBY! WHAT WERE YOU THINKING??"

"I wanted to go down the left cavern, so I did."

"Ruby! We were gonna go through the center entrance!"

"Well too bad, hey is it me or is it really dark in here?"

"Wh- Yeah, it is... and cold too..."

"Welp! Time to explore!!"

"RUBY WAIT! RUBY!!! Ruby...?"

I stumbled down the pathway into the deep, dark depths of the cave, It just kept getting darker and darker, colder and colder until...

"SKYLAR!! WHERE ARE YOOOOOOU?" Ruby's voice sounded further away..., no deeper away, if that even makes sense...

"I'm here, Ruby! Follow my voice!"
I stayed put and heard the clicking and clunking of rocks as Ruby moved towards me,
"How far away are you?" I called out louder than the last one

"I'm right here!" Her voice sounded even dimmer than before

"Ruby! Are you even going in the right direction!?!"
I then started to hear sobbing and sniffling, was she crying?
"I-I don't know, *sniff* are we even going to get out of here...?"

"Oh Ruby... just come over here okay..?"

I heard more clicking and clunking, but faster this time, then suddenly I felt Ruby slam into me and once again we were sent tumbling down the cavern

---...Even more clicks and clunks later...---

I got up and pain shot through my body like an arrow

"Ahhrgh! R-Ruby, are you okay? I-I think there's a rock in my paw... Ruby?"

A dead eerie silence replied

"Ruby! This isn't funny! It's a terrible time to play a prank!!"

I looked to my right and saw bright red glowing crystals in the corners of the cave, they were magnificent! I've never seen anything like them, they way they glow and shimmer, it's almost as if they're beconing you to come closer. And to my left was a very large gaping hole in the wall, there was a freezing cold draft comming from the hole, it's almost as if it was.... breathing? And I feel like i'm being watched... Is it those shadow creatu-
I terrible thought passed through my mind,

What if Ruby fell through the hole? Who knows what might be down there... she could be dead now!
My thoughts were inturrupted by a screech comming from another cavern

"NOOOOOOOOOOO, SKYLAR, I-I-I, WHAT HAPPENED TO YOOOOOOOU!?!?"

I'm guessing that's Ruby but, who is she talking to? She isn't in the same cave as me, or is she...?

"THIS IS ALL MY FAAAAAAAAULT!!"

"Ruby..?"

"AHHHH! A TALKING SKELE- WAIT! IT SOUNDS LIKE SKY- OH MY GOD SKYLAR! HOW DID YOU DIE???"

What on earth is this crazy cat talking about!??
"Uhh Ruby, i'm not dead, at least I don't think so..."

I then saw Ruby coming in from the way I came from while carrying a skeleton

She looked up at me "So wait, if this isn't you... ARHGHABLAH I'M HOLDING A DEAD CAT!" Ruby then threw the bones to the ground.

"But so wait, you let random travelers pass through this place? YOU LET INNOCENT CATS DIE?? DO YOU EVEN KNOW WHO THIS WAS??"

"I uhh, err, well, I have no idea who they were..."

"I think I might know who that was." A booming voice shouted from the giant hole in the wall.


"Yes, yes... They were my last meal." they shouted again,

I felt my blood run cold as I turned to the wall and realized, that was breathing, there was someone watching me, and I knew something awful was about to happen as two giant red eyes stared me down from the darkness.



I am Death,
I am Darkness,
I am a ghost,
of what Life once was...
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