owl0430 wrote:
Hm, the lines are really cool. Mind if I make a few recommendations? (I don't mean to be rude about any of this)
● Fix Grammar. I hate to be picky about these things, but there are a lot of errors. Correct grammar and good writing will make it look professional. I wouldn't mind going through things for you.
● Add some pretty coding. I admit I'm not an expert, but it can help with organization and making things easy to find and read.
● Get some more artists. Having a constant stream of adopts keeps people interested, and different artists bring their own styles. People will prefer some designs and styles over others.
● The prices are a bit high. Most adoption agencies are free, and the ones that aren't usually don't become very popular. Id recommend lowering the prices or making most things free, but of course it's your adopts.
● The pale pink text can be hard on the eyes, maybe make it a darker color?
● Questions on forms like 'why do you want this pet?' are pointless. The answers are always sob stories, 'I like the colors', 'I don't have one yet', or something similar. I personally wouldn't ask it.
● Get the branching threads up and running. I notice you have spots prepared for them, but they aren't linked yet. They'll keep things neat, and organized, and help get a fan base going if done right.
● Give it some time. It takes a while for agencies to really get going, and you only just started. WLF was tiny at first, and we still aren't all that well known. Adopts like WMEs have been around for years. Keep it running will a stable number of adopts coming out, and eventually it'll spread.
I'd love to help out and get it going. Maybe I can work on the grammar and coding, or make a few adopts for it when I have time?