Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer [CLOSED]

[hqmary]

Okay, taking your review into account, the new and improved Angelpaw!
Image/Description: A white cat with watery blue eyes
Name: Frostpaw
Gender: female
Clan: Mossclan
Rank: apprentice
Personality/Skills: Frostpaw is good with kits, and plans to have some of her own with her crush, the sassy Pikepaw. She is bullied by other cats for her deafness. Frostpaw knows that other cats consider her lower and unfit to be warrior because she is deaf, but doesn't know how to prove them wrong. She has better senses of touch and smell to make up for her blindness. Using these, she is an all right hunter. She usually gives her prey to the queens, and will play with the kits afterwards.
Important Notes: She hates the sight of cat blood, making her useless in battle. It doesn't help her image among the rest of the clan, either.

[Arcaii]

Okay, taking your review into account, the new and improved Angelpaw!
Image/Description: A white cat with watery blue eyes
Name: Frostpaw
Gender: female
Clan: Mossclan
Rank: apprentice
Personality/Skills: Frostpaw is good with kits, and plans to have some of her own with her crush, the sassy Pikepaw. She is bullied by other cats for her deafness. Frostpaw knows that other cats consider her lower and unfit to be warrior because she is deaf, but doesn't know how to prove them wrong. She has better senses of touch and smell to make up for her blindness. Using these, she is an all right hunter. She usually gives her prey to the queens, and will play with the kits afterwards.
Important Notes: She hates the sight of cat blood, making her useless in battle. It doesn't help her image among the rest of the clan, either.

Since this is the same character, I won't judge the name, just the personality!

Character Assessment: I always feel so weird approving changes that I suggested...
Well, anyway, she seems good! I'm not so confident about the bullying thing, since a Clan is built to give cats a better chance at life, and disabled cats would be just as welcome to make something of themselves, but the rest seems fine.
Also, you mentioned blindness, but I'm fairly certain that's an error.
Character Suggestions: Perhaps change the bullying to patronizing/condescending. They likely wouldn't directly be cruel to her, but I wouldn't be shocked if some of the cats overcompensated for her or babied her because they were so certain that she couldn't achieve as much as the other cats, which might have messed her up for the future (leaving her less skilled with hunting and with a distaste for blood).

[Glitchieowo]

Image/Description:
Name: Ambertail
Gender: F
Clan: Fallencln (clan of fallen leaves)
Rank: Deputy
Personality/Skills: she is nervous and very submissive. She loves climbing.
Important Notes: blind

[Arcaii]

Image/Description:
Name: Ambertail
Gender: F
Clan: Fallencln (clan of fallen leaves)
Rank: Deputy
Personality/Skills: she is nervous and very submissive. She loves climbing.
Important Notes: blind

I'm so sorry for the wait. I think I'll be taking another hiatus off of this thread to work on the Let's Read and other biz. Once I'm done with your review, of course!

Name Type: Canonical
Name Reasoning: Amber-'s already up on the front page, so I won't cover it in depth, but basically I don't recommend it. Her suffix fits her just fine, though.
Alternate Name: The cat's coloring gave me a little trouble (at first I thought it was brown, then grey, then tortie), but I've ultimately decided on using grey-brown names: Pipit-tail/Pheasant-tail. Both prefixes imply a grey-brown tabby with a white underbelly, and her suffix remains as it is.

Character Assessment: There isn't really much here to judge - the only thing I can say is that I'm not sure how she's a good climber or even likes climbing if she's blind.
Character Suggestions: More development, for realsies. If you need help, try this or this.

[taikunfoo]

I'm back yet again

Image/Description: Red-brown tabby she-cat with amber eyes and a nicked ear and scarred shoulder
Name: Amber
Gender: Female
Clan: n/a
Rank: n/a (will wind up being a deputy)
Personality/Skills: Somewhat reserved, Amber has relied on herself most of her life. She is an okay hunter, but always manages to bring in something to feed herself. She has seen her fair share of battles, and is a good fighter. She is mature, and proposes realistic options, thinking her ideas through before suggesting them to others. Amber is learning to rely on other cats to help her out, and this has caused a few cooperative problems. She needs to work on her skills directing other cats and conveying her ideas to others.
Important Notes: (looking for a suffix, possibly another prefix) Amber is currently a rogue, which is why she doesn't have a warrior name. I was considering changing her name to something that suits her a bit better, hopefully before she settles into clan life. She also favors her left leg a bit, due to an old injury (scarred shoulder)

[Cuervo]

Heh heh! I just used the warrior-generator and got this,

Earnest molly medicine cat with a long-haired black pelt; good at detecting lies and loves to use metaphors.

I thing Im going to use this one.

[trees |-/]

Can we use our own form?)

[.kestral]

Can we use our own form?)

You might want to re-read the front page. Particularly the massive bold bit above the form.

[trees |-/]

Can we use our own form?)

You might want to re-read the front page. Particularly the massive bold bit above the form.

Thank you, Sorry i didnt read the front page as i had used this form before

[.kestral]

No problem. Sorry if I came across as rude. I was going to quote it but I'm on my mobile and it wouldn't let me