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Redline by Larkspur1678

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Redline

Postby Larkspur1678 » Wed Jan 21, 2015 8:47 am

First of all, I love your drawing style x3 Now for the redline, i'll list some things I noticed below.

- Neck was too long. The legs should have been closer to the head and you seemed to be missing a chest.
- Too skinny. Most canines, including foxes, just aren't quite that skinny. Most are actually a bit hefty.
- Back legs a tad too long(adding a ground line helps with that) and on a weird angle. Canine legs should be more upright.
- Dew claws should face eachother. The right one was also just a tad too high.
- Fox tails are rounded, not pointy like most canines.

It's a great start though, keep going!
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Re: Redline

Postby Kodian » Thu Jan 22, 2015 2:29 am

Haha, thanks, but that 'dew claw' on the left leg wasn't actually a dew claw. I saw some artists do that too when drawing paws. See how http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?t=2481669 there's a shadow under the paws. Yeah, something like that. Thanks for helping me though :D
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Re: Redline

Postby Larkspur1678 » Thu Jan 22, 2015 6:50 am

Ahh, sorry. I think what youre reffering to is a 'thumb' and is pretty much and extra pad on the back of the front legs just above the paw.
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Re: Redline

Postby Kodian » Fri Jan 23, 2015 1:46 am

No, no, that's not the dew claw or thumb. I know what a dew claw is. That's not a pad either. That's just a shadowing of some kind when the canine stands and then- yeah I shouldn't have put it anyway because he isn't standing straight anyway. My mistake.
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