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Re: This is not a Diary, this is my Phoenix!!

Postby cosmos.; » Mon Feb 16, 2015 11:51 pm

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Pet's Name: Torane
Personality: Kind usually, but she has a bit of a temper sometimes. She's quite introvert.
Group they are stereotyped into (or I can pick): Outcasts
Magic Power (explained in next post): She can steal others' powers at her will, but can only have 1 stolen power at a time. The person she steals from becomes unconscious, until she returns the power. But nobody knows this, not even her.
Other (like color of text??): Bold, dark blue like this. (The color code is #000040)
i swear the only reason i'm still on is because of one friend
everyone else has left
go hug her not me
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Re: This is not a Diary, this is my Phoenix!!

Postby TheGayMonster » Tue Feb 17, 2015 1:58 am

Hey. I am being forced to take a test to find out my ability. Apparently this girl volunteered to be the victim I mean test subject.
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So, concentrate on the feeling that is strongest for you, and channel that out through your... never mind. Just focus. ~???
You sure? It could be really bad!~Me
Just do it.~??? I did. A silver wisp started to float out towards me. I concentrated harder. The wisp zoomed towards me, and collected long enough to say Please, stop concentrating! before I ABSORBED IT! What the heck?? The girl fell over. Strangely enough, her face went... dead. Like, DEAD. I heard her voice inside my head.
This is... interesting. I've never been just my soul before...~ The Victim
I can't just leave you in my head! How do we get you outta here?~Me
I think you should try pushing me out.~Victim
Like this?~ Me I sent mental pushes.
No harder. Like.... this!~ Victim I felt a really hard shove, and then I was floating. I fell on my face and lifted my paw. IT WASN'T MINE.
WAAAAAAATTHEHECKIIIIIIIIE?
It seems I pushed you out instead... Use the sucking ability to draw me over there, then I'll push you out again. ~ Victim I pulled her soul over here, then she pushed me back into my body.
Well, that happened..~Me
Yeah. My name is Akyra by the way.~Victim/Akyra
Oh. I'm Allyssa.~ Me Well, now we know I have the soul-stealing ability.. THIS SHOULD BE FUUUUUN... Heh heh heh. But, I don't want to use my power for bad. I don't WANT to be like that cat who also had this ability. She was captured, and had her ability taken away... I don't want that. I really don't want that. Anyway, here is my schedule:
Pd. 1: Arithmetic/Arithmancy
Pd. 2: Ability Training
Pd. 3: Ability Training
Pd. 4: Writing/Reading
Pd. 5: Spell book Usage
Pd. 6: Magical Creatures and how to Identify them
Pd. 7: History of Magic
Pd. 8: Potions with Professor Snape!
Pd. 9: Academic Activities/Study Hall/Ability Training

Apparently this school has an Arena where we train our abilities! And Akyra and Ximion are in my classes. So, school won't be sooo bad after all.
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Re: This is not a Diary, this is my Phoenix!!

Postby TheGayMonster » Tue Feb 17, 2015 1:59 am

DarkLunaPhoenix wrote:Pet Image:Image
Pet's Name: Torane
Personality: Kind usually, but she has a bit of a temper sometimes. She's quite introvert.
Group they are stereotyped into (or I can pick): Outcasts
Magic Power (explained in next post): She can steal others' powers at her will, but can only have 1 stolen power at a time. The person she steals from becomes unconscious, until she returns the power. But nobody knows this, not even her.
Other (like color of text??): Bold, dark blue like this. (The color code is #000040)

OKay, your's will be in the next post!
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Re: This is not a Diary, this is my Phoenix!!

Postby cosmos.; » Tue Feb 17, 2015 7:54 am

Can I add another character?
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Pet's Name: Auna
Personality: She's quite a showoff, but everyone likes her. Except for the outcasts/emos. She hates them and they hate her back.
Group they are stereotyped into (or I can pick): Popular
Magic Power (explained in next post): Mind control over others
Other (like color of text??): She writes in italics, pink. like this (code is FF0040)
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everyone else has left
go hug her not me
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Re: This is not a Diary, this is my Phoenix!!

Postby TheGayMonster » Tue Feb 17, 2015 9:37 am

Yep! She will be in my next post!
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Re: This is not a Diary, this is my Phoenix!!

Postby TheGayMonster » Wed Feb 18, 2015 9:24 am

In Arithmancy, I was paired with this girl:
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She seems nice, but she's really quiet.
Hi. What's your name?
My name is Torane.
I'm Allyssa. We practiced the simple charms and spells together until the end of class. Then Ximion and Akyra and I walked to the Arena for Double ability training. I was to train with Ximion. I walked over to a training cage, Ximion on one side, me on the other. The black walls raised and the ceiling locked into place, blocking out all of the light. The walls are magic-proof, so nothing can escape and effect someone else. We don't know each other's abilities, and after the match, he won't know exactly what I used on him, and I won't know what he used on me, because the walls have an enchantment on them, to erase the memories of the match entirely. The match started.
As I got ready to steal his soul, remembering how to return it to him later, I felt something, no, someone touching my mind, trying to get past my barriers. I lost focus, and the thing got in. I saw Hyjinx, all the good times we had together. And then I saw her die. This can't be real. She's already dead. I shook my head, and focused. I drew out Ximion's soul. He panicked, his soul scattering. I drew it closer, closer, closer still. The room was aglow with the silvery blue light of his soul. Ximion's body went still. I hated doing this. I really did. But it was necessary to protect myself from him. I have no idea what he could do to me. The images of Hyjinx went away. Ximion's soul wilted, giving up in his resistance. I drew him over more easily now. As he got closer, I found that I could make his body move at my will. His soul went into me through my nose as I breathed in. I blocked him from talking to me, trying to persuade me to let him go. His body moved willingly, there was no soul to fight with over control. I made it walk around, sit down, and roll over. I dropped the control, turning my attention to his soul. I pushed him out a bit, making it turn this way and that. I made it do a loop-de-loop in the air, before I returned him to the body. I had to let him practice too. He went into my mind as I dropped my mental barriers. I saw all these crazy images, showing my doing things or getting punished. I followed their instructions, not even thinking about what each one asked me to do. The last one was different, though. Ximion was asking me why I played with his body and soul. Why I kept playing, even though he begged me to stop. And I had no answer. I was trapped, so I took his soul again. I didn't know what to do. I took him over to me, and as he floated through me, I stopped pulling. Half of him went back to the body of Ximion, but half of it was already absorbed by me. I went to play with his body again. This time, there was some resistance, but not much. I made the body sit again, before letting go. But the body stayed sitting. I didn't know why. I tried to send the rest of Ximion back. But the half of Ximion that was in me didn't want to go back. He clung to me, wrapping himself around my mind. I shoved harder. He eventually let go, and the match ended. We still had another period of training, so as I stepped out, the walls worked their magic, and I sat down, feeling dizzy. But, I stood up. I was the first. The teacher came over.
She is definitely the strongest here. The girl across from me sprinted over.
I want to test that! I'm obviously the strongest here! Let me take her out! That last bit was heavily accented. The teacher's eyes glazed over.
Ok, Auna. Head into the cage then. We walked in. I hated her already. She looks like this:
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The walls closed us in. I focused.
I wouldn't do that, if I were you.
But, what if I want to? I focused harder.
Well, DON'T! I felt... floaty. Like I should do whatever this girl said. I stopped just before her soul would have been pulled out. I realized that she could manipulate me any way she wanted, but I didn't care. I was in the middle of doing whatever it was she wanted me to do, when Torane teleported into our box. Her attention snapped away from me. Torane's eyes went out of focus, and then Auna went unconscious. The walls went down, and the teacher rushed Auna to the infirmary. Oh, by the way, this is a boarding school. The other day was the end of summer vacation. Torane woke up.
Auna went unconscious!
Really?
Yeah! We went to our dorms, where I found out that I shared a dorm with Akyra and Torane. I spent the rest of the day with them, because classes were cancelled.
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Re: This is not a Diary, this is my Phoenix!!

Postby TheGayMonster » Tue Mar 17, 2015 12:51 pm

So, it's been about a week and Auna still hasn't woken up. Aurellia is panicking. Auna is her favorite of her cronies, and she uses her for protection. The only reason Auna hasn't attempted to control Aurellia yet is because Aurellia has the hypnotism ability, and she hypnotized Auna into not attempting it. According to Ximion, she can't have more than 10 people hypnotized by her at a time. Yet. She has her ten most powerful drones hypnotized. Auna, Nephi, Sima, Kilah, Avis, Isabella, Adelinda, Merril, Katala, and Kasha.
Nephi looks like this:
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Sima looks like this:
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Kilah:
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Avis:
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Isabella:
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Adelinda:
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Merril:
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Katala:
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Kasha:
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Notice how they are all dogs. I can tell you about them more later, but, I have a cat to catch..
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Re: This is not a Diary, this is my Phoenix!!

Postby TheGayMonster » Tue Nov 03, 2015 12:00 pm

Hey, guys. This is the Author. Just letting you know, there's gonna be an update soon! I managed to think of something to write about for once! So, check back in within the next week or so, and there'll be new material to read! I might also start putting some art that I drew for this on here, and if you guys want to make fanart (though I don't see why you'd want to) I'll put it in at the end of each entry! I still am looking for some items, especially cat items and butterfly items, I barely have any of those. Also, can someone please tell me how to insert a screenshot into one of these? That's all for now. This is the Author, signing off!
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Re: This is not a Diary, this is my Phoenix!!

Postby 20lait1 » Tue Nov 03, 2015 10:28 pm

((If you want to insert a screenshot, you either use an image hoster or you can use the upload attachment button below the text box - beside Options. I haven't used it myself so I'm not sure if it'll work, but you can try if you want. I don't get the 'PMing' part of the form, so I'll just post it here, shall I? For the color codes, you can use another color if the color I suggested is taken.))

Pet Image: Image
Pet's Name: Skyler Swiftrunner (Nickname: Sky)
Personality: Sarcastic, quick tempered, impatient, violent and a little rude. However, she can be friendly and she loves to have fun - playing pranks and such.
Group they are stereotyped into (or I can pick): Outcasts, I suppose. You can choose another group if it fits her.
Magic Power (explained in next post): Wind and flight.
Other (like color of text??): Is color=grey open?

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Pet's Name: Ryo Gryphon
Personality: Shy, jumpy, nervous and quiet. He's quite sweet though and he loves music - song writing, listening to it, playing the drums and singing. He's an amazing singer but he's afraid of performing in front of an audience. He agrees quietly with anything anyone says and he's afraid of standing up for himself. He's afraid of a lot of things, but he can be a good friend if you get to know him better.
Group they are stereotyped into (or I can pick): Your choice.
Magic Power (explained in next post): Shadow and darkness - mainly shadow-travel (using shadows as 'portals') - but he can do other things, too. He can fly... he doesn't know about his shadow powers, though. It just seems 'out-of-place' for a guy like him.
Other (like color of text??): Is #BF8000 taken?
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